ss:the secret love (collab)*chapter 9 updated(14/01)* - Page 5

Created

Last reply

Replies

253

Views

16.8k

Users

32

Likes

234

Frequent Posters

sabla thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Priya it was such an amazing chapter
College kind of romance is something new to read
Hope you continue it asap
Thanks for the pm
oriyu24 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: zayacrazy

Thts awesome Priya!

I love college love! It juz makes me time travel! To the future of corse!
I really loved tht Zain was always on Aliya's side can't wait for it to go ahead! Coz I'm sure you have something more in store!
Update Soon!

thanks sakeenah for your lovely comment..
Glad u lyked it..
I too love college romance..
oriyu24 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: anaghazaya

Awesome update priya

Love d friends bonding
Shabhana ko mar diya tum ne
Hi5 chudail
Lol professor as bull and leech
Again it was amazing
Aaliya falling over banana peel and Zain catching her was hmmm like always magical
Tanu di Continue soon
Thanks for d pm EC

thanks anagha..
Shabana ko toh marna hi tha na..
Once again thanks for your lovely comment my chudail..
oriyu24 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: raksha1886

awesome update👏
really enjoy reading it😊
continue soon😳

thanks dear..
oriyu24 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Priyakna

Enjoyed it :))

Thnx for the pm

u r wlcum
Ana_rockz thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

thanks anagha..
Shabana ko toh marna hi tha na..
Once again thanks for your lovely comment my chudail..

😆
My pleasure
chudail hug 🤗
oriyu24 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: anaghazaya

😆

My pleasure
chudail hug🤗

chudail hug
Uniquely...me thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Awesomely written PRIYA...
I just loved it...waiting for the next update...I think it will be by TANU...
It's nice to see young ZAYA...
CONTINUE soon...
oriyu24 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: 786ahf_bi

Awesomely written PRIYA...

I just loved it...waiting for the next update...I think it will be by TANU...
It's nice to see young ZAYA...
CONTINUE soon...

thanks habeeba..
Hope u like the rest too
cupcaked thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Hollaa all! This is the most bad update you will find in this SS. (Coz it's by me).

*******


College
Mr. Swan's Class
Aaliya's POV

College. There have been so many pleasant things at college. That masti. That fun. Staying up late. Romeo and juliet plays. Celebrating all festivals like never else. This isn't a college, its a world itself.

"Hey Aaliya!" Zain called out as he took the seat beside me. "Are you crying?"

"No. Why- Why would I cry?" I said quickly trying to hide my tears and smile a bit. But it's Zain after all. I wouldn't even think of it and he'd already know.

"Aaliya. Are you upset about college ending?"

"Yes!" I said as I hugged him tightly. He chuckled.

"Oh Aaliya. You are crushing me yaar." He said laughing.

"Zain. College is ending. Its ENDING." I cried even more.

"Oh Aaliya don't cry dear." He tried to comfort me.


Oh does he even know?
No, he doesn't.
He doesn't know the reason I am crying.
Is not purely because college's ending.
Its because... HIM.

I LOVE HIM.
From the starting.
But Sanam was always there as Zain's gf.
Confessing my feelings would be embarassing myself.



About 8 Months Later
College Farewell Party
Sanam's House
Zain's POV

"Hey Tanya. Have you seen Aaliya anywhere?" I asked Tanya. We were at Sanam's house and Aaliya wasn't here yet. I know she's somewhere crying her heart out because college's over. And she was the one who loved college the most.

"No Zain. I'm looking for her only." She replied.

"Hey guys. Who're you looking for?" Priya entered.

"Priya have you seen Aaliya anywhere?" I asked her.

"Yeah she called Sanam up." She called Sanam? Why didn't she call me? And why the hell didn't Sanam tell me about it? I am so worried sick here.

"Wh- What did she say?" I tried to hide my concern.

"She said she'll not be coming today." WHAT?

"Why?" Tanya asked.

"I don't know Tanu. She said that she's busy." Priya replied. BUSY? She can't be busy. Not only on this day. Not on college farewell party.

"Is she- umm.. Going somewhere?" I asked.

"No. She said she wants to stay home." GOOD. I am going at her home!

"Okay Priya and Tanu. Will catch you guys later." I said as I ran off leaving them. I am dammm sure I heard Tanya saying "Madly in love."

Is she true?
Am I actually in love?

I get in my car. Aaliya, here I come!


*******

Next by Priya.
Hope you liked it.
PM's by Priya.

Thanks a lot all.
Hope it wasn't rubbish.

Thank you so much! 😃😃


Edited by harshadcrazyfan - 10 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".