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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

That was beautiful
loved it to the core Sanika

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Anagha

@Ana_rockz

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

It was so beautiful n emotional

I am crying

Beautifully written!!

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katmaan

@katmaan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Subhe subhe rula diya ...

Ohhk but let me tell you I loved it

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Kiran

@neenzz

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Aww sanika, it was so good, i was on the verge of crying, but i didn't want to cry so i had to control, but i really hope aaliya was not dead like rizwan, but i know she was, at least that's what asmara saying, ."... My heart broke into a million pieces again." Conveyed to me.

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Akanksha vats

@taylor.swift

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

this was amazing as always, u r a amazing writer plz never stop writing ,a very emotional update n thanx for the pm

- anki

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Pooja

@pooja_shineStar

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

oh my god!
this is soo perfect & sad at the same time!
superb, really well written:)

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simran422

@simran422

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Sanika you are just too good myan!

Loved it!

Such a emotional OS 👏

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Beautiful, Sanika. Very well described, so subtle, yet emotional. Loved it, :)

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RUHANIKAA

@RUHANIKAA

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

it was BEAUTIFUL!!!!👏👏👏...PERFECTLY written⭐️❤️...thanks for d pm

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Sorry Sorry Sorry...!
I had my test today. English!
Toh mood thoda off hai!
Theek tha, accha nahi.
And mujhe Top krna tha!

This is... HATS OFF TO YOU!
Zain is a NANU???
Your earlier One-Shot : Minutes Apart
Had both ZaYa as a senior citizen.
And Zain thinks its Aaliya like Ayesha?
This is beautiful Sanika!
I completely love this.
I would read it over and over again.
And still won't ever get bored of it.

Thanks for pm.
-Tanu.

P.S.- You senti? Y?

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