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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing prologue :)
Looking forward to read more !!
Continue soon ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ok now i m waiting lyk anything
Update soon or else i will strt spamming u on twitter
Take care
Lots of love
Alina
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Posted: 10 years ago
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(haider Mansion)

"Arre Aaliya how much more time do you need,its not your nikaah today,yaar!"yasmin sighed,receiving a glare from her.

"Are yasmin,samjha kar yaar,Aaliya Ghulam Haider,aaj Zain Osman Abdullah,se milne jaa rahi hai. The great Zain Abdullah,the guy who can make girls swoon at his feet,has finally fallen in love with Ms. Haider,she has gotta look good for her guy!" Sumi,chuckled.

"Tum log bate bana band karo!"Aaliya , stomped her feet on the ground.

"Arre Ms.Haider,aap Mashallah bauhat khoobsurat lag rahi hai.." Baffled by Yasmin,sudden use of Urdu,Aaliya turned twards Sumi,to recive her look of approval.

""Sumi,bata na,kaisi lag rahi hoon main?"

"You're looking hot,Aal-ya.." Aaliya almost chocked on her thoughts,when Sumaiya mimicked the way Zain pronounced her name. Yes,the Great Zain Abdullah stressed on the l' of her name and when she had first heard him call out for her ,Aaliya Ghulam Haider, could have never imagined that her name could actually sound so exotic.

Sumi had stunned her to silence for some time, and it was only after a few moments that Alaiya came out of her reverie.

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(barkat Villa)

The night was young, and without a doubt the people were too. They were left on their own in Zain's bedroom,away from the scrutinizing eyes of a chaperone, with the Abdullah's busy I their own rooms.

His room was bigger than hers, apart from a plush red carpet and simple furniture,a case for his CD collection, his sports gear and posters of Leonardo DiCaprio and Robert De Niro,there was a huge poster of Messi,just above the headboard of his bed.

When arrived to find the rest of their friends already present there.

Considering the fact that it was rude to stare at someone,Alaiya Ghulam haider was left with no other choice but to ear her eyes away from him'. He was looking hot'. Gosh what was she thinking. Has she really lost it? Well it was not something impossible when one had friends like SUmi and Yasmin

He was wearing his red t-shirt,that framed his perfectly lean but not lanky body, and made him look pretty much drool worthy, or that is exactly how the girls at school perceived him,the girls who spent most of their time ogling at her Zain.' Her'? Ya Allah! What was happening with her? Zain. Hot. Drool-worthy. Her? The only guy she had ever found hot or even drool worthy was Cristiano Ronaldo! But it seemed at the moment that Zain Abdullah was fighting hard for that title.

Sumi cleared her throat. "Hi guys!" Alaiya gquickly averted her gaze from his chocolate brown ones,when he looked up at them. "Tum log bahar kyun khade ho..come in guys"he walked across the room, and came and stood by the doorway,to usher them in.

Yasmin and Sumi brushed past them,leaving them alone,standing at the doorway.

"Hi..."her voice was raspy,as she grappled with her overwhelmed senses.

"Hi..."he breathed in, when he realized that he had been holding his sacred breath for a minute too long , seeing the immaculate beauty in front of him.

"Zain"m-main..?"she looked up at him,hesitantly.

"o-oh y-yeah.."he stepped aside,realizing that he had kept her standing. And thankfully realizing soon enough,to save himself from a round of ugly jokes that he was blocking her way!

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"ye ladkiya bhi na!"he groaned,his displeasure and moue od distaste evident in his voice,as they all sat watching High School Musical ,with the girls drooling over Zac Effron.

"kyun bhai,jealous feel kar raha hai?" Rizwan clapped his back.

"Jealous aur main? Kiske liye..?"

"kiske liye nahi. Kiss ke liye. Tu use pyaar karta hai,par teri to kisi aur pe marti hai,yaar!"

"hmphh.."

"by the way..Aliya is looking hot today!"

"Rizwan tameez se baat kar..woh Aaliya hai!"

