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Posted: 1 years ago
#11

please check part2.

thank u.


Originally posted by: kavitha_r

Congratulations for your first fairy take fanfiction. Valak and Pataali forcing Ranav to marry was like typical Indian parents prescribing their children to get married. Ranav agreeing to marry to retain his powers is like a compromise. Ranav proposing to Sofia and the latter agreeing to marry him on a condition to give her shelter reminded me of pardes movie where the girl agrees to stay in her fiance's house. Good that Ranav, Valak, and Pataali allowed Sofia to stay with them. Sofia playing in the rain and getting wet looked like Kashish enjoying the rain. I wonder who told Sofia that she won't get fever regardless how much time she spends playing in the rain.

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Posted: 1 years ago
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It was a frog who said he will protect Sofia? But how can hespeak? How is he named Raghav? Hilarious. Yamini taunting Sofia was irritating.Patali being nice to Sofia is good. Ranav is so irritated by Sofia. Are they shapeshifting frogs? Why would they be harmed? Surprised to see niti taylor. Raghav Prachiscene was cute. Sofia saying that she’s destined to marry a frog prince and thatshe doesn’t minds marrying a demon if he’s good at heart was striking. Sofia istoo much into frogs. Ranav is so cute. Glad that though fake, RanIa got engaged.Before also there was a demon in Sofia’s life? Strange. Ranav not being able tosee Sofia in danger was sweet. Ranav feeling attracted towards Sofia and she feelingsecure in his arms was nice. Bet Patali saw Sofia transforming into a frog. Perfectpics. Waiting for next.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#13

Ha ha.The frog has a name and it can speak as its a shape shifting frog.

Yes Raghav Prachi are shape shifting frogs.



Originally posted by: salley145

It was a frog who said he will protect Sofia? But how can hespeak? How is he named Raghav? Hilarious. Yamini taunting Sofia was irritating.Patali being nice to Sofia is good. Ranav is so irritated by Sofia. Are they shapeshifting frogs? Why would they be harmed? Surprised to see niti taylor. Raghav Prachiscene was cute. Sofia saying that she’s destined to marry a frog prince and thatshe doesn’t minds marrying a demon if he’s good at heart was striking. Sofia istoo much into frogs. Ranav is so cute. Glad that though fake, RanIa got engaged.Before also there was a demon in Sofia’s life? Strange. Ranav not being able tosee Sofia in danger was sweet. Ranav feeling attracted towards Sofia and she feelingsecure in his arms was nice. Bet Patali saw Sofia transforming into a frog. Perfectpics. Waiting for next.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#14

Surprised that Raghav and Prachi are frogs in this ff. Loved the bonding of those frogs with Sofia. Yamini's taunts were irritating but glad that Pataali shut her up and gave Sofia the leeway to have whatever she wants. Sofia telling Ranav that she believes in living in the present was an apt reply to his reminder about their two months contract marriage.The song during their engagement was romantic. Seems that both have fallen in unrealized love as both are attracted to each other. Pataali saw Sofia changing herself into a frog. Waiting for the next update.

Edited by kavitha_r - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
#15

Part 2


Fabulous and so Lovely Update


Ranav and Sofia is falling in love yet he has no idea

he is the one always protecting her

but then he reminds her and himself that soon she will leave

oh her friends are so cute and caring

I like how they change into frogs

what did Pataali see surely it's something strange about Sofia

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Posted: 1 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Thank you Salley,taahir,khwaishfan,glitter_goldie.



Quaint Part 2

Sofia:Will I get fever if I get drenched more?

Suddenly she heard a voice:You will not catch fever.I will protect you.

She looked at that person.It was a huge frog.Sofia smiled.

It covered Sofia with a large leaf like a shield.Sofia smiled.

Suddenly she became dull.

Sofia:Raghav...you leave.If anyone sees us like this,I will be thrown out.I will be homeless.

The frog Raghav said:Ok.I will leave now.Take care of yourself.

Sofia:Yes.

The frog left from there.

Sofia ran to her room.




The dining table was arranged grandly.

Sofia was amazed by it.

Sofia:Wow!What a grand dining table and what all dishes!

Yamini said in a sarcastic tone:Guess you have not eaten good food ever.So you are excited.

Sofia became dull.

Pataali:Yamini...will you please shut up?Sofia...you can eat anything which you want.

