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Posted: 10 years ago

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Continue kab karhi ho karo na tum bhi new year ka gift nahi deri kaya



I'll update it abhi.. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello 😃
Sorry bahut din se update nahi kiya nuh?? No worries.. I'll update 2 parts u All :D

Part 10



Night Time - Aaliya's Room


Hudaifa : aaliya Dinner*enters the room to c it empty.. N the window open*
How dare she?? Bhaag gayi?? Zain ke paas bhaag gayi?? Mei aaj in dono ko chodunga nahi*throws the plate away n walks off*


Hudaifa : himmat kaise huwi uski?? Zarur zain ne kahan hoga ki ghar se bhaag jaao.. In dono ko ab mei nahi chodunga..
Maham : hudaifa kya huwa? Aise gusse mei kahaan jaa rahe ho? Aur aaliya kahaan hai? Phne kyun nahi uthaari woh??? Hudaifa.. Hudaifa sab khairyath toh hai nuh?? Kuch huwa hai kya? Hudaifa?damn it hudaifa i'm talking to u..*hudaifa dosent reply*
Hudaifa : bhaag gayyi
Maham : bhaag gayyi?? Kaun bhaag gayyi? Kahan bhaag gayyi?
Hudaifa : aaliya
Maham : aaliya?
Hudaifa : aaliya bhaag gayyi
Maham : what?? Galat fehmi huwi hogi aapko.. Apne kamre mei hogi.. mei dekhti hoon
Hudaifa : woh nahi hai wahaan maham.. Woh bhaag gayyi
Maham : what do u mean bhaag gayyi hudaifa? Kahaan gayyi? Kuch huwa hai kya tum dono ke beech?
Hudaifa : uss zain ke paas bhaag gayyi*angry*
Maham : zain ke paas?*shocked*
Hudaifa : that creep.. Ussi ne meri aaliya ko bhad kaya.. Ussi ne aaliya ko... Mei usse jaan se maar daalunga*angry*
Maham : hudaifa.. Mujhe plz batao ki aakhir baat kya hai.. Aise aadhe adhoori baat mei kaise..
Hudaifa : woh dono yaahaan is sofe pe... Chi*gives a disgusted luk*
Maham : aaliya zain se mohabbat kar
Hudaifa : koi mohabbat nahi hai yahaan.. Zain sirf uska istemaal kar rahaa hai.. Jab uska dil bhar jaayega tab woh isko chhod dega.. Pata nahi aaliya kyun nahi samaj ri.. Mei jaanta hoon us kamine ko.. Mere ankhoun ke saamne uski 1000 grlfrnds aayi gayyin hai.. Sab jaante boojte mei aaliya ko kaise..?? Usse rok ne ki bahut koshish ki.. Par woh bhaag gayyi.. Bhaag gayyi uske paas*breaks down*
Maham : hudaifa.. Hudaifa sambhaalo apne aap ko.. Mei baat karungi aaliya se.. Mei samjahungi usse.. Lekin hudaifa aapko aaliya ke saath zabardasti nahi karni chahiye thi..
Hudaifa : what do u mean zabardasti nahi karni chahiye thi? Woh apni zindagi us zain ke peeche barbad karne par tuli hai aur tum kehto ho ki mujhe uske saath zabardasti nahi karni chahiye thi?? *angry*
Maham: hudaifa meri baat toh suno.. Kahaan jaa rahe ho??*leaves n maham follows him*


