zaya SS *Dil Ka Rishta*chp 24*pg-78* 18th june

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haania

@butterfly20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: zaya.harshika
Quite a lot interesting and confusing too...
Rehaan...I hate him!
Continue soon...will be waiting!

M glad u found it intresting...

i found it bhool bhulayyan...😆

Hawww...why u hate rehan..i love his character..not nandish😆

Will update asap.

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oriyu

@oriyu24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

this is interesting
pls continue soon
thanks for the pm
and yes characters are awesome

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haania

@butterfly20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya
this is interesting
pls continue soon
thanks for the pm
and yes characters are awesome

Thanks priya...

thanks for like and comment.

m glad u like it.

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haania

@butterfly20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

hey friends here is the chapter one.
as u all knew yesterday was not just beintehaa's anniversary but my birthday too,so i was very busy can't come to forum also.enjoying with friends and family...ok no more bakbak.here's the first part of my torture...happy reading.
chapter 1

a beautiful girl is sleeping in a small but colourful room decorated by her.but these clours matter nothing to her as her life was all dark but she was still holding a rope of hope. that may be some day someone pull her out from this darkness.her dark circles clearly tell the story of her sleepless nights bcuz of crying whole night...when suddenely her sister woke her up.
ayat:appi utheye ...subah k 7 baj ry hain.office nhn jana kia???
aliya:ayat sony dy plzz.
ayat:appi ammi bula ri hain.or aaj abbu ko bhi to hospital ly kar jana hai.un ki appointment hai.
aliya sat up lazily hiding her swollen eyes she went towards the washroom.
she came out after freshen up and look at herself in mirror.
aliya:kash wo meri zindagi main aya hi na hota???kiun??kiun aya wo meri zindagi main???
and tears start brimming her eyes...she wipe them immediately.
aliya:nhn aliya tu kamzoor nhn par sakti.i had to be strong.
and then she go out have her breakfast and leave for office.

habib's mansion...

rehan:ammi main aesa nhn kar sakta...main rida ko talaaq nhn dy sakta .aaj jab usy meri sab sy ziada zaroorat hai to aap sab chahty hain k main usy chor dun??
rehan's monther:mjhy kuch nhn pata rehan.mjhy sirf apna waris chahye apny poti poty.or tmhari shadi ko 3 sal ho gay hain.main is naimat sy ab tak mehroom hun.(she sout)
rehan:ammi jab mjhy koi masla nhn h to ap ko q hai???
mom:q na ho rehan.mera tmharay elawa or hai hi kon???kis sy khwahish karun.???
rehan:ammi ap janti hain main rida sy bht pyar karta hun.wo pehly hi pata nhn kab tak hmary sath hai main usy or takleef nhn dy sakta.
and he leave...

barkat royal...

aliya:may i come in .
she ask permission from usman abdullah the owner of barkat royal.
usman:ary aliya come come...finally aaj tm pury aik mahiny bad office ai ho.(he smile)
aliya:yes sir wo abbu ki tbiat kharab thi
usman:i know beta...ok let's get to work.ap k boss ap ka wait kar ry hain.
aliya:kia??? zain sir office ay hain.
usman:g bilkul...aahista aahista sab seekh jaen gy.
aliya close her eyes and exhale her breath.then she open them and marched to the zain's cabin.
aliya:may i come in sir.
zain:come in...(he looked up)..aliya right???my PA.
aliya nodded quietely.
zain:so u r late.why???u didn't knew but let me tell u i m very punctual.
aliya:yes sir...(she said in a low tone)
the whole day passed aliya bear his presence with much difficulty.she wants to run away in any minute but she can't.
...
at night...

rehan come to meet aliya.he was though zain's best friend but she was rida's best friend so he came to discuss a very serious matter with her.

aliya:kia hua rehan...(she said sitting on sofa in drawing room)
rehan:aliya ammi abbu chahty hain k hmari apni family ho.tm to janti ho rida ki kia condition hai.aesy main wo kaisy handle kar sakti hai.mjhy kuch samajh ni aa rahi main kia karun.main rida ko kisi haal main akela nhn chor sakta.or ammi abbu ki khwahish bhi jaaiz hai.main yeh sab rida ko bhi to nhn bata sakta wo bht hurt hogi.islye tmhary pas aya hun tm rida ki best friend ho usy mery bad sab sy achy sy janti ho.tm hi batao main kia karun...????
he sit there hiding her face in his palms.
aliya:plzz rehan.pareshan mat ho.ALLAH sab behter karen gy.but tm plzz rida ko kuch mat kehna.us k lye stress lena theek nhn h.wo hipatitus k last stage par hai.zindagi deny waly to ALLAH hain.lekin ham apni taraf sy koi kami nhn choren gy usy bachany k lye.
rehan look at her with teary eyes...
aliya:rehan is waqt tm rida k pas jao.main sochti hun agar koi solution mily ga to zaroor bataun gi.