Sofia smiled:Thank you aunty.

Sofia started eating like crazy.

Ranav felt weird while Yamini felt like laughing.

After everyone left the dining room Ranav confronted Sofia.

Ranav:Sofia...you were eating too much.

Sofia:The food was so tasty that I could not control myself.

Ranav:You need to control yourself.Because after 2 months you will have to leave.So don't get used to such expensive food.

Sofia:Till I leave I can eat well.Right?I believe in enjoying the present.

Ranav got irritated.

Ranav thought:I hope she does'nt get used to all comforts and refuse to leave.




Sofia went to the Church and prayed:Jesus!Thank you for giving me a safe place to protect myself.

2 frogs jumped towards Sofia.

Sofia looked at them.They turned into human beings.

Sofia smiled:Raghav!Prachi!I am surprised to see both of you here.

Raghav:How can we not follow you?We are best friends.

Sofia smiled.

Sofia:I have only both of you.

Sofia became emotional.

Raghav and Prachi became upset.

Raghav:Don't be upset Sofia.We are there for you.

Sofia:That's the only blessing I have.But I am worried whether you both will be harmed for being with me.

Prachi:Don't worry about that Sofia.We will protect ourselves.But Sofia..you are staying with a family now.Are you safe there?

Sofia:100 percent.That's why I got ready to stay with them.I have been working for them since past few months.So I know them quite well.They are nice.

Raghav:But what if they are double faced and shady?

Prachi:I am also worried about that.So be careful Sofia.

Sofia:Yes.I will be careful.

Raghav and Prachi smiled.





Raghav and Prachi were sitting together.

Prachi:I feel so nice to see Sofia.I am relieved that she is safe and happy now.

Raghav:Ya.She looks happier now.Maybe the people around her are making her happy.

Prachi:I also think so.

They kept talking and Prachi felt sleepy.She laid her head on Raghav's lap.

Raghav caressed her head lovingly.





Sofia was watching the cartoon 'The Frog Prince'.Ranav felt like laughing.

Ranav:That day when you were jumping in the puddle itself I found you childish.Now after seeing you watch cartoon I can confirm that you are a child.

Sofia:I am not a child.I am watching this cartoon to see the frog prince.He is so handsome.

Ranav laughed.

Ranav:You find this frog handsome?Then marry a frog.

Sofia walked towards Ranav and stared at him.

Sofia:If I am destined to marry a frog Prince I will marry him.I don't even mind marrying a demon if he is good at heart.

Ranav was stunned.

They shared an eye lock.

Ranav and Sofia realised how close they were standing to each other.They moved away from each other.

Ranav thought:Does she know that I am a demon?No way.If she knows that I am a demon she won't stay here.

Ranav:Why did you say that you will even marry a demon as if I am demon?

Sofia:When did I say that you are a demon?With you I am only doing contract marriage.I just said that I can marry any creature if they are good at heart.

Ranav was relieved.





Ranav got ready to go out.

Sofia smiled at him.

Ranav asked her in a rough tone:Why are you smiling at me?

Sofia:You are looking handsome like the Frog Prince.

Ranav could not believe that Sofia admired his looks.

Ranav:What?

Sofia:You look very handsome Ranav.

Ranav:I know that I am handsome.But why the hell did you compare me to a frog?

Sofia:Because I like frogs.

Ranav:It's the first time I am seeing a fan girl of frogs.Strange!

Sofia:That Sofia.

Sofia smiled winking at him and said:And you are too cute like a frog Ranav.

Unknowingly Ranav smiled.

He thought:She is crazy,but cute.




They arranged Ranav and Sofia's engagement.

Sofia wore a western dress as she is a Christian.

Raghav and Prachi came there.

Sofia:Ranav,they are my best friends Raghav and Prachi.They are a couple.

Ranav:Nice to meet you both.

Raghav-Prachi:All the best for the future.

Ranav:Thank you.

Ranav-Sofia exchanged rings.

They played music.

Ranav and Sofia started dancing together.During the dance unknowingly they got attracted towards each other and blushed.