"o ho..sorry bro..i forgot that she's my bhabi.." Rizwan chuckled.

"rizwan tujhe toh main""

"Shhh guys..stop making noise!"Yasmin turned back and glared them.

"so-sorry.."

"Tujhse kuch nahi hoga bro,tu bhudhepe main bhi ladkiyo ko ghoorta aur line marta rahega..par kisiko apni dil ki bata nahi keh paye ga..tu ekdam phattu hai!"

"Phattu aur main?"
"haan aur nahi toh kya. Tujhe aaj Aaliya ko propose karna tha..bhool gaya hai shayad,right?"

"No..aur main koi phattu wattu nahi hoon,samjha?"

"Toh propose karke dikha.."

"done!Aur waise bhi mujhe yeh rona dhona,drooling aur blushing nahi dekhna!"

"Arre Zian baith ja...kya ka-" But Zian was already half way across the room, and not the one to listen. Soon the darkness in the room, got obliterated, as light flooded in.

"Arre..Zain yeh kya kar rahe ho?"Aaliya looked up at him.

"The evening is losing its charm girls,why not play something..?"he looked at them hopefully.

"Please don't suggest something like antakshari,or dumb charades.."Aaliya grimaced.

"or something even more stupid..something like Truth or dare.."Ankita glared at Zain,cleary pissed off that he had switched off the TV.

"No guys..something even better.."he said,looking at Aaliya..

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SEVEN MINUTES IN HEAVEN:

It's a game where there are equal number of boys and girls .

The names of all the girls and the names of all the guys are written in chits and placed inside a bowl and the host picks out the chits and pairs ae made accordingly. These pairs are send into separate dark rooms,closets, bathroom. And a timer is set..for seven minutes.

In these seven minutes the couple can do anything from kissing,to just talking.

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AM really sorry for this delay..but the next part will be up..very soon..:P

From

Ann


PRECAP: Will The darkness help Zain to confess his feelings,will Aaliya do the same..or will they shy away...

Edited by AnnRosewood - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Update soon , Ann i am loving it ! it seems so realistic , i am loving it ! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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love it.update soon can't wait for how zain propose aliya.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ann loved it ...the small talks ...and the seven minute game ...very fresh and romantic ...
loved the hidden feelings within his confessions
Fabulous😊
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am sorry ann please accept my apologies I didn't comment I am loving it waiting for zain to confess it ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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She would have landed hard on the ground had it not been for his timely help. The small lumber room, barely provided much space for them. They squeezed inside,and it was only because of him,that she was standing on her feet and not stumbling down on the floor of the room.

Aaliya Ghulam Haider couldn't have been more petrified of the bottomless abyss of darkness that shrouded over the lumber room.16 years,and still she was unable to overcome it!

And not even a moment had transpired between them than Zain Abdullah found her in his arms,clutching onto his t-shirt,her eyes closed to the darkness and her fear of it.

"Aa-Aal-ya..kya hua hai..tu-tumhe..?" It was not that he was not enjoying their proximity..hell the girl he loves was huggig him..for the first freaking time..but he couldn't ignore the wild beating of his heart..like a sledge hammer..and it would surely be embarrassing if she hears it..

"Z-Zain..y-yahan..itna a-andhera kyun..h-hain..I ..am s-ca...red..Z--.ain..i..I need li-light.."

He felt like cursing himself..Seven Minutes in Heaven was his idea..and a stupid one none the less!

"Aal-ya..everything is going to be fie..Shhh..."He reluctantly wrapped his arms around her..scared to squeeze her ,or even hug her inappropriately and scare her away.."aliya..hold my hand..am gonna just lean over and switch on the light okay..shhh.."She had calmed down..and strange enough,his voice soothed her in the asphyxiating darkness...

And for a split second her fear of the darkness ceased to matter, when he leaned in, and his smell and proximity began playing havoc to her senses..Her breath hitched in her throat..just the way it had on several other occasions..."Z"zain.."

"shh.."Aaliya closed her eyes..Was he really going to kiss her?but then why would he..he didn't..

