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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ank_23

Wow new os YES

Continue soon n welcome back to the forum THANKS
Missed u so much.. EVEN ME TOO
I too was on a break but when saw ur post I was 😃😃 like AWW THAT'S SO SWEET OF U
This

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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Haye finally my chudail is back .

Osum prologue hai
Ab jaldi continue kar
Warna i will torture u ..

Ur lovely chudail daughter

Alina
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aagayi Meri Aliya torturer...
PLZ continue...and PM kardo...
Easy way out...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zayalove

Haye finally my chudail is back .

Osum prologue hai
Ab jaldi continue kar
Warna i will torture u ..

Ur lovely chudail daughter

Alina

yes i am
thanks
haan haan
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: StarsOnEarth

Awesome prologue!!

Continue soon!!

thanks..yes i will
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

hello friends..
finally wrote it..

i hope u all will like it..
fingers crossed...
...
are u mrs.abdullah's husband?? said a man on phone
"yes" zain replied with his voice full in tension...why what happened he asked to the man loosing his cool
that day aliya and zain had a fight because of barkat and aliya decided to leave barkat villa for forever
the man said : i am speaking from LIFE BEAT hospital and your wife is admitted to ICU as she is badly inhured in a car accident..
hearing this zain world seemed to crash down and he dropped the phone ..
all sweet memories came flashing in front of his eyes..
whole Abdullah family was there standing in shock watching zain..
before they could ask him something he quickly ran out of his home to hospital

Hmm.. hmm...

hmmm..hmmm

ranveer huriedly parked his car and ran inside the hospital..

"can u tell where mrs.aliya is admitted??" he asked to the receptionist

"yes sure 4th room to the left" replied she passing a smile to her..

he ran and stood in front of 4th room that is ICU.

tears pooled around his eyes

he came near to the door and peeped inside through the small window

tears finally made its way from his eyes..he cursed himself for her present condition

doctor came outside and asked zain if he was mr.abdullah? and then asked him to complete the formalities for the operation..

he completed and the operation started..

Dehleez pe mere dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam

"zain ab tum nahi bachooge" aliya said throwing a pillow on him..

"Pehle pakad ke toh dikhoh" he said catching it..

The room filled with laughters of them..

She was going to fall during the chase

"aliya aaram se" shouted zain making him to come out of his dreams

Tears made its way again from his already red eyes..

He looked at the operatIon theater and soon the color of light changed from red to green

The moment doctor came out without taking a breath he started pouring questions of aliya condition ..

Doctor: relax mr.abdullah she is out of danger now

Hearing this he qucikly send a prayer to god and thanked the doctor

Doctor: it was my duty sir

zain: can i meet her??he asked with his pleading eyes

Doctor: u can go and meet her..but please meet me after an hour when her reports will come
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

He entered inside ICU..she lied lifeless on the bed..he quietly went there and sat next to her... he took her hand in his hands

The gulped the saliva and tried to speak but couldnot seeing his lady love lying like this..

With great difficulty finally he spoke breaking the extreme silence in the room..

"aliya please mujhe maaf kardo..yeh saara meri wajah se hua hai..nahi uss din ham barkat ki wajah se ladte na hi yeh sab hota..main bahoot bura hoon..haina bahoot bura..

He slapped himself with her hand..a tear fell from his eye to her chubby cheek..

She moved her hands a little and tried to open her eyes but couldnot because of the heavy dose of medicines

zain cupped her face in his palms and placed a soft tender kiss on her forehead

zain:mujhe maaf kar ..yeh saara meri wajah se hua hai

aliya: nahi zain yeh meri galti hai..maine hi tumse faltu mein fight ki

she said with difficulty

He smiled

zain: tum aaram karo

aliya: par zain

She tried to get up

zain :bola na aaram karo..

aliya: okey

Zain: u take rest till then i am going to meet doctor

He leaves the room covering aliya properly with sheets and went out

aliya smiled and took rest as directed by her cute husband

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum

May in come in doctor: he said as he stood on the enterance of the cabin

Doctor: yes sure come in and have a seat

He comes and sits

zain: ji doctor boliye

Doctor: aliya ki reports aagayi hai par there is

He panics

zain: kya hua woh thik toh hai na??? Use kuch hua tho nahi??