Tu Mera Koi Na Hoke Bhi Kuch Lage
Tu Mera Koi Na Hoke Bhi Kuch Lage
Kiya Re Jo Bhi Tune Kaise Kiya Re

Jiya Ko Mere Bandh Aise Liya Re
Samajh Ke Bhi Na Main Samajh Saku

Savero Ka Tu Mere Suraj Lage
Tu Mera Koi Na Hoke Bhi Kuch Lage

Tu Mera Koi Na Hoke Bhi Kuch Lage
Tu Mera Koi Na Hoke Bhi Kuch Lage

Apna Bana Le Piya
Apna Bana Le Piya

Apna Bana Le Mujhe
Apna Bana Le Piya

Apna Bana Le Piya
Apna Bana Le Piya

Dil Ke Nagar Me
Sheher Tu Basa Le Piya

Chhune Se Tere Han Tere Han Tere
Pheeki Ruto Rang Lage

Chhune Se Tere Han Tere Han Tere
Pheeki Ruto Rang Lage

Teri Disha Mein Kyun Chalne Se Mere
Pairo Ko Pankh Lage

Hai Na Mere Kam Ka Jag Sara
Hai Bas Tere Nam Se Hi Guzara
Ulajh Ke Main Na Sulajh Saku

Jubaniya Teri Jhuthi Bhi Sachi Lage
Tu Mera Koi Na Hoke Bhi Kuch Lage

Tu Mera Koi Na Hoke Bhi Kuch Lage
Tu Mera Koi Na Hoke Bhi Kuch Lage

Apna Bana Le Piya
Apna Bana Le Piya

Apna Bana Le Mujhe
Apna Bana Le Piya

Apna Bana Le Piya
Apna Bana Le Piya

Dil Ke Nagar Mein
Sheher Tu Basa Le Piya

O Sab Kuch Mera Chahe
Naam Apne Likha Le

Badle Me Apni Yari Nibha Le
Jag Ki Hirasat Se Mujhko Chhuda Le

Apna Bana Le
Bas Apna Bana Le

Apna Bana Le
Apna Bana Le(Bhediya).

Raghav and Prachi were closely observing them.

Prachi:Raghav,don't you think that there is a spark between Ranav and Sofia?

Raghav:I also noticed it.If they really love each other it's nice.Our Sofia will be safe forever.

Prachi:Yes.I hope that demon does not come back and spoil Sofia's happy life.

Raghav:Yes.I also hope so.

Sofia was in the kitchen.

Sofia:God knows how to cook.

Sofia lit the gas strove with the match stick and threw it down.

The fire started spreading it and Sofia's dress was about to catch fire.Suddenly Ranav came and pushed her away from the fire.

Ranav:Be careful Sofia.The fire would have eaten you up.

Sofia was shocked.She remembered the blunder of throwing away the match stick.

Ranav:When you don't know kitchen work why are you even trying it?

Sofia:I thought of trying it out of curiosity. I am sorry.

Ranav:Nonsense!

Ranav poured water into it and the fire vanished.

Sofia:Ranav...thank you for saving me.

Ranav smiled.

Ranav thought:I saved you because I can't imagine you to be in danger.I saved you for myself.





Sofia was walking.Her leg tripped and before she fell down Ranav caught her.

They got lost in each other's eyes.

Ranav thought:Something in Sofia is attracting me towards her.But I should control myself as it's only a marriage contract between us.

Ranav released her from her hand.

Sofia became emotional.

She thought:I feel so secure in Ranav's arms.He makes me wish to be in his arms forever.But I should not think like that as ours is only contract marriage.

Ranav:What are you thinking Sofia?

Sofia:Nothing Ranav.

Sofia walked away.

Ranav thought:Why do I feel that Sofia is hiding something?I maybe thinking too much.




Pataali bought a necklace for Sofia to wear for the wedding.To show it to her,Pataali walked to Sofia's room.On the way she saw Sofia walking towards the swimming pool.Pataali followed her there.What she saw there shocked her.


Surprised to see Raghav and Prachi as frogs. Sad that Yamini taunted Sofia, but nice to see Pataali shutting her up.


Sofia gave an apt reply when Ranav told her that she should not get used to expensive food.


Ranav-Sophia conversation on frog prince is cute. Sophia told Ranav that she won't mind marrying a good-hearted demon stunned and relieved Ranav.


Their engagement dance was romantic. Looks like they fell in love with each other which the couple didn't realize.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#17

Quaint Part 3

The credit for the edits goes to the unknown real editors.