Her questions were put to rest, the moment light flooded into the small room, dazzling their vision momentarily.

"Zain..mu-mujhe..yeh Seven minutes in heaven nahi khelni..I wa-wanna go out.."She moved quickly and tried to trun the knob..but it seemed to be locked..and when she turned to face him,he was standing,looking as calm as ever!

"yeh darwazaloked kyun hai..?"

"Unn logon ne darwaaza..lock kar di hai.."

"Kyun?"

"So that we can talk.."

"'So that we can talk'?"

"Yeah..you heard me right Ms Haider.."

""Don't talk in riddles Abdullah.."

"Aal-ya..mujhe ac-actually tumse kuch kehna tha.."

"who toh tum bahar bhi bata sakte the..aur by the way,tum aaj itna kakla kyun rahe ho..?"

"Who..main..I..I.."

"Rehne do.Tum jaise phattu se kuch nahi hoga!"

Aaliya ne phattu kaha!

"M-Mai koi phattu nhai hoon!"

"Ha!pichle ek saal se mere piche pare ho..par ab tak I' se aage nahi bad paye tum!"

"tumhe jab sab kuch pata hi hai..to tumbhi to aake mujhe bata sakti thi,na?"

"main kyun pehle propose karu,Mr.Zain KitKit Abdullah!I'm a girl..a boy should propose a girl..and not the other way round!STUPID!"

"tumne mujhe stupid kaha?"

"haan kaha.."she glared back at him. "Kya karloge?"

"kiss.."

"kya?pagal ho gaye ho kya!Main tumhe koi kiss wiss nahi karne dungi!"

"Who tog tum dogi..boyfriend jo hoon tumhara.."

"Tumne abhi tak theek se propose bhi nahi kiya hai kitkit!"

"Pehle tum."

"no,first you.By the way Abdullah,tumhe dar lag raha hai kya?"
"Darr?Aur who bhi mujhe?Huh!"

"Don't lie!"

"well thoda-thoda sa lag raha hai.Tum jo ek jungle billi ho.Kya pata main tumhe propose karu aur tum mujh pe toot paro!"
"Tumne mujhe jungle billi kaha!!!"
"Aur nahi toh kya? Mujhe abhi bhi yaad hai..jab Robert ne tumhe I love You kaha tha,toh tumne uss bechare ka kya haal banaya tha!"that's because he was after me,when he already had a girlfriend and moreover I didn't like him."

"Achha,whom do you like then?"

"You-"She bit her tongue,mentally chastising herself for letting it slip out of her togue.

"I me-mean..main""

"haan bolo na,Aal-ya.."

"ILoveYouZainAbdullah"She said it in one breath.

"What?I didn't get you?"

"I-love you.."

"Really?"

"nahi..main toh ainwayi ladko ko I love you kehke phirti hoon!"

"Tum gussa kyun ho rahi ho? Waise..Aal-ya..I love you too..aur main bauhat dino se tume like karta hoon.."

"Pata hai mujhe.."

"kaise..?"

"you look at me in a weird way..and that's not normal...I always knew that you liked me..but never thought that you would fall in love with me.."
"Well I ddi..and will you be my girlfriend?"
"Who toh main abhi bhi hoon..am a girl and your friend!Hui na main tumhari girlfriend!"

"Would like to go out on a date with me..?"
"Zain..I don't have a choice.."

"You don't.."

"I know.."

"So what should we do now..?" he looked at her.."Should we kiss..?"

"Too impatient Abdullah..you'll have to wait for some time for it.." she chuckled as she saw his chagrined face." Can I hug you..?"
"You can always hug me.."

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Hey guys..this one is completed..and this one was dedicated to each and everyone of you for supporting me and loving me. I go through each and every comment and there are so many that replying to each one of you becomes difficult..but believe me I love you guys a and am truly grateful; for your feedback and love. Thank u so much !:*

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome one.their kitkit was so funny totally ZaYa style.I love it.
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Such a cut one i Loved this teenage version amazing and i especially Loved the end keep writing ! :)

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