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Posted: 10 years ago
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The things inBlue are Zain's thoughts

Aaliya and Zubair Convo:(Zainn listening but without their notice)

Zubair-Aaliya,woh main sirf yeh batana chahta tha ki main jaa raha hun.Mamu -Mami ko bata dia tha.Bas sirf tumhe batana tha

Aaliya- Zubbu tum itni jaldi jaa rae ho? Please rukh jao na...

Arre,jaa raha hai na,jaane do usse MKB!!

Zubair-Aalu!!

I hate him calling her that.

Aaliya- Dekho tum mere nikkah mein bhi nahi aaye the.Tumhe rukhna padega,maine toh tumhe Mumbai dikhaya bhi nahi hai abhi tak.

What do you mean by,"Mumbai dikhaya bhi nahi hai abh tak" ! Woh 4 saal ka bacha thodi na hai,apne aap dekh lega! Zoobie Doobie!

Zubair- Hmm.Theek hi keh rahi ho tum.Maine toh Mumbai dekha hi nahi

Zain's eyes widened!!
Arre tum jao na Dubai,kebaab mein haddi. Mujhe meri wife ko batana hai ki main usse kitna pyaar karta hoon.

Aaliya-Theek hai toh phir,tum kal subah ready rehna,hum dono Mumbai dekhne chalenge.

HUM DONO?Bol toh aise rahi hai ki pura Mumbai dekha hua hai.Train Station ko chod kar aur dekha hi kya hai isne?!

Zubair-Theek hai! Tumse jeet kaun sakta hai. Main kal subah ready rahunga.Good night.

Ready rahunga!(Mimicking Zubbu) Pagal kahika

Aaliya- Good night.

Kuch toh karna padega.





Continue...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Aaliya - chalo ab tum so jaao good night!
Zubbu - bye alu...

Aaliya went back to her room

When she entered, there was a sudden grab on her petite waist... It was none other than zain
Zain - Han toh kal mauhtarma Zubbu ko Mumbai dekhaengi... *says while caressing her lips with his thumb sending shivers down her spine *
Aaliya - ha-an... *she whispered *but tum kyu puch rahe ho... Jealous huh??
Zain - huh... Jealous nd me?? *he tightens his hold on her*
Aaliya - of course Mr...
She was about to complete when zain suddenly smashed his lips upon hers...
Aaliya didn't responded in the first but joined at last, their kiss became passionate... It was Aaliya who broke the kiss due to the lack of oxygen... Both were breathing heavily.
Zain-aalya mujhe tumse kuch baat krni h? *he whispered *
Aaliya - haan toh bolo na...
Zain - wo... Wo... Wo.. I-i-i... I.. I
Aaliya - kya I - I bol rahe ho??.
Zain - I lo-..
He was about to complete tabhi Zubbu enters the room.
Zubbu - Allah tooba Allah tooba, *he said that aloud, seeing his hands on her waist nd hers on his neck, *sharam h ya NHi Tim done m?? Agr koi dekh let tog Yeh tum mere saamnw, 3 baar kr chuke ho ab thode too sharam khao...

Tabhi mamu enters... Continue
Guys I hv never wrote anything lyk that I mean in a grp so u can skip this part if u want... Ty annie
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
itna shohor kya horah ha miya?
Zain:dad mein or aliya baat kareh he theh aur zubbair achanak seh aya mujhe nahi pata kyu baar baar humareh kamreh mein aneh itna showk hai i mean its only me and aliya
zubbu: mamu...
mamu:miya if you dont take this the wrong way what do you find so intresting in their room that you always go there
zubbu:mamu wo mein alu seh kuch kehna that bas meri timing boori thi mujhe kiseh pata tha ki yeh dono...
Zain: dad mujhe neend arahi hai pata nahin kab yeh bak bak bund karinga
every one leaves except aliya
aliya:zain why were you so harsh and you made up lies
zain: theres one thing between us which isnt a lie
aliya: and whats that?
zain:yeh that I...I LOVE
aliya got happy but
aliya:hha zain bolo tum pyaar (wishing her name will come out)
chachi chachi its raining outside come with me
saif dragged aliya and zain trailing behind her
zain(perfect timing saif, ab mein zaroor bataunga aliya ko ki i lOVE HER)
zain:this is totally set its raining so romantic as the kids are going to be there i better bring my jacket tonight aliya (in a filmy voice) meri aashiqui tum se hi is live and your going to star init with with me
i knew this jacket will come in handy...