I dedicate this chapter to Salley who gave a jodi name to Ranav-Sofia-RanIa.



Pataali saw Sofia turning into a giant frog and drinking water from the swimming pool.

The frog Sofia:I feel so nice to take my real form after a long time.

Pataali got angry and called her:Sofia!

Sofia took her human form and looked at Pataali with a shock and fear.

Pataali:You are a frog?

Sofia was silent.

Pataali:You hide it from us because you have a bad intention.Right?What's your intention?To harm my Ranav?I will not allow you to harm my Ranav.I will finish you before that.

Pataali's eyes started glowing.Sofia was shocked.

Pataali's size started becoming huge and her teeth became larger and sharper.Sofia got scared.

Sofia murmured:Pataali aunty is huge with fang like teeth.She is a scary Rakshasi.

Suddenly somebody called Pataali.

"Maa".

Pataali turned back,It was Ranav.

Ranav:Why are you attacking Sofia?To fulfill your hunger and thurst you got only my fiancee?

I never expected this from you Maa.

Pataali turned into a human again.

Pataali:Ranav,you are misunderstanding me.

Valak and Yamini came there hearing the sound.

Yamini:What is happening here?

Ranav:Maa tried to eat up Sofia.

They were shocked.

Yamini:Why Maa?I was tempted to eat Sofia.But still I controlled myself as she is my brother's fiancee.But you...the love which you showed her was fake?

Valak:I never expected this from you Pataali.

Pataali got angry:Stop it and listen to me.This girl is not as innocent as you think.She is not a human being,but a frog.

They were shocked.

Valak:Are you mad Pataali?

Ranav remembered Sofia jumping in the puddle like a frog and her fascination towards frogs.

Ranav got confused.

He thought:Is Maa saying the truth?

Sofia:Please don't fight because of me.Pataali aunty is right.I am a shape shifting frog.

They all were shocked.

Pataali:See...she herself admitted it.Tell me Sofia...why you want to harm us?What's your intention?

Sofia:Like you think I don't have any such bad intention.I can't even think of harming all of you who loved me very much.Ranav is my saviour.Then how can I think of harming him?

Pataali:Then why are you staying here hiding your identity?

Sofia:To protect myself.

Ranav:To protect yourself?

Sofia:Yes Ranav.

Pataali:Why do you need our help to protect yourself when the enemies will run away scared seeing your huge size?You are not less than a dinosaur.

Sofia:But in front a demon I am helpless.You know that Pataali Maa.

Ranav:Sofia...tell us what exactly happened in your life.

Sofia:I belong to the frog family in the jungle.Raghav and Prachi are my friends.

Since our parents were very nice once a fairy appeared infront of us.




Flash back...

A fairy appeared infront of them.

Fairy:I am RajPari Devika.I noticed that sime of the animals here as as divine and pure as fairies.So I am here to bless you all with some powers.The children of the good hearted animals will have the power to take human forms.They will be having huge strength also.

The good animals were very happy.

Thus Sofia,Raghav and Prachi became shape shifting frogs.

Present...

Sofia:The life was going good until a Rakshas named Ansh entered our jungle.He killed many innocent animals to fulfill his hunger.All were scared of Ansh.




Flash back...

Accidentally Ansh saw Sofia and got attracted towards her.

Once Ansh proposed Sofia:For the first time I have been in love.I want to marry you.

Sofia was shocked.

Sofia:A rakshas like you can never love anyone.You are too brutal to marry someone.I can't marry a demon.

Ansh got very angry.




Present...

Sofia:Ansh got so angry that he killed my parents.Since Raghav and Prachi tried to save me from him,he killed his parents also.

Sofia was in tears.

Ranav felt sad for her.

Sofia:Once he kidnapped me.




Flash back...

Sofia:Why are you doing this to me?Why are you so cruel to me.You snatched my family from me.I can never love you.Leave me.

Ansh:Never!You are mine and I will make you mine.

Sofia was shattered.



Present....

Sofia:In Ansh's absence,Raghav and Prachi saved me.We both came to the city to hide from Ansh.But we have no financial stability to live in the human world.That's why I started working and agreed to marry Ranav.

She whispered to Ranav:Ranav,I demanded to stay in your house for safety.I thought taking money from you,I can stay in my own home hiding from Ansh.

Ranav became emotional.

