Nafrat hai yaah mohabbat OS part 9 up page 10 (PMSLATER) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: 786ahf_bi

love the concept...cont soon...

I just love it young @heart...😆


thnk u...ill try my best2 please every1 ...
i hp u lk it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: rantra123

thnk u so much..u dnt know how much it means 2 me...
ill try 2 update soon


Oh dear you're welcome.
I was new here too, I know what it means to you.
Cause I have been (and still am) in the same position.

Thanks a lot. And do continue. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Amazing concept ...!!
Continue next part soon :)
Do pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Hey adeela ... u can call me alina ..
Coming to ur story it sounds intersting
Update it asap ..n pm me plzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
hy...im going to update soon!!!


Part 2...
Home time...
Aliya was chit chatting with her best friend sanam,whilst they were passing the road they didnt notice a car was coming...
Sanam:ALIYYYAAA!!!!!!!
CRUSH!!! The car hit aliya nd went away...Sanam noted the car number nd was screaming for help...She diddnt know what to do...She took out her phon nd called Tthe ambulance.The ambulance arrived.Saman called Ali she diddnt even think twice...the only thing she wanted to do was to save her friend.
Sanam: Hello Ali,Aliya had an accident please come to the hospital!!! im really scared.(While crying).
Ali got worried hearing sanam crying and try to console her:Dont worry sanam Aliya will be fine...How can she leave her friend????Ok,im coming just calm urself..ill call zain ok?
Sanam:Yes ali call him...Please come sooon...(She hang up the phone)Aliya you will be fine...The blood was oozing out of her head...she was souless.
Ali called zain.
Zain:HOW DID IT HAPPEN????!!! I SWEAR DOWN IM GOING TO KILL WHOEVERE DID THIS! WHARE IS ALIYA HOW IS SHE! JUST TELL ME DAMMIT!
Ali:Im going to the hospital zain reach soon...(he hang up)
Zain diddnt know what was going on..The only thing he wanted to see was HIS aliya if she was fine or not...ND KILL THAT MURDERER...
Soon Zain nd ali reached the hospital...Sanam told the whole story while zain was seeing his aliya fighting for her life...
Doctor:IM REALLY SORRY..butt...
Zain:But WHATT HAA!! I WANT MY ALIYYAAA!!
Sanam nd ali who were shoked what they saw thy tried to calm zain down...
Doctor:PLease let me finish...she is out of danger but if anything happens to her for the next 24hrs im afraid smting really wrong might hapend to her...
Zain:As what doctor????(Zain asked worriedly)
Doctor:Her cells might stop working in some part of her body...The only thing all of us can do is pray...
Zain:Doctor can i see her plzzz...
Doctor:yes,but please only one person.(He goes)
ZAIN was shatteredof what he just hear nd shocked bcz tthe person he hated the most was a part of his life...
Zain went inside remembring the words of the doctor.He saw aliya lyng lifelessly on the bed...He sat beside her hold her hand...Nd...
Zain:Im really sorry for hurting u in anyway,Aliya please dont leave me..Cmmon we still have to particiate in the dance competition,If u want to ruin my dream then do it i wont say anything but plz dont ruin ur dream(He said whilst cryng nd sobbing)
A tear of zain fell on on aliyas eye...Something was happening to her body..Zain screamed for the dooctor...Nd carressing aliyas hair to cal he body he was shivering...Zain never felt scared for somebody in his whole life.
Precap:What happend to aliya???did zain realise his feeling!?????(I lov to torture people lk this)
Itried my best nd i Hope u like it nd for pm buddy me..(ignore mistakes)

Edited by rantra123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
That was painful chapter adella...
Continue soon..
Aliya on the death bed
Edited by iluvuzaya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

That was painful chapter adella...
Continue soon..
Aliya on the death bed

I will try my best to update soonn...Nobody wants rain but their is no rainbow without rain
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: rantra123


I will try my best to update soonn...Nobody wants rain but their is no rainbow without rain

nice quote..
Will wait for the update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Ah we see a new torture queen in the making...😛
It was AWESOME Adeela...
I loved it...but sadly very painful...
Felt really really bad for Aliya...😭
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Really nyc update adeela
Omg aliya on death bed
Update soon
Pm me nxt tym

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