The Call of Destiny - AdiYa FF - Updated Chapters 4 & 5

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Akshita Taneja

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Posted: 7 years ago

#141

Loved reading what you have going on in the story so far! I love how you include both funny and emotional moments 😳

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Aaradhaya1688

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Posted: 7 years ago

#142

Awesome

Loving it

Thanks for the pm

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Binzzz

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Posted: 7 years ago

#143

Chapter 1

Awesome chapter Aish...

Yash was shot by Adi n he resigned from his job for Zoya..

He was such an amazing police officer...it was his bad luck to shot Yash...

Zoya was very excited for her marriage..n destiny chose something else for her...

N I loved the mehendi part...where Y replaced by A...

Zoya tried to commit suicide n Adi is saving her...

Totally loved the chapter...

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Binzzz

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Posted: 7 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: --Aishwarya--

Heyyy!!

Of course I remember you!!! I am fine...how are you doing?? Glad to see you here and your comment in my FF after long!! 😊 Looking forward to your comments in this...and hoping to look your around here more now!!

Heyy...

M fine dear.. Of course I will be here to comment in your story...

Actually m very happy to see one of my fav writer here...

N m loving this track very much yaar ...

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

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Posted: 7 years ago

#145

Chapter 2

Thank God...she has a flat in Mumbai...

Haha..Adi thought Zoya is following him...

It was really fun...

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

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Posted: 7 years ago

#146

Finally I completed all 3 chapters...

Zoya's entry to adi's house was funny...

N all misunderstandings are cleared...

Loved arjun -Zoya scenes too...

Adi having dreams about Zoya..it's very interesting..

Zoya got motivation from Adi...

Waiting for more..update soon...

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Asif

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Posted: 7 years ago

#147

Awesome update dear
Arjun helped zoya.
Adiya encounter was nice
His words to zoya in balcony, encourage her to follow her mission.
Arjun Aditya scene was funny, hit by truck in dreams & in actual, hit by his brother.
Waiting for next update soon
Thanks for pm