Sofia:Please trust me all of you.I don't have any other bad intention.

All of them felt sad.

Ranav:I trust you.Now you understood that we all are demons.Don't think that I will be like Ansh.Though I am a demon I am not a bad demon.

Sofia said emotionally:I know that Ranav.I trust you.

Ranav:I promise you that I will protect you from Ansh.

Sofia and Ranav shared an emotional eye lock.

Valak,Pataali and Yamini looked at them emotionally.

Sofia went out.Somebody kidnapped her.

Prachi felt some strangeness.

Prachi:Raghav...why do I feel strange?Is Sofia in danger?

Raghav held her hand and said:Don't be upset Prachi.I am sure that she is safe in Ranav's hands.

Prachi:But my mind is not able to believe it.I feel disturbed.I think Sofia needs us.

Raghav:Then we will go to the jungle now itself.If Sofia is in danger,we have to be there.Definitely Ansh will be there.

Prachi nodded.




Raghav and Prachi went to the jungle.They were scared and shocked to see Ansh in the demon form.

He was holding Sofia.

Raghav and Prachi took their giant frog form to attack Ansh.Ansh laughed and pushed them with full strength.They fell down injured.

Sofia cried:Please leave them.

Ansh laughed.

Sofia took her frog form.

Ansh laughed and said:Sofia...you know very well that you can't defeat a demon like me even though you are huge in size.Then why?

Sofia turned into a human and cried.

Ansh:You better surrender Sofia if you want your friends to be safe.

He smirked.

Sofia felt sad.

Ansh took his human form and moved towards Sofia romantically.Sofia felt disgusted.Suddenly someone kicked him.He turned back and looked at him.It was Ranav.

Ranav:Leave Sofia.Sofia does not love you.

Ansh got angry:Who are you to say that?

Ranav:I am Sofia's well wisher.

Ansh:Just get away.You don't know who I am.An ordinary human being like you cannot defeat me.

Ranav smirked and turned into a demon.

Ansh was shocked.

Ansh took his demon form and jumped upon Ranav.Sofia got scared.

Ranav attacked him back with full force shocking him.Sofia was tensed.

But seeing Ranav overpowering Ansh she was relieved.

She ran towards Raghav and Prachi who were lying down.

Sofia wept.
Sofia:Hey God...please save Raghav and Prachi.I beg of you.

Surprisingly the fairy Devika appeared before her.

Devika:God heard your prayer and sent you to cure them.

Sofia was relieved.

Devika healed their wounds with her magical power.

Raghav and Prachi got up.

The trio thanked Devika:Thank you Rajpari for saving us.

Devika smiled and disappeared.

Ranav and Ansh were attacking each other.Ansh fell down weak.They all smiled.

Ranav:You thought you can easily take away Sofia from me?Never!Ranav won't allow it.

Raghav,Prachi and Sofia smiled.

Raghav:Sofia..you are right.You are safe when Ranav is around you.

Prachi:He is a demon with angel's heart.

Sofia smiled.

Prachi:I also feel that he loves you.

Raghav:Yes Sofia.He loves you.

Sofia became emotional.

Suddenly a woman came there with a lion.

All the animals,Raghav,Prachi and Sofia folded their hands:Good evening Queen Liza.

She was Queen Liza;who was the Queen of the Jungle.She is a shape shifting lioness who was blessed with powers by Rajpari Devika.

Suddenly Ansh got up and jumped upon Ranav shocking everyone.

Ansh:You thought I can be defeated easily?Never!

Ansh laughed.

Suddenly Liza turned into a giant lioness and bit him hard.Ansh moaned in pain.

Liza:Being the Queen of this Jungle,how can I leave you when you tried to harm the people of our Jungle?You destroyed so many lives here.That time I could not do anything.But I can't tolerate you anymore.I will protect the people of my Jungle.

Liza tore his body into pieces with her sharp teeth.All wild animals came to eat up his body parts.

Raghav,Prachi,Sofia and Ranav were stunned to see it.

Sofia and Ranav looked at each other.

Sofia:Ranav!Thank you very much for saving me from that heartless Rakshas!

Ranav pulled her closer and asked her:Are you alright Sofia?

Sofia:You protected me.Then what can happen to me?

He smiled emotionally.

Suddenly they realised their position with awkwardness and moved away from each other.