Zain's House


Rizwan : aaliya tum yahaan??
Zain : zain kahaan hai?
Rizwan : zain?? Zain yahi hai.. Ek min.. Zain zain
Zain : kya hai riz... Kyun chill...*comes out of his room*
Aaliya tum yahaan??*goes towards her*
Aaliya tum yahaan kaise?? Hudaifa kahaan hai?hudaifa ne tumhe yahaan aane kaise diya? R u alright?? Damn it halaat dekho tumhari.. Wait.. Aaaliya dont tell me ki tum ghar se bhaag kar aayi ho..*aaliya just luks at him*
Damn it aaliya..pehle hi kya kam problems hai?? Kyun bhaag kar aayi tum?? Hum kuch karte nuh.. Hudaifa ko samjhaate.. Thoda tym lagta par woh samaj jaata.. Itna bada kadam uthaane ki kya zarurat thi tumhe??pata nahi hudaifa kaise react karega?
Aaliya : tumhe abhi bhi bhai ki hi fikr hai nuh?? Mera kya zain?? Mera kya?tum dono ki ladhai mei mera kya role hai? Mei kyun tum dono ke beech phas rahi hoon? Tum dono ki ladhai mei haar toh meri hi honi hai.. Agar tum jeetoge toh b mei haarungi.. Aur agar tum haar gayye toh b mei haar jaaungi.. Meri jeet toh kahin hai hi nahi.. Agar tumhe chunti hoon toh bhai ko kho dungi..Aur agar bhai ko chunti hoon toh tumhe kho dungi.. Har jagah se haar meri hi hai.. Mujhe.. I just want to get away from all of this.. Mujhe plz yahaan se door lekar jaao.. Bas thodi der ke liye.. Phir mei wapaas ghar chali jaaungi.. Plz zain manaa mat karna.. I need you
Zain : par aaliya .. Agar hudaifa ko..
Aaliya : zain plz.. I want to get away from all of this..
Zain : okay theek hai..pehle tum andar aao.. Paani peeyo.. Uske baad mei tumhe lekar chalunga..*makes her sit on the sofa n goes to the kitchen to bring water.. Rizwan follows*


Rizwan : bro.. Kahaan lekar jaayega?? Hudaifa ko pata chalega toh tujhe jaan se maar daalega..
Zain : i know.. Par iski halaat dekhi tune?? Pata nahi kya haal bana liya hai apna.. Ab chahe hudaifa kuch b karle.. Thodi der ke liye mei usse kahi aur lejaata hoon.. Wahaan usse baat karunga.. Samjhaunga.. Woh samaj jaayegi.. Par abhi... I need to take her out..
Rizwan : theek hai.. Hudaifa yahaan toh kaise b aayega.. Aayega toh mei bata dunga ki tu ghar pe nahi hai..ya even better darwaaza hi nahi kholunga.. Phir kya karlega woh?*grins*
Zain : tujhe jo karna hai kar par usko mere aur aaliya ke paas aane mat dena .. Sirf aaj ke liye.. Theek hai?
Rizwan : done bro.. Tere liye kuch n..*hugs zain.. Zain takes water n starts leaving*
Rizwan : abbey sun..
Zain : kya hai?
Rizwan : apne hormones par control rakh.. Pata chala tum dono*winks* aur hudaifa ne maari entry*evil smile*
Zain : usne already hume pagalo ki tarah kiss karte huwe dekh liya..-aur kya dekhna baaki reh gaya hai uska*makes a disgustef face*
Rizwan : matlab tu aur woh aaj raat bhi*winks*
Zain : shut up rizwan.. Kuch b.. She needs me ..
Rizwan ; yes she "needs" you*grins*
Zain : get lost*leaves the kitchen while rizwan laughs*

