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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Meghapaim

Bechari aaliya zain again broke her heart

Wonderful update do continue

Thank you..will continue it soon..iss pure series mein Aliya hi bechari hai😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nazzz16

Amazing part !!!
Very emotinal :(
Continue soon
N thnxx for pm :)

Glad that u liked it..ur welcome for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zayalove

Ankita i loved it
So damn amazing ...
Hope zaya will b together ...
Update soon
Thanks for the pm ...
N i requst u to plzz write n epilogue for this story ...plzzz
Lots of love and huggs
Alina

Thanks Alina for loving it..I'll for sure write an epilogue for this ss..from my side also lots of love and 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hello, everyone this is the last chapter other than that I have an epilogue for you all because Alina asked me to write so, this chapter will have a cliffhanger so the suspense is not killed yet. Please give your feedback would love to find your views on it.

Chapter-7

I Lost her

Love dies when you break the heart of your beloved. When you love someone then try to understand what kind of thing he or she expect from you rather than just crushing their dreams without thinking twice.

Zain's anxiousness was beyond limits his senses were not working he was just praying that any harm should not touch Aliya. He knew that he made a grave mistake by breaking off the wedding.

Zain grabs the keys of his car and rushes in search of Aliya. Outside it was raining heavily and soon darkness took over the sky.

Zain-Allah please don't let any harm cause to Aliya. She is my life if anything happens to her I won't be able to live.

On the other side, Aliya was walking inertly on the middle of a road with raindrops taking away her tears as if Allah was trying to console a broken soul.

Suddenly Zain experienced something is wrong with the car He stopped the car and stepped out while raindrops spattered on his face. All of a sudden, memories related to their first night sparked into his mind.

Zain-Why MEZ I always have to lose you. You always have let off all my mistakes then why not this one. Please come back I can't(He broke down among the crowd as he had no strength to utter a word)

Aliya walked ignoring people's stare, No one was there to comfort her and now no one could console her she was broken into uncountable pieces she stopped by a bridge and stood there staring at the flowing river.

Aliya's monologue

(Shouting on top of her voice) Zain you shattered everything that we had between us. I never felt alone even when you were not there with me since I had you in my heart, your memories, and your essence everything. Today you snatched away all my memories, our dreams that we intended together. Why Zain you did this to us Zain I was there with you at every step of your life whenever you crumbled, I supported you then why you left me alone in my life. I respected every decision of yours and even if we were against each other, I never left your side but now I don't have that strength in me to go through any more pain. You were the world to me if you are not by my side then this world has no importance in my life.

She was on the verge of ending her life. She just wanted to get rid of all her miseries; she took a long sigh of breath and jumped off ending all her suffering.

As see was falling off the bridge all those happy moments spent with Zain was reminisced by her and a smile crept on her face.

Zain was running restlessly expecting to see one glance of her he was feeling uneasiness as something was going far away from him. He could feel the silence of the night is telling him to run and get hold of your life.

Zain's monologue

MEZ why are you running from me you very well know I am an idiot I do things without giving it a thought. Let me get a hold off you I won't let you go anywhere. You have to scold me if you want then you can hit me also but please don't leave me (tears rolling down his eyes) I don't deserve you in my life you were always there with me but I have always given you pain, suffering, insults. After dad I got to know how it feels when a loved one leaves you, Aliya please be fine, please be fine. Your kitkit is waiting for you I will embrace you my whole life, we have to see our children, our grandchildren we have to travel a long way please come back.

He saw an unknown number flashed on his phone's screen he was confident that it is Aliya.

Zain-Where are you Aliya I was so worried for you. I really am sorry for (he was interrupted by the caller)

Caller-Hello Mr. Abdullah I am sorry to say but we found you wife's phone here beside the bridge and

Zain knew what was coming from him he stood still among the busy crowd.

Three years later

Reporter-Mr. Abdullah how it feels you are the author of one of the most successful novel of recent times.

Zain-I wrote this book to put forward all the mistakes, which I have done in my life so that others should not commit such things in their life because love is a beautiful feeling it just teaches you how to live for others and when you(he stopped)

Reporter-I want to ask why the last chapter in incomplete as I have not seen novelist publishing an incomplete book.

Zain-Well honestly, I really do not know I didn't find an ending maybe.

He walks out with tears on his eyes. He wipes them suddenly his phone rings.

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Posted: 10 years ago
A very emotional chapter once again..
I have gut feeling that aliya did not commit suicide and she is still alive..
So zain became writer..
Continue soon..
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice and emotional...
Feeling bad for aliya...
Plz continue soon...

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Posted: 10 years ago
it was very emotional , i can imagine zain state i want him to find his aliya i am sure she is still alive . Continue soon loved it .
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was beautiful...
Awesome dude...very emotional...
Love the way you ended it to keep us guessing...
But loved it..
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was awesome!
I loved the way you ended it 👏
Well there's still epilogue 😛
Continue soon !
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing part ...!!
Very emotional .. :(
I think aliya is alive n zain will get her back :)
Zain becomes a writer ... Wow
Continue fast !!

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