Zaya os: What the hell is going on!!(updated,pg-2 and pg-5)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Here is an os I want to write but before that I want all of you to know the concept and it depends on the response I get from u all.
So basically this will be a funny os where there is a power cut at barkat villa and Zaya will be alone, they are trying to romance but things will not turn out as they want it to end up and there will be a lot of confusion between them.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really interesting concept
Do write
And please do it soon n do pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting concept
continue asap
nd thanx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Plz continue, I love power cutouts
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very intresting concept !!
Continue fast
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you for your response.I'll update the os by today evening.
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Everyone was out of barkat villa due to their respective reasons leaving Zain and Aliya alone.

Zain phoned Aliya

Zain-Wow MEZ I am so excited for tonight. Tonight we will break all the barriers and tonight will be the most memorable night.

Aliya-Enough of your filmy talks, don't be too desperate about tonight, you very well know what happened last time and you ended up with a fractured leg. Therefore, this time better be careful.

Zain-Yeah I know what all happened the previous time (annoyed) but this time I am not going to let anyone come between us. Neither the kids nor the phone

Zain's excitement had no bonds, as he was confident that today nothing would go wrong. Therefore, he wrapped up all his work early so that he could arrive to BV as soon as possible

Zain entered BV with a red rose and thought of surprising Aliya and on the other side Rocket entered BV with his girlfriend to hide from the goons.

Roket-Falani tonight we have to fpend(spend) our night here at BV.

Shalini-What if someone sees us?

Rocket-No one will catch uf (us) here af (as) far as I know everyone is out and there is no one in the house .

Zain enters their room as well as Rocket enters with Shalini as soon as they enter there is a power cut and the room becomes dark. No one is able to see anything.

Zain- where are you Aliya.I am here with a bunch of roses for you.

Aliya-Kitkit can't you see that there is a power cut and you are giving me roses.

Rocket-How can I fee(see) when there is no light,have you gone mad falini.

Aliya-what are you saying Zain? Fee? Falini?Are you in your senses?

Zain-What are you saying Aliya? When did I mention Falini or fee.I think you need to go to a psychiatrists.

Zain held Rocket's hand tightly as he was about to fall and he thought that he was holding Aliya's hand.

Zain-Why are your hands so rough and hairy and macho type? What you had today?

Rocket came to know that Zain and Aliya are at home so he decided to sneak out with shalini.

Aliya-seriously, Zain what is wrong with you. I'm standing here near the door and I am not holding your hand.(annoyed)

Zain-Then who is this? Oh, no Aliya there is a thief in our house, please save me Aliya.(scared)

Rocket sneaked out while Zain was standing in Rocket's place. Aliya came towards Zain and without waiting for a second; she slapped Zain hard on his face.

Zain-(shocked) Ouch. It's me Aliya your kitkit knew that you had a habit of slapping everyone but at least this time I was not at fault (pout)

Aliya-I am sorry I thought that the thief was there. Actually, you know na that whenever something wrong is going on my hand automatically starts working that way.

Zain-hmm.I know I was feeling sorry for the thief, as you know I am use to it.

Aliya-Zain stop your kitkit now (annoyed) we have to find the thief.

Guys sorry for the late update and again sorry for the half update. Half of it will be updated tomorrow for sure.

Edited by ank_23 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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First one to comment...
Well it was hilarious...
Loved it...
Cannot stop laughing...
U r awesome...
Pls continue it soon...
Cannot wait...
And pm me also when u do..
May I know ur name or ur name is ank?
Edited by iluvuzaya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

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First one to comment...
Well it was hilarious...
Loved it...
Cannot stop laughing...
U r awesome...
Pls continue it soon...
Cannot wait...
And pm me also when u do..
May I know ur name or ur name is ank?

thanks for liking it and my name is ankita.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ank_23


thanks for liking it and my name is ankita.

that's a good name

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