Doctor: relax mr. Abdullah let me complete my sentence

zain: sorry doctor

Doctor: there is a good news that u r soon going to become father

His little world lit up hearing this

zain: doctor par

Doctor: zain this is a miracle only..during operation we didn't came to know that she is pregnant but when reports came we r totally surprised

zain: thank u so much doctor

He hugged him in excitement

zain: sorry

Doctor: i can understand

He lefts from there and goes to aliya to tell this news

Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum
he tells this news to aliya

aliya excitement didnot had any bound...she hugged her

zain: aliya jaara dhayan se koi squeeze horaha hai

aliya: kon

zain: arre bhudho hamara baby

aliya: sorry

She kept his hand on her tummy ..

aliya: yeh hamara baby zain hamari pyaar ki nishani..

She hugged him and he hugged too

They called home and informed everybody about this..

Everybody were happy for them


Dehleez pe merey dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
two months passed beautifully

zain used to take very extreme care of her as she had to recover from accident too

Aliya used to measure her weight everyday to check if she became fat or what

Zain who used to see his wife antics used to laugh on her

aliya mood swings made her irritate more and she used to get angry with zain easily

But zain he knew how to manofy his dear wife and used to bring roses

Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

aliya cravings for raw mangoes and tamarind used to make zain fill the cabinets with them

Sometime she used to ask for icecream yaa golgappe in midnight and poor zain used to get them for her

The time was passing ..

aliya started gaining weight and zain used to call her moti making her angry

Haan sikha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan sikha maine jeena, mere humdum

It was aliya's first first appointment with gynaecologist..

Both were excited for it

She changed to gown and was laid down

The cool gel was applied on her tummy

They could see their little one

They both had tears of happiness in their eyes

They were spell bound

And they asked a copy of it so that they could save it as memory


Na sikha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na sikha jeena tere bina humdum

Aliya was 6 months pregnant now

Everyday they used to stand in front of mirror

Capture a selfie and then used to save it for a memory



Hmmm.. hmmm..

Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein
Dil se jo maine kari hain...
zain was sleeping next to her with his hand on aliya's tummy when suddenly he felt a kick

He opened his eyes in shock

zain: yeh kya tha aliya??

aliya: yeh tumahara baby laat maar raha hai

zain: kya??

aliya: kya matlab kya?? Apne baap par gaya hai...kitni laat marta hai

She pouts

zain:aakhir baby kiska hai

aliya: tumhara

They both laugh

The baby kicks again and they both feels it

Zain kisses aliya on her forehead


Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein
Dil se jo maine kari hain...
she was in her 9th month..

The bond between them grew more stronger

Zain used to do odd task for her and she used to find more reasons to make zain do them

The time was passing and her due date was coming near

zain decorated the room for the new one who was soon going to join them and aliya knitted little sweaters for her baby
Jo tu mila to saji hain
Duniya meri humdum
"ahhh" screamed aliya in the midnight

zain: kya hau

He held her tight

aliya: argh zain..bahoot pain horaha

She said

zain soon carried her to the hospital

She was taken inside the room

Doctor: u cannot come in

zain: par i am her husband

Doctor: i know par app yeh nahi dekh paayenge

O aasma mila zameen ko meri
Aadhe aadhe poore hain hum
aliya screamed in top of her voice and the whole hospital could hear it..

But the soothing cry of a baby soon covered it..

A smile formed on his lips

He entered insdie without taking permission of the doctor and every body looked at him

aliya who was pale looked at him and cursed him for doing this

aliya whispered: isse aakal kaab aayegi ab toh ek baache ka baap bhi bangaya

Nurse: sir congratulations u r a father of a baby boy

She handed the baby to him

He took him

His world filled with happiness lifting the little bundle of happiness in his hands

He walked to aliya kissing the baby again and again on his way

He sat by her side and placing the baby in the cradle he hugged her and thanked her for this

Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum
time flew away like it got wings,,

zain and aliya came more close to each other..

Their love was pure ..

They named their son Aryan

Seven beautiful years passed laughing and crying


Haan seekha maine jeena jeena, kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena, mere humdum
it was their 9th anniversary..

Little Aryan made a beautiful card for them..

Their little world had their own happiness

Everybody was happy for them..

Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum
they were called for a dance..

The dance was full of passion reflecting there love for each other..

The relation which was started with one side love now was world's most beautiful relation in the world..
Hmmm... hmmm.

...

Sorry guys for the late update..

Tomatoes wlcum but not eggs pure veggie

Love

priya

Edited by iluvuzaya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yayy i m first
unres
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wow !! it was wonderful os
i jst loved loved it a lot
vry beautifully written
keep writing more
Edited by Priya_arora - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Amazing os priyu ji
Loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
It was soo cute!! Really loved it dear!!:):) beautifully written!:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Finally u completed this
Nicely written priya
Luv
Kunika

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