Zain : aaliya.. Yeh lo Paani peelo..*makes her drink water..*
Aaliya : chale?
Zain : haan chalo.. Mei apni bike ki keys le aaata hoon*goes inside to get his keys.. Aaliya follows him inside*
Aaliya : zain.. Thodi der yahaan tumhare room mei ruk kar jaate hai..
Zain : yahaan?? Par agar .. Nahi koi baat nahi.. Aajaao..*sits on his bed n signals her to come to his bed... Aaliya goes to the bed n rests her head on his chest.. He is half lying half sitting.. Aaliya has her arms wrapped tightly arnd his waist while he rubs her back*
Aaliya : zain.. Agar bhai ne hamare rishte ko.,
Zain : kuch nahi karega hudaifa.. Hum hai nuh.. Mei jaise tumhare maths ke problems ka solution nikaalta tha waise hi is problem ka solution b nikaal lunga.. I luv u aaliya*kisses her forhead*
Aaliya : i luv u too*hugs him tightly.. He takes a blanket n wraps the two of them...And they lay lyk that for an hr..*
Chalo chalte hai.. I need air..*moves away from him..zain gets up n scoops her in his arms.*
Aaliya : zain tum mujhe kahaan lekar jaa rahe ho?
Zain : outhouse*carries her to his parking lot n makes her sit on his bike*
Aaliya : outhouse? Kaunsa outhouse? Kahaan hai outhouse?aur outhouse to ghar ke bahar hota bai nuh.. Phir bike se ... Tum kar kya rahe ho?*confused*
Zain : are meri jaan.. Woh highway par hai.. Bachpan se mei usse outhouse hi bolta hoon.. Pata nahi kyun.. Isiliye uska naam outhouse hi hai..*sits on the bike*
Aaliya : acha...*wraps her arms arnd his waist n rests her head on his shoulder.. Zain starts the bike n they leave*
Edited by ZayaHarshika - 10 years ago
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Part 11


Aaliya : mausam kitna acha hai nuh??
Zain : hmmm...
Aaliya : yaad hai jab baarish huwi thi aur tumne mujhe pehli baar kiss kiya tha?
Zain : haan.. Aur maine socha tha ki tum mujhe thappad marogi.. Par tum toh..*aaliya hits him lightly on his shoulder*
Zain : kya kar rah hai ho? Bike chala rahaan hoon mei..
Aaliya : really?? Bike chala rahe ho??*smirks .. Moves closer n plants a kiss on his neck*
Zain : aaliya.. Dekho mei bike seedhe se nahi chala paaunga..
Aaliya : toh mat chalao*bites his earlobe.. And her hands make their way inside his shirt.. She makes circles on his bare stomach*
Zain : thats it..*stops the bike.. Turns to luk at her.. Moves a lil so that aaliya can come in front.. Aaliya comes in front .. N zain pulls her by her hair n slams his mouth on hers...*

Aaliya : zain.. Outhouse chalo plzz..
Zain : huh??*still kissing her*
Aaliya : out--house--- chalo*moves away*
Zain : ohh haan outhouse ryt... *aaliya gets down n sits behind him again.. N he starts his bike again.. She sleeps on his shoulder while he drives*
Zain : aaliya.. Aaliya.. Utho.. Outhouse aagaya...*tries to wake her up*
Zain : aaliya ... Aaliya..
Aaliya : hmmm...
Zain : outhouse agaya.. Andar chalke sojao..*moves her head from his shoulder n tries to open her eyes..zain gets down while aaliya is still sitting.. He picks her up in his arms bridal style n goes inside the outhouse.. He takes her to his room directly n makes her lie down on his bed.. He covers her up with a blanket n joins her in the bed.. She moves over so that her head is in his chest.. Their fingers entwined..*

Zain : aaliya..
Aaliya : hmmm..
Zain : kya hum sahi kar rahe hai?
Aaliya : i dont care kya sahi hai aur kya galat.. All i knw is i luv u n bhai needs to understand my feelings.. Tym lagega i agree aur mei wait karne ke liye bhi taiyyar hoon..par aaj.. Aaj mujhe tumhari zarurat thi.. Aaj mujhe tumhare paas.. Tumhari baahoun mei rehna tha.. I couldnt stay back in my house zain.. Mujhe tumhare paas aana hi tha.. Aur mei agayyi...*zain kisses her forhead n shuts off the light.. They fall asleep in each others arms*

