zaya ss:mein tenu samjawan ki(collab)*chapter 3 up(14/01) - Page 24

Originally posted by: zayalove

[B thank u madhu
Darling
Will update on thursday
Pakka promise

Thursday pakka bcoz I will update my work on same day

Ya priya i will on wednesday n u do it on thursday
Done

Originally posted by: zayalove

Ya priya i will on wednesday n u do it on thursday
Done

done because it be easy for me to send pm.. I have became very kamchor nowa days

Hola people .. 😛
Main agai apna torture le k .. 😃

Agar pasand na aye toh ek leg fractured hai doosri tum log kar dena .. 😉

Chalo bas meri bakbak khatam or chapter shuru ...

CHAPTER 2:-

Ve changa nayo kitta beeba
Dil mera todd k ...
Ve bara pachtayan akhan ... ve bara pachatayan anka
Naal tere jodd k ...

Tenu chad k kithe jawan tun mera parchawan ...

Tere mukhde which hi main tan rab nu apne pawan ...

The room filled with the beautiful voice of a young gitl everybody present in the hall were swaying n her beautiful angelic voice ..
A satisfactory smile playing on her lips ..while singing ..
Singing was her passion ...

Whilr singing she sae an old lady becoming sandwhich between young guyzz to get one clear view of the angel singing on the stage ..

While singing the song she got down from the stage ..

Went towards the old lady ...and extended her hand ..

The old lady held her hand ..aand she pulled her up at the stage with her ..

After she finished the song ..
There was the pin drop silence in the hall ..

She was a bit nervous ..but the old lady on the floor started clapping n soon the whole room was filled with the voice of clapping ... hooting ...

She was very happy ...she bowed down in front of every one ..

The old lady present on the stage kissed her fore head ...

She smiled n kissed the old lady on her cheek ...

And thanked every one before leaving the hall ...

She went towards the exit gate ... and climbed up her bicycle and rode to the nearest ...

Dargah ...

Once she reached there she covered her head with her dupatta ..
And did wudoo ...
She went inside the dargah ..
Knelt down beside the holy shirne of khawaja ji ...


But before making her dua she heard her best frnd calling out her name ...

Ayat : aliya ... aliya ...

Aliya turned a bit she saw her crazy frnd jumping in excitement calling out her name ..
Aliya smiled seeing her antics ...
She again turned back towards the holy shrine ..

Aliya : khawaja ji maaf karna ..par agar main ne iss ki baat nahi suni ..toh yeh puri dargah ko sar pe utha le gi ...

Saying this aliya got up and turned ayat came running towards her and hugged her tightly ..not allowing her to breath .

Aliya : ouch ayat meri ribs toot jaye gi .. itni zor se hug kiya hua hai tu ne mujhe ...

Ayat : oops sorry ...
She said while breaking the hug ..

Aliya : ab bata q itna zor zor se mera naam chilla rahi hai .. aisi kiya afat agai ..

Ayat : jo news main layi hoon na ..usse sun k tu uchal type pare gi

Aliya : acha aisa kiya layi hai tu .. apni or rizwan ka wedding card ...

Ayat : kuch bhi ..acha sun na ..

Aliya : toh suna na...

Ayat : aliya yeh dekh ..

Ayat handed her letter ...

Aliya : dekh ayat tu ne mujhe apna love letter dikhane k liye dua mangne se roka ...

Ayat : offo kitna ulta sochti hi tu ... jaldi khol isse ...

Aliya made an irritated face and opened the letter ... her irritated expression changed from shocked to happy ...

Aliya : ayat yeh ...
She hugged her tightly ..tears pool up in her eyes ...

Ayat : kaha tha na ... maine k tujhe bohat khushi hogi ...

Aliya broke the hug ..and again looked at the letter

Aliya : ayat i cant believe this .. i mean mujhe audition k liye bulaya ek national level singing competition main .. ayat i m so happy

Ayat : han or ab toh tu famous ho jaye gi ...
Har jagah sirf aliya ghulam haider ka naam ..
Aliya frowned hearing her name ..
Ayat : oops sorry i forgot ...

Aliya : dekh ayat main sirf apni ammi ki beti hoon ...mera rishta mr ghulam haider ae ussi din toot gaya tha jis din unho ne meri ammi ko choda tha .. main sirf aliya hoon ..

Ayat : han han tu sirf aliya hai .. ab chal chal k dua mangte hain k tu jeet jaye
..

Both ayat n aliya went inside the dargah again covering their head ..and knelt down infront of the holy shrine of khwaja.ji ..

Aliya 's monologue ...

Khawaja ji ap ka bohat bohat shukriya .. aj meri zindagi ka sab se acha din hai ..
Jis singing competition mein main hamesha se jana chahti thi .. ab finally main uss main auditions doon gi ...

Allah miyan thank u very very much aap ne apni ladli ki baat sun li ..

Bas ab sab kuch ache se hojaye .. q k main yeh competition apni ammi k liye ..apne liye jeetna chahti hoon ...

App meri madad kare gain n Allah miya ...
Mujhe pura yakeen hai aap pe .. q k aap apni ladli ko kabhi mayoos nahi kare gain ...

Or hamesh meri madad kare gain ...

Or mujhe jeetaye gain bhi ..
Ameen ..

She got up and tied mannat ka dhaga...
Soon aliya n ayat left from the dargah ..

Ayat : aliya soch agar tujhe iss competition k doraan kisi se pyaar ho jaye ...

Aliya : pyaar . Kiya ayat kuch bhi sochti hai ..

Ayat : phir bhi sochna zara ...

Aliya : ab se meri zindagi main jo kuch bhi hoga na ayat main usse Allah ki marzi samajh k qubool kar loon gi ... phir chahe woh pyaar ho ya kuch or ...

Ayat :par tujhe kaisa larka chahiye ...

Aliya : mujhe kaisa larka chahiye ..
Koi aisa jo har kisi ko kush rakhe ..
Kisi ka bhi dil jeet le ..
Sab ki izzat kare ...or hamesha apne aap se pehle doosron ka soche ...

Ayat : toh tujhe bilkul .. apnr jaisa larka chahiye q k yeh sari qualities tere main hain ...oops tujhe ek baat batana toh bhool
Hi gai ..

Aliya : kiya batana bhool gai ..

Ayat : jis competition main tera audition hoga na uss main rizwan ka bhi frnd audition de raha hai ...

Aliya : acha .. .

Ayat : or pata hai ajj woh sab uss se treat bhi le rahr hain pizza hut main ..rizwan ne mujhe invite kiya tha ..but maine mana kar diya ...
Q k
She side hugged aliya ...
Aaj main apna sara din tere sath guzaroon gi ..jo mere liye har treat se barh kar hai ..

They both hugged each other n went towards aliya's home...

Phewww

Khatam hua mera torture ...

Plzz drop in ur views n hit the lyk button ...

Lots of love...from priya n alina ...

Alina :)

Chapter 2 updated ..
Enjoy
Lots of love
Alina

Yayyy...m first

Originally posted by: butterfly20

Yayyy...m first

That was amazing chapter alina..

aliya is so cute and obitient..

love every bit..

And ya chapter bht acha tha is lye dusri tang torny k bijay pehli wali k jurny ki dua karun gi...😆

get well soon.

lots of love...

hania.

congo u r first
I m glad u lykd it ...

Thanks for ur wishes hanii ..
Lots of love
Alina 😉 😉

Great chp 👏 👏 👏
Continue soon!
Thnx for pm 😃

I love ayat and aliya friendship girl you are doing a really good Job , now continue soon !

nice update do continue soon