continue... urs sofia
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Saif drags Aaliya out to the terrace along wod Arub n Sana..
*all d kids*: Chachi chachi!! Aao na humare saath...yeh dekho kitni zor se baarish ho rhi hai..bahut maza aaye ga!
Aaliya: Nhi Saif..dekhi abhi raat ka waqt hai..aur agr tum teeno aise baarish mein nahaoge to tum sab ko sardi lg jayegi...aur kl tum sbka skool bhi hai na...to go to sleep...
*kids*: Chaaachiii!! Nooo...pls...bs 5 mins chachi promise...uske baad we all will go...
*Nafeesa comes there n says*: Chachi bilkul thi kkeh rhi hai..chlo baccho jldi se so jao kl school bhi jana bai tum sb ne...chlo chlo mere good babies...
*baccha party says sadly*:oook ammi...as u wish...good nite chachi sweet dreams! *n all of them kiss Aaliya n go to sleep*
*Aaliya goes near the terrace gate n finds a note lying there: Jo ab tak na keh saka woh ab keh duga... Jo ab tak na kr saka woh aaj kr duga.. Agr tum apne sabhi sawalo ka jawab chahti ho toh to room mein rakhi sari ko pehn kr bahr aa jana...tumhara intezaar rhe ga...
*Aaliya was all red reading the note...she went to her room n found a gorgeous backless low waist black saari which seemed as if it was crafted only for her as the saari managed to expose her body at perfect angles... Along with the saari was a beautiful ring with rose carved of rubies n emarlds on it... Aaliya while keeping minimal looked perfectly beautiful in her attire... Thinking of the possiblities to happen next she went out to the place according to the letter with an umbrella..soon she was in the garden of a beautiful cottage with lamps and lights hanging from all over...it looked as if thousands of fire lights were roaming in the garden...illuminating the place like a thousand stars...sweet fragrance of roses lit the place...a sudden gust of wind flew the umbrella away...exposing her to the sweet drops of love showering from above... Zain who was standing n watching this beutiful angel takin in the shower of rain was spellbound by her beauty n alabaster skin...the way her waist swayed along with the motion of perfectly sculpted legs n the way her saari was clinging to her petite frame was makin his hormones work a thousand times faster...he neared slowly towards her takin in her..drinkin in her sweet smell...slowly he came near her n whispered in her ear her name makin Aaliya to open her eyes...as soon as she opened her eyes the first thing she noticed was the burning desire in his eyes..the passion n the hurricane of emotions it held was hard to explain in words...with each nearing step intensified him sendin waves of chill through her body...soon Zain trapped her into a hug exploring her as soft as feather and milky bare back with his hands...he slowly planted a soft kiss on the left side..moving upwards he again whisoerd her name in her ear makin her greedy for more...unable to control himself he kissed her slowly as if there was plenty was time...he slowy sucked in the sweet petals of hers...Aaliya too bit on his lower lip..their tongues exploring each others terrain...while Zain's hands kept on tracing her bare back...a loud raor from the heavens above manged to break their kiss...but they never left each others prison of arms...
Aaliya: aise kya dekh rhe ho Zain?
Zain: tumse bahut kch kehna chhata hu Aaliya...
Aaliya: to bolo na Zain...
*zain took out a beautiful rose from behind his jacket n knelt down...holding Aaliya's hand in one n rose in the other...he confessed his feelings to her..
I LOVE YOU AALIYA...I WANNA GROW OLD WID U...MAKE BABIES WID U...WANNA DIE WID U...WILL U B MINE FOREVR??
Aaliys could nly uyyer a mere whispered YES!! I M AND WILL ALWAYS B YOURS!
*zain couldnt believe his ears...n lifted her up in joy n took her to the cottage not leaving her eyes evn for a milisecond... Aaliya was mesmerised to see the cozy cottage with wooden flooring...there were scented candles lit all around with every inch of the room covered with roses...it felt as if they were standing in a bouquet fuul of beautiful roses... Zain carried her to the bed n placed her gently on the bed...soon he kissed her stomach...despite the thin layer of clothin b/w them...it felt as if vrythin was as transparent n clear as water...
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to b continued!! Will continue tonight...bt of ny1 wants to continue further they can!! Hope u all liked such a long update...coz I really wanted to update this particular part all by myself!!;);) n pls do tell me how it was as I m writing something like this for the very 1st time!!!
Love
HarshtA ;);)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@harshta
It was amazing..would luv to read mre..written by you
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@ harsh_pree
Oh thank u so much dear! Glad DAT u liked it!! Will continue soon! N thnx again! TC!!:):)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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moving upwards he slowly kissed her neck inhaling the biwitching peculiar smell of hers..feelin shy Aaliya started got up n started to walk away bt Zain got hold of her pallu which fell of within a second gatherin the drapes... Zain pulled Aaliya along with it...makin the temperature rise by a 100 degrees!!!