Sofia was packing her bags to go.Raghav and Prachi were sitting and waiting there.

Prachi:I never thought that Sofia will take the decision to come along with us after seeing Ranav's care for her.

Raghav:Just wait and watch Prachi.Ranav won't let her leave with him.He really loves her.Once Sofia gets sure that Ranav loves her she will drop her plan to leave Ranav.

Prachi smiled.

Sofia finished packing and went to the verandah with Raghav and Prachi.

Suddenly Ranav called her:Sofia!

Sofia looked at him emotionally.

Ranav asked her painfully:Have you decided to go Sofia?

Sofia:I came here to escape from Ansh.Ansh is no more.So it's better to leave.Right?You should marry a nice girl instead of doing a contract marriage.

Ranav:You said you can even marry a demon if he is good.Will you marry me Sofia?I really fell in love with you.

Sofia was emotional and surprised.

Sofia held his hand and said:I really wished to hear this from you Ranav.I also love you.

They became so happy that they embraced each other emotionally.

Ranav:Promise me Sofia that you will never leave me and go.

Sofia:I promise you Ranav.I will never leave you.

She looked at the moon and said:I swear by the moon.

Raghav,Prachi,Valak,Patali and Yamini smiled.




Ranav and Sofia got married.

Not only Ranav's family,Raghav and Prachi,but the jungle shape shifting animals also attended the wedding.

The Jungle Queen Liza wished them:Wish you both a very happy married life.Sofia is the most loved animal of our Jungle.Please take care of her.

Ranav:Sure Raniji.I will also take care of my Sofia.She is my life.

She and sofia smiled.

Ranav and Sofia lived happily.

The End.

Thank you very much for supporting this SS.Please give a detailed comment on this part.Please write your favourite scenes,favourute pair,favourite character and why you liked that character the most.


Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
#18

Very interesting update dear 🙂

Just loved it 🤗

Thanks for the PM 😃

Continue soon 🤗

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#19

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Quaint Part 3

The credit for the edits goes to the unknown real editors.

Pataali saw Sofia turning into a giant frog and drinking water from the swimming pool.

The frog Sofia:I feel so nice to take my real form after a long time.

Pataali got angry and called her:Sofia!

Sofia took her human form and looked at Pataali with a shock and fear.

Pataali:You are a frog?

Sofia was silent.

Pataali:You hide it from us because you have a bad intention.Right?What's your intention?To harm my Ranav?I will not allow you to harm my Ranav.I will finish you before that.

Pataali's eyes started glowing.Sofia was shocked.

Pataali's size started becoming huge and her teeth became larger and sharper.Sofia got scared.

Sofia murmured:Pataali aunty is huge with fang like teeth.She is a scary Rakshasi.

Suddenly somebody called Pataali.

"Maa".

Pataali turned back,It was Ranav.

Ranav:Why are you attacking Sofia?To fulfill your hunger and thurst you got only my fiancee?

I never expected this from you Maa.

Pataali turned into a human again.

Pataali:Ranav,you are misunderstanding me.

Valak and Yamini came there hearing the sound.

Yamini:What is happening here?

Ranav:Maa tried to eat up Sofia.

They were shocked.

Yamini:Why Maa?I was tempted to eat Sofia.But still I controlled myself as she is my brother's fiancee.But you...the love which you showed her was fake?

Valak:I never expected this from you Pataali.

Pataali got angry:Stop it and listen to me.This girl is not as innocent as you think.She is not a human being,but a frog.

They were shocked.

Valak:Are you mad Pataali?

Ranav remembered Sofia jumping in the puddle like a frog and her fascination towards frogs.

Ranav got confused.

He thought:Is Maa saying the truth?

Sofia:Please don't fight because of me.Pataali aunty is right.I am a shape shifting frog.

They all were shocked.

Pataali:See...she herself admitted it.Tell me Sofia...why you want to harm us?What's your intention?

Sofia:Like you think I don't have any such bad intention.I can't even think of harming all of you who loved me very much.Ranav is my saviour.Then how can I think of harming him?

Pataali:Then why are you staying here hiding your identity?

Sofia:To protect myself.

Ranav:To protect yourself?

Sofia:Yes Ranav.

Pataali:Why do you need our help to protect yourself when the enemies will run away scared seeing your huge size?You are not less than a dinosaur.