that night aliya keep thinking and thinking about the matters.how chirpy and bubbly rida turn into life less body and how her colour ful life turn into pitch black...she was thinking very deep and suddenely she took one decision a very big decision...she keep fighting with her self ,with her thoughts all night and finally she took a final decision.which can save her life and rehaan's too.
...
next day...
...
she call at coffe shop and she told him the solution and her dicision.at first rehaan deny but then she took promise from him and pour her heart out.she break down infront of him and told him her side of story ...rehaan was shocked and stunned...but after pleading and begging he hold her hand and agree with her conditions.
(hhehehe😆...this is called churail giri,...abhi kuch nhn bataun gi samjhi😛)

habib's mansion...

rehan:ammi main ap ki bat k lye razi ho gaya hun.
mther:matlab tu rida ko chor dega.
rehan:nhn ammi,main rida ko chor nhn sakta...main dusri shadi karny k lye razi hun.
mother:par pehli biwi k hoty huy dosri shadi karny k lye kon razi hoga...she said confused.
rehan:hai koi.
mother:kon hai jo sab janty bujhty tujh sy dusri shadi kary gi.???
rehan:aliya...aliya...aliya...(the voice echoed in every one's ears)
habib:rehan tum hosh main to ho.aliya rida ki best friend hai.doston ko sotanen banana chahty ho tum
rehan:abbu aliya yeh sab rida k lye hi kar rahi hai...main ny us sy bat ki hai.or wo razi hai.
habib:or rida???
rehan:rida bhi samajh jay gi.
habib:pata nhn dimagh kharab ho gay hai tmhara...
rehan:abbu ham donon ko yeh sab karny par aap ny hi majboor kia hai.
mother:par aliya tujh sy shadi q kary gi??wo khoobsurat hai,parhi likhi hai usy to aik sy aik larky milen gy...
rehan:ammi main ny kaha na wo ye sab rida k lye kar rahi hai.wo rida k lye kuch bhi kar sakti hai..ap logon ko koi atraaz nhn hai to kal aliya k ghar ja sakty hain,
...

one day before marriage...

aliya cry and cry whole day and night her eyes drain but her heart was crying,breaking,shattering with every passing second.she wipe her tars ..and went to office one last time.

barkat royal...

she enter in zian's cabin.he was not there .she sit on chair quitely..
suddenely he came and said.
zain:hey aliya
aliya:hellow sir
zain:by the way congrats...tmhari or mery best buddy ki shadi.great.
his each words are more than bullets for her but she push her tears back and hand him two envolops.
aliya:sir my resignation letter and application.
zain:hmmm.ok...(he sit back like he always did loosening his tie.he read the application carefully)
zain:so u want your sister to join at your place.
aliya:yes sir she also did charter accountant and she had one year expierience.
zain:ya ya dad told me...fine application accepted...(he smile and signed the papers)
she was about to leave when he call her.
zain:aliya...
she turn back.holding her breath...he look at her for sometime.
aliya:yes...
zain:nnn...nothing.
aliya:bye.
zain:umm...bye.
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tadaaa!!!!!...so how was my torture??? i hope u read that scrunching your brows in confusion...hehehe.😆...i don't want to but i have to do it for a change,😃
_hania.

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

first of all Happy Birthday ! Superb chapter hani , shadi ko rok lo please i Hope Aaliya Will say no good chapter continue soon!

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haania

@butterfly20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb
first of all Happy Birthday ! Superb chapter hani , shadi ko rok lo please i Hope Aaliya Will say no good chapter continue soon!

Thanks saleha...

Don't worry dear...bas thora sa torture karun gi..😆

tab tak passience rakho...😆.

Ab happily ever after k lye aansoo to bahany party hain na???.

Will hunt u soon with next chapter...😛

And ya thanks for being first one to comment on my new work..😊and thanks for wishing me.😊

Edited by butterfly20 - 11 years ago

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LuvPreetikaRao

@LuvPreetikaRao

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Amazing update

Plzz continue an thanks for the PM

Happy Birthday 😊

Edited by LuvAaliyah - 11 years ago

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haania

@butterfly20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: LuvAaliyah
Amazing update
Plzz continue an thanks for the PM
Happy Birthday 😊

Thanks dear...for liking my work and 4 wishing me.

m happy that u like it.

Will try to update soon.

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: butterfly20

Thanks saleha...
Don't worry dear...bas thora sa torture karun gi..😆
tab tak passience rakho...😆.
Ab happily ever after k lye aansoo to bahany party hain na???.

Will hunt u soon with next chapter...😛
And ya thanks for being first one to comment on my new work..😊and thanks for wishing me.😊

Welcome , enjoy and continue unfortunatly too!