Zain's House


Hudaifa : zain zain*screams*
Rizwan : hudaifa tu yahaan?*scared*
Maham : hudaifa aaram se..*comes behind hudaifa*
Rizwan : maham tum hudaifa ke saath?
Hudaifa : zain bahar nikal.. Kahaan chupa rakha hai meri behn ko??*searches all the rooms*
Rizwan : hudaifa zain ghar par nahi hai
Hudaifa : ghar par nahi hai?? What do u mean ghar par nahi hai?? *angry*
Rizwan : mujhe nahi pata.. Woh..
Hudaifa : dont u dare rizwan..*holds him by his collar*
Maham : hudaifa.. Chhodo usse*tries to come kn between them*
Hudaifa i said leave
Hudaifa : tum jaante ho nuh ki woh dono kahaan gayye hai?? Aaliya yahaan aayi thi nuh?? Uske baad woh dono yahaan se chale gayye?? Kahaan gaye? I knw ki tumhe pata hai rizwan.. Seedhe seedhe bata de.: baat yaahaan meri behn ki hai..*angry*
Rizwan : mujhe sach mei
Hudaifa : rizwan*screams*
Rizwan : dont scream hudaifa.. Chillana mujhe bhi aata hai.. Haan mujhe pata hai ki woh dono kahaan hai.. Par mei tujhe jahi bataunga.. Kyun bataun mei tumhe?? Tere andar toh feelings hi nahi hai.. Bade daawe karte hai nuh ki mei apni behn se bahut pyaar karta hoon.. Itna hi tha pyaar?? Just because teri behn tere best frnd se pyaar karti hai.. Teri jal gayyi?
Hudaifa : meri kyun jalegi?
Rizwan : kyun nahi jalegi? Dude agar toh waqai mei apni behn se pyaar karta toh itna drama nahi karta.. Aur kya kehrahaan tha tu? Ki zain acha ladka nahi hai? Woh usse use karke chhod dega? Ek baat bata aaj tak khabhi usne kisi ladki ko chuwa tak hai?? Huh?? Mei jaanta hoon .. Aur teri concern teri behn ko leke jayaax hai.. Sab normal bhai ko apni behn ki fikr rehti hai.. Par woh bhai tujh jaise nahi hote.. Ek mauka toh de apni behn ko.. Aur apne so callef best friend ko.. Bechaare ne ek to tere kehne par teri behn ko tuitions padhaane aaya aur agar us dauraan un dono ko ek doosre se mohabbat hogayyi toh whats the big deal hudaifa?? Rai ka pahad kyun bana rahaan hai tu?
Hudaifa : yeh baat mere aur zain ke beech ki hai.. Tu beech mei mat padh..
Rizwan : zain mera bhai jaisa hai.. Jo uski problem woh meri problem.. Arre yaar tu insaan hai ya kya?
Hudaifa : acha.. Itni badi badi baatei kar rahaan hai.. Chal tu bata.. Agar teri behn hoti aur tune apne best frnd ko apne hi ghar mei apne hi living room mei kiss karte huwe dekhe ga toh kaise react karega?? Huh?? Kya bolega? Ki tum dono bilkul sahi jaa rahe ho.. Mujhe tum dono ki rishte par koi aitraaz nahi hai..yeh sab kehta tu? Jab ki tu apne best frnd ki saari baatein jaanta hai?? Yeh bolta tu?
Rizwan : yeh nahi bolta.. Gussa hota.. Lekin tere jaisa react nahi karta.. Tu apne aap ko apni hi behn ki nazro mei neeche giraa rahaa hai hudaifa.. Sambhal jaa.. Aur ek baat.. Mei nahi bataunga ki woh dono kahaan gayye hai.. Mei unlog ke saath hoon.. Aur agar woh bhaag kar nikaah karna chahte hai toh usmei bhi mei unka hi saath dunga*hudaifa leaves in anger*