Sofia:But in front a demon I am helpless.You know that Pataali Maa.

Ranav:Sofia...tell us what exactly happened in your life.

Sofia:I belong to the frog family in the jungle.Raghav and Prachi are my friends.

Since our parents were very nice once a fairy appeared infront of us.



Flash back...

A fairy appeared infront of them.

Fairy:I am RajPari Devika.I noticed that sime of the animals here as as divine and pure as fairies.So I am here to bless you all with some powers.The children of the good hearted animals will have the power to take human forms.They will be having huge strength also.

The good animals were very happy.

Thus Sofia,Raghav and Prachi became shape shifting frogs.



Present...

Sofia:The life was going good until a Rakshas named Ansh entered our jungle.He killed many innocent animals to fulfill his hunger.All were scared of Ansh.



Flash back...

Accidentally Ansh saw Sofia and got attracted towards her.

Once Ansh proposed Sofia:For the first time I have been in love.I want to marry you.

Sofia was shocked.

Sofia:A rakshas like you can never love anyone.You are too brutal to marry someone.I can't marry a demon.

Ansh got very angry.



Present...

Sofia:Ansh got so angry that he killed my parents.Since Raghav and Prachi tried to save me from him,he killed his parents also.

Sofia was in tears.

Ranav felt sad for her.

Sofia:Once he kidnapped me.



Flash back...

Sofia:Why are you doing this to me?Why are you so cruel to me.You snatched my family from me.I can never love you.Leave me.

Ansh:Never!You are mine and I will make you mine.

Sofia was shattered.




Present....

Sofia:In Ansh's absence,Raghav and Prachi saved me.We both came to the city to hide from Ansh.But we have no financial stability to live in the human world.That's why I started working and agreed to marry Ranav.

She whispered to Ranav:Ranav,I demanded to stay in your house for safety.I thought taking money from you,I can stay in my own home hiding from Ansh.

Ranav became emotional.

Sofia:Please trust me all of you.I don't have any other bad intention.

All of them felt sad.

Ranav:I trust you.Now you understood that we all are demons.Don't think that I will be like Ansh.Though I am a demon I am not a bad demon.

Sofia said emotionally:I know that Ranav.I trust you.

Ranav:I promise you that I will protect you from Ansh.

Sofia and Ranav shared an emotional eye lock.




Valak,Pataali and Yamini looked at them emotionally.

Sofia went out.Somebody kidnapped her.




Prachi felt some strangeness.

Prachi:Raghav...why do I feel strange?Is Sofia in danger?

Raghav held her hand and said:Don't be upset Prachi.I am sure that she is safe in Ranav's hands.

Prachi:But my mind is not able to believe it.I feel disturbed.I think Sofia needs us.

Raghav:Then we will go to the jungle now itself.If Sofia is in danger,we have to be there.Definitely Ansh will be there.

Prachi nodded.




Raghav and Prachi went to the jungle.They were scared and shocked to see Ansh in the demon form.

He was holding Sofia.

Raghav and Prachi took their giant frog form to attack Ansh.Ansh laughed and pushed them with full strength.They fell down injured.

Sofia cried:Please leave them.

Ansh laughed.

Sofia took her frog form.

Ansh laughed and said:Sofia...you know very well that you can't defeat a demon like me even though you are huge in size.Then why?

Sofia turned into a human and cried.

Ansh:You better surrender Sofia if you want your friends to be safe.

He smirked.

Sofia felt sad.

Ansh took his human form and moved towards Sofia romantically.Sofia felt disgusted.Suddenly someone kicked him.He turned back and looked at him.It was Ranav.

Ranav:Leave Sofia.Sofia does not love you.

Ansh got angry:Who are you to say that?

Ranav:I am Sofia's well wisher.

Ansh:Just get away.You don't know who I am.An ordinary human being like you cannot defeat me.

Ranav smirked and turned into a demon.

Ansh was shocked.

Ansh took his demon form and jumped upon Ranav.Sofia got scared.

Ranav attacked him back with full force shocking him.Sofia was tensed.

But seeing Ranav overpowering Ansh she was relieved.

She ran towards Raghav and Prachi who were lying down.

Sofia wept.
Sofia:Hey God...please save Raghav and Prachi.I beg of you.

Surprisingly the fairy Devika appeared before her.