Aaliya: Zzain...pplsss...
Zain: Nhi Aaliya...aaj nhi...itni mannato k baad tumhe paya hai...aaj mein tumhein puri tarah apna bna luga...
*Zain's husky baritone couldnt hide off the lust building up in her eyes with evry passing second...*
Aaliya: Zain mein humesha humesha k lie tumahri hone ko tyaar hu...
* Zain slowly removed off the pallu of her saari leaving her in the backless blouse n petticoat...blushing heavily,Aaliya faced her back towards him...Zain very slowly opened the hook of her blouse exposing her sans back to him...slowly he pulled her hair to one side n kissed her back...he took her to the bed with her blouse opened from the back...n laid her down...Zain slowly kissed her right earlobe while Aaliya unbuttoned his shirt...she was short of breath when she saw the water from his hair trickling down the passage b/w his chest..to his perfectly worked upon abs..to an unseen trail...she couldnt help but gasp at the human form of Adonis standing in front of him...sans any shirt..her fingers ached to leave their marks in his muscular back...to touch his chest...kiss it...
soon they were on the bed sans clothes lying on the top of each other...exploring each others...n leaving their love marks on each other forever... Zain left a trail of kisses right from her forehead to her belly..to her thighs n toes... Aaliya too explored each cm of him...as they finally became one...they became from Zain n Aaliya to ZAYA...
Aaliya felt this feeling so pure,so divine that she felt her world to stop in this moment forevr...soon tear from her made its way..which Zain slowly kissed away...they were lying in each others embrace with Aaliya s head on his chest...
Aaliya: Zain thank u...
Zain: For what jaan?
Aaliya: For comin in my life... For makin my world so beautiful...
Zain: nhi Aaliya...tumhara shukrguzaar rhu ga mein umr bhar...tumne hi toh mujhe mohabbat ka asal matlb btaya hai...meri zindagi ko ek manzil di hai...tum hi meri ibadat hi aur meri pakeezagi bhi tumhi hi ho...
Aaliya: Thank u for makin this nite so special for me... I LL remember this beautiful nite till my last breath...
Zain: Aaliya??
Aaliya: Hmm?
Zain: I LOV UH! mein tumse Beintehaa Mohabbat krta hu aur krta rhu ga...
Aaliya: mee too Zain...mein bhi tumse Beintehaa Ishq krti hu...ab mera har kaam tumse hi shuru hota hai aur tum par hi khtm hota hai...
*soon they dozsed off into sweet dreams spinning n knitting their beautiful world full of love in each others embrace..*
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hope it was gud n upto your expectations...sorry for the typos n pls do tell me how it was!! N pls continue soon! Will b waitin!!
Love
HarshtA;);)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@ fariya98
thanx a lot fariya!! Glad that u liked it!:):)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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GUYZZZ!!!! PLS YAAR DONT LEAVE THIS LYK THIS UNFINISHED ABRUPTLY...YAAR PLS CONTINUE...PLS😭
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2 days passed by n their romance reached to much gr8ter heights...zain nvr leaved a chance to hug,kiss or just to tease Aaliya...
*Aaliya was passing by her room when someone grabbed her inside n started nibbling her neck...she giggles n says*
A:Zzain kkya kr rhe ho...
Z:romance
A: are buddhu yeh toh mujhe bhi pata hai...pr agr kisine dekh lia toh??
Z: dekhne do...
A: Allah tauba kaise besharam insaan ho gye ho tum...
pata hai chand khalla yahi par hi ghoom rhi hai..agr unhone dekh lia to kya sochegi woh??
Z: sharma jayengi..
*as he was about to kiss her,suddendly some1 bangs open the door n they both get startled seeing Shazia standing there with her mouth opened so wide that it could gulp them*
S: Allaaah! Allaaah! Yeh kya dekh lia meine! *she screams* Zain Aaliya! Koi sharam bhi hwi tum dono mein ki woh bhi bech kr kha gaye tum? Yeh kya kr rhe the tum dono? Aur woh bhi din dahde??
Z: kk..kkk
S: Yeh kya paglo ki hakla rhe ho tum ha?? Saaf batao ki kya kr rhe the tum Aaliya k saath is kone mein?
A: Bhabhi kkch bbbhi toh nhi...*pinches Zain n whispers kaha tha na meine ki koi dekh lega..pr nhi tumhein chain kaha milta hai.. Zain says: ab ismein meri kya galti hai..mujhe kya pata the ki Shazia bhabhi aise aajayenge..A: ab inhe yaha se jldi bhagao vrna hum mushkil mein pad jayenge..*
S:oye! Yeh kya khusar pusar kr rhe tum dono? Aur mere sawal ka jawab do abhi? Kya kr rhe the tum dono?
Z: Miss world are aap bhi kya puch rhi hai humse... mein toh woh hi kr rha hu jo Fahad bhai bhi aapse krte hai!!
S:kkkya kkrte hai Ffahad? Saaf saaf bolo?
Z:R-o-m-a-n-c-e!! Yaad aya!
S:chi chi kitne besharm hote ja rahe ho tum Zain...mana ki tum apni biwi beintehaa mohabbat krte hi pr iska mtlb yeh nhi ki tum kahi pr bhi din dahade chalo ho jao... Aur waise kya keh rhe the tum aaj subah ki Miss world meri file tyaar rhkna aaj jldi office jana hai...ab kya der nhi ho rhi tumhein?*drags Zqin out of his room by oullingvhis eqrs while he yells in pain... N Aaliya couldnt help but laugh*
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guys pls continue kro jldi se!!! Waiting!

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