Outhouse


Aaliya : zain
Zain : hmm..
Aaliya : soye nahi?
Zain : nahi.. Kyun?
Aaliya : zain abdullah*gets up n sits beside him while zain luks at her*
Zain abdullah.. Will u be plz be the father of my child?
Zain : kya?*shocked.. Starts laughing*
Aaliya : kya tum apni jungli billi ke saath apni poori zindagi bitaana pasand karoge?
Zain : aaliya par..
Aaliya : haan ya na
Zain : par aaliya
Aaliya : haan ya na..
Zain : haan.. *aaliya grins*
Waise yeh proposal nikaah ke liye tha ya u knw*smirks*
Aaliya : both*blushes*
Zain : both?? Is it??*smirks*
Aaliya : zain.. Hum bhaagenge toh nahi.. Par bhai ko kisi bhi halaat mei manaana hi hoga.. Kuch socho ki kya kiya jaaye..
Zain : kuch nahi.. Usko bas thoda sa tym do.. Apne aap samaj jaayega..
Aaliya : zain.. Mujhe pregnant kardo
Zain : what???*shocked*
Aaliya : haan.. Tab woh khud hamara nikaah kara denge
Zain : pagal hogayyi tum.. Jaan se maardalega mujhe agar maine tumhe pregnant kardiya toh
Aaliya : acha.. Toh mujhe kidnap karlo.. Aur unko threaten karo ki agar woh hamara nikaah nahi karvaaege toh tum mujhe hamesha ki liye bhagaa loge..*zain starts laughing*
Stop laughing okay.. Yahaan mei hamare liye raaste nikaal rahi hoon aur tum has rahe ho*irritated*
Zain : baby.. U need to sleep.. Pata nahi aise uljalool khayal kaise aarahe hai tumhare dimaag hai*takes her back into his arms but dosent stop laughing*
Aaliya : shut up zain.. *angry*
Zain : kya huwa?? Gussa agaya?*aaliya dosent reply*
Mei tumhare gusse ko kam karne ke bahut saare tareeqe jaanta hoon..Which one do u want?*winks.. Aaliya still dosent reply.. She moves away from him*
Zain : uff.. Itna gussa?? Kahin pehle ki tarah phir mujh par vase toh mahi todogi nuh?
Aaliya : nahi .. Is baar seedha tumhara murder kardungi*angry.. zain laughs..*
Zain : u luk so cute*starts tickling her*
Aaliya : zain nahi.. .zain no*tries to move away but he holds her n tickles her.. She starts laughing*
Zain..aah.. Nahi plz*laughing.. Finally zain stops..*
Zain : iss muskuraahat ko dekhne ke liye taras gaya tha mei*luks at her.. Both of them lying .. Aaliya on the pillow while zain is on his elbow n is luking at her*
Aaliya : thanx zain.. Mujhe yahaan laane ke liye.. I luv u*gets up n kisses his nose*
Zain : i luv u too..*kisses her forhead*
Chalo ab sojao.. Subah wapaas apne jallad bhai ke yahaan hai*winks.. Aaliya laughs n they sleep peacefully in each others arms*