Devika:God heard your prayer and sent you to cure them.

Sofia was relieved.

Devika healed their wounds with her magical power.

Raghav and Prachi got up.

The trio thanked Devika:Thank you Rajpari for saving us.

Devika smiled and disappeared.

Ranav and Ansh were attacking each other.Ansh fell down weak.They all smiled.

Ranav:You thought you can easily take away Sofia from me?Never!Ranav won't allow it.

Raghav,Prachi and Sofia smiled.

Raghav:Sofia..you are right.You are safe when Ranav is around you.

Prachi:He is a demon with angel's heart.

Sofia smiled.

Prachi:I also feel that he loves you.

Raghav:Yes Sofia.He loves you.

Sofia became emotional.

Suddenly a woman came there with a lion.

All the animals,Raghav,Prachi and Sofia folded their hands:Good evening Queen Liza.

She was Queen Liza;who was the Queen of the Jungle.She is a shape shifting lioness who was blessed with powers by Rajpari Devika.

Suddenly Ansh got up and jumped upon Ranav shocking everyone.

Ansh:You thought I can be defeated easily?Never!

Ansh laughed.

Suddenly Liza turned into a giant lioness and bit him hard.Ansh moaned in pain.

Liza:Being the Queen of this Jungle,how can I leave you when you tried to harm the people of our Jungle?You destroyed so many lives here.That time I could not do anything.But I can't tolerate you anymore.I will protect the people of my Jungle.

Liza tore his body into pieces with her sharp teeth.All wild animals came to eat up his body parts.

Raghav,Prachi,Sofia and Ranav were stunned to see it.

Sofia and Ranav looked at each other.

Sofia:Ranav!Thank you very much for saving me from that heartless Rakshas!

Ranav pulled her closer and asked her:Are you alright Sofia?

Sofia:You protected me.Then what can happen to me?

He smiled emotionally.

Suddenly they realised their position with awkwardness and moved away from each other.



Sofia was packing her bags to go.Raghav and Prachi were sitting and waiting there.

Prachi:I never thought that Sofia will take the decision to come along with us after seeing Ranav's care for her.

Raghav:Just wait and watch Prachi.Ranav won't let her leave with him.He really loves her.Once Sofia gets sure that Ranav loves her she will drop her plan to leave Ranav.

Prachi smiled.

Sofia finished packing and went to the verandah with Raghav and Prachi.

Suddenly Ranav called her:Sofia!

Sofia looked at him emotionally.

Ranav asked her painfully:Have you decided to go Sofia?

Sofia:I came here to escape from Ansh.Ansh is no more.So it's better to leave.Right?You should marry a nice girl instead of doing a contract marriage.

Ranav:You said you can even marry a demon if he is good.Will you marry me Sofia?I really fell in love with you.

Sofia was emotional and surprised.

Sofia held his hand and said:I really wished to hear this from you Ranav.I also love you.

They became so happy that they embraced each other emotionally.

Ranav:Promise me Sofia that you will never leave me and go.

Sofia:I promise you Ranav.I will never leave you.

She looked at the moon and said:I swear by the moon.

Raghav,Prachi,Valak,Patali and Yamini smiled.




Ranav and Sofia got married.

Not only Ranav's family,Raghav and Prachi,but the jungle shape shifting animals also attended the wedding.

The Jungle Queen Liza wished them:Wish you both a very happy married life.Sofia is the most loved animal of our Jungle.Please take care of her.

Ranav:Sure Raniji.I will also take care of my Sofia.She is my life.

She and sofia smiled.

Ranav and Sofia lived happily.

The End.

Thank you very much for supporting this SS.Please give a detailed comment on this part.Please write your favourite scenes,favourute pair,favourite character and why you liked that character the most.

Sad that Pataali got wild and wanted to kill Sofia on knowing that she is a frog. But it was nice to see the entire family favoring Sofia after revealing all that happened. Ansh is so cheap that he abducted Sofia. Good to see that Ranav rescued Sofia. Devika healing Raghav and Prachi was nice. The jungle Queen killing Ansh was needed for the jungle. Ranav and Sofia's dialogues and love confession wS emotional.


Favourite scene: Sofia playing in the rain.

Favourite pair: Ranav and Sofia.

Favourite character: Devika angel. I like her because she is caring.

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