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haania

@butterfly20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#641

Originally posted by: Laila_Shiri_Lee
arey waah
i wasnt expecting to see last chapter aswel
thanks so much for updating so quickly
now i will sleep in peace lol
loved this and myt read from start tmorro
write more soon
and thanks for such an awesome story

Me to don't want to finish it..

but i planned this from start.

hehehehe...sleep peacefully...lol.

Thanks dear..

i wanna make index but i don't have time..so sorry if u face difficulty searching through pages..

awww your welcome dear...😊

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haania

@butterfly20

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#642

Originally posted by: katmaan
Wow hania ...I loved it ...shit its over I don't want it to get over so soon ...but now ur choice but then u can at least start new story pls and yes the last part was hot uhhh I am went and drank water after reading ...it pls write soon

Thanks khayti..

And thanks for liking this...

that was all your love and support that i could complete it..

hehehe...ziada hot hogya kia???😉

mjhy to bht neend aa ri thi jb main type kar rahi thi..😕

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haania

@butterfly20

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#643

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb
The end ! I loved the fact that she trusted him sorry skipped the gutter part too hot for me please keep writing it was superb !

Thanks saleha...

ya ya i know u don't read that stuff...

actually that was alina's wish and i promised her that i will complete it..so ya i wrote that..😉

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haania

@butterfly20

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#644

Originally posted by: Meghapaim
loved the chapter do continue writting ur a fabulous writter

Thanks for liking my work...

and thanks for being there to appreciate my work..

will try to write more on zaya...

thanks again..😃

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seriously???

@Uniquely...me

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#645

Hani I hate you...hate you for completing this...😡

___________________________

But knowing the reason can't force you though...

Really loved both the updates dude...

Nice use of chotu packet...love those CUTIEPIES playing the CHUDAIL game...😆

And ALIYA trusting zain was aw so sweet...

Last part since you dedicated it to alina I could make out KYA go Raha hoga...par thoda thoda Toh pad Liya...😳...

Really awesome story...no one could have used Urdu so much better...

Love you MM for this beautiful story...

Keep on making us drool over Zaya...😛

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Riya

@Riya5666

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#646

Read the three chapters together...

OMG... What an amazing to an amazing story!!!!

Awesome Hania...

Do keep writing yaar...

And now that u have ended this😒

Start ANOTHER ONE...!!!!

I love to read your works Hania!!!!!!

So keep writing...

Awesome once again...

Thanks for the pm...

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haania

@butterfly20

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#647

Originally posted by: 786ahf_bi
Hani I hate you...hate you for completing this...😡
___________________________

But knowing the reason can't force you though...
Really loved both the updates dude...
Nice use of chotu packet...love those CUTIEPIES playing the CHUDAIL game...😆
And ALIYA trusting zain was aw so sweet...
Last part since you dedicated it to alina I could make out KYA go Raha hoga...par thoda thoda Toh pad Liya...😳...
Really awesome story...no one could have used Urdu so much better...
Love you MM for this beautiful story...
Keep on making us drool over Zaya...😛

Thanks habee..

thanks u soo very much for hating me on that...😆 bcuz i can see ur love behind this..😆

Hehehe...itna kuch ni hua yar...but phir bhi kuch na kuch to hua hai..so tu aesi chezen nhn parhti to it's ok..

Thanks for your love,support and appreciation..

love hania.

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haania

@butterfly20

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#648

Originally posted by: ZayaILoveU
Read the three chapters together...
OMG... What an amazing to an amazing story!!!!
Awesome Hania...
Do keep writing yaar...
And now that u have ended this😒
Start ANOTHER ONE...!!!!
I love to read your works Hania!!!!!!
So keep writing...
Awesome once again...
Thanks for the pm...

Thanks for loving this..

it'm my pleasure if u like that..

I have already started on ss...so i will start another when i complete this...

your welcome..

thanks 4 such a lovely comment..

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zayalove

@zayalove

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#649

Sorry sorry sorry for being late...
U know my majboori ...

Loved both the chapters ..aww aliya trusted zain n that hug that confession ...was so cute ...

Omg aliya ka night dress really hot part hanii ..

I m blushing ...

Tu ne meri wish puri kar di ...thank u thank thank u very much ..meri el james behn ...

Ab jaldi se or stories bhi likh ..

Or agar yeh forum pak jane k baad chora na toh main sach main.pak akar tujhe choro gi
Nahi ..

Once again thank u for writing n amazing story ..

Lots of love ..

Teri doosri e james sis ..

Alina :)

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haania

@butterfly20

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#650

Originally posted by: zayalove
Sorry sorry sorry for being late...
U know my majboori ...

Loved both the chapters ..aww aliya trusted zain n that hug that confession ...was so cute ...

Omg aliya ka night dress really hot part hanii ..

I m blushing ...

Tu ne meri wish puri kar di ...thank u thank thank u very much ..meri el james behn ...

Ab jaldi se or stories bhi likh ..

Or agar yeh forum pak jane k baad chora na toh main sach main.pak akar tujhe choro gi
Nahi ..

Once again thank u for writing n amazing story ..

Lots of love ..

Teri doosri e james sis ..

Alina :)