Outside Zain's House



Maham : hudaifa... Ek baar meri baat sunlo plz*follows him back to the car*
Hudaifa : bolo
Maham : hudaifa hum aaliya hamare rishte ke baare mei kaise react kar regi ko lekar darr rahe the nuh
Hudaifa : maham yeh hamare baare mei baat karna tym nahi hai
Maham : i know hudaifa.. I'm poori baat toh suno
Hudaifa : bolo
Maham : agar woh b aise hi react karti jaise aap kar rahe ho toh kaisa feel hota aapko?? Hurt hote nuh aap ki aapki khudki behn aapki mohabbat ko nahi samaj paa rahi.. Aaliya mujhe b bachpan se jaanti hai hudaifa.. Usse bhi mere baare mei bahut si aisi baatein pata hai jo aapko nahi hai aur jispar woh aitraaz kar sakti hai jaise ki aap kar rahe hai.. But thoda sensitive hojaaye hudaifa .. Aaliya is still v naive.. Usko..
Hudaifa : exactly.. Usko samaj nahi aarahaa hai ki zain ek din usko chhod dega
Maham : aapko zain se itni kyun problem hai? Jitna maine usse jaana he seemed lyk a good guy to me.. Ab plz mei usse bahut tym se jaanta hoon n all nahi sunna mei.. I'm sure aapki b girlfrnds rahi hongi past mei.. Aapke bhi bahut brkups huwe honge.. Aap iss basis pe zain ka character decide nahi karsakte.. Aur woh aapka best frnd hai.. I'm sure woh aapki behn ko dhoka nahi dega.. Kyunki agar aisa hota toh yaa toh woh aapka best frnd nahi hota ya woh aaliya ke saath nahi hota..agar woh aaliya ke baare mei serious nahi hota toh woh aur aaliya aaj ek saath nahi hote.. Dont be so harsh on them hudaifa.. Aaj sirf bhaage hai.. Kal bhaag kar nikaah karlenge...
Hudaifa : aisa kuch nahi karenge woh log.. Mei aaliya ko jaanta hoon.. Woh bhaage gi nahi..
Maham : hudaifa plz kuch aisa waisa mat karna jiski wajah se woh majboor hojaaye ki woh
Hudaifa : i wont.. Par abhi i want aaliya back at any cost.. Uske baad hum is baare mei discuss karenge..
Maham : theek hai.. Par hudaifa.. Dont force ur decisions on her.. Acha aapko idea hai ki woh dono kahaan gayye honge?
Hudaifa : zain's outhouse.. Woh jab b upset hota tha.. Wahaan jaata tha.. Usse wahaan ajeeb sa sukoon mehsoos hota hai.. I'm sure wahi gayye honge.. Chalo*they drive*


Outhouse


Maham : aapke paas keys b hai??*shocked*
Hudaifa : haan.. Us idiot ne hi di thi
Maham : par aise andar ghusna
Hudaifa : koi buri baat nahi hoti jab kisi ki behn andar hoti hai toh..*enters the house*
Zain.. Aaliya.. Jahaan b ho bahar aajao..zain aaliya??*goes to zain's bedroom.. Switches on the light n sees them sleeping together peacefully*
Edited by ZayaHarshika - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sumi u left it incomplete :( but I loved it a lot waiting what will happen ahead ...update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow
2-2 updates

Hudaifa is searching for aliya like a mad man.

I'm glad rizwan knocked some sense in his thick head

Thank god maham was also there
She showed him aliya s perspective

I guess hudaifa is calmed down a little

Zain himself gave the key of the outhouse to hudaifa and took aliya there!
Stupid man

But he had said that next morning aliya will be I her house
I guess that is the reason he took her her to outhouse cause he knew hudaifa had the keys

Whatever may the reason be
I loved the drama

My cute love birds were sleeping when hudaifa came
may be even his heart melts a little to see them cutely sleeping


Awesome drama dear
Loved it

Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
both the update were ausome wapas bhai ki entry pe rok diya phir se hume lamba intezaar karna hoga plzz is baar thodi jaldi update karna pata hai thodi lachi bangayi hu
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Posted: 10 years ago
love both part.
hidaifa is too much why he have so much problem with ZaYa relationship.
love ZaYa moment.
thanks for pm and update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved both the parts SUMI...
Nice to see Rizwan knocking some sense...
And zaya bike romance...😳...
Waiting for hudaifa's reaction...
AWESOMELY WRITTEN...
Continue ASAP...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love both d parts...zaya's romance..loved it...eagrly waiting for d next part...pls cont soon...
Edited by Deepika_Zaya - 10 years ago
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LOVED BOTH THE PARTS!! THEY WERE AMAZING!! RIZWAN IS A LOYAL FRND!! ITS GOOD TO SEE HIS THIS SIDE AS WELL! N THAT HUDAIFA! HE SHOULD UNDERSTAND NOW... N MAHAM IS SO NICE...
THNX FOR UPDATING 2 PARTS.. DO UPDATE SOON! :);)

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