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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: madhufx9...


What happened to me, what u sensed😆I was upset with current track Richa😛

Ohkay ...Lol
I mixed 2 comments
Btw u were upset with current track? Aur mujhe laga pata nhi kyu upset h tu 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update dear... Plz cont. Soon
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And thank u soo much for d PMs
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Posted: 11 years ago
The update is S.P.E.C.T.U.L.A.R😊
Enjoyed and loved it😛
U did a magnificent job👏
~My favourite dialog is~😆
(" u know zain I'm dam excited for today... I seriously love to see Apple trees...,". " U never saw them before?" ".i have seen 2 years ago when I went to Shimla." "then what is so.new now... for being so excited?")
~My favourite scene is~😆
First whole passage and Last whole passage("Hey wet pants, u r early... waiting for me? " "u little cat, don't u dare to call me Wet pants again". Aliya just smirked at him and sat beside him. " u know zain I'm dam excited for today... I seriously love to see Apple trees...,". " U never saw them before?" ".i have seen 2 years ago when I went to Shimla." "then what is so.new now... for being so excited?" " leave it, it's waste of time to talk with you, u r not a NATURE BUG like me, u r so boring... lol ur wife ll be the unluckiest girl, I pity her" "what did.u say?, forget abt my wife, u r husband will be the most pitiable man on the earth... u know u r not NATURE BUG, u r like BED BUG, u ll such his blood completely." Aliya just turned her furiously to other side.) AND. (Return journey to hotel was silent, they were tired, tired.of walking, arguing and enjoying. Feeling drowsy while getting down from footboard, Aliya was abt to fall, but zain caught her. Aliya looked at him and he immediately left her which made her fall down." ouchhh zain why did u leave me?" " I'm sorry I was scared, I thought u might scold me, remember our first meet, that's y I left u". Said zain brushing his hair. Aliya fumed with anger, "and now I ll not become angry right, go to hell, I'm leaving, I'm tired" said Aliya walking into her room. )
This was one refreshing update of yours
Thanks for the PM😊
Edited by sazebuna - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was totally Awesome !!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏...Amazingly written👍🏼...Loved it a lottt.❤️ ...Thank u so much for d update🤗.. Thanks for pm...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sarcastic_teen

Ohkay ...Lol
I mixed 2 comments
Btw u were upset with current track? Aur mujhe laga pata nhi kyu upset h tu 😆

Yes dear😕 😆aren't u😭, may be u might have got used, after madhubala, I donno y they spoil good shows richa
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sazebuna

The update is S.P.E.C.T.U.L.A.R😊

Enjoyed and loved it😛
U did a magnificent job👏
~My favourite dialog is~😆
(" u know zain I'm dam excited for today... I seriously love to see Apple trees...,". " U never saw them before?" ".i have seen 2 years ago when I went to Shimla." "then what is so.new now... for being so excited?")
~My favourite scene is~😆
First whole passage and Last whole passage("Hey wet pants, u r early... waiting for me? " "u little cat, don't u dare to call me Wet pants again". Aliya just smirked at him and sat beside him. " u know zain I'm dam excited for today... I seriously love to see Apple trees...,". " U never saw them before?" ".i have seen 2 years ago when I went to Shimla." "then what is so.new now... for being so excited?" " leave it, it's waste of time to talk with you, u r not a NATURE BUG like me, u r so boring... lol ur wife ll be the unluckiest girl, I pity her" "what did.u say?, forget abt my wife, u r husband will be the most pitiable man on the earth... u know u r not NATURE BUG, u r like BED BUG, u ll such his blood completely." Aliya just turned her furiously to other side.) AND. (Return journey to hotel was silent, they were tired, tired.of walking, arguing and enjoying. Feeling drowsy while getting down from footboard, Aliya was abt to fall, but zain caught her. Aliya looked at him and he immediately left her which made her fall down." ouchhh zain why did u leave me?" " I'm sorry I was scared, I thought u might scold me, remember our first meet, that's y I left u". Said zain brushing his hair. Aliya fumed with anger, "and now I ll not become angry right, go to hell, I'm leaving, I'm tired" said Aliya walking into her room. )
This was one refreshing update of yours
Thanks for the PM😊

Dear, thank u so much for lovely comment, yeah even I enjoyed writing it😆
They are two wierd souls feeling.bad for themselves unknowingly
Last part i decided update in last moment bcz I want update to.end with their fight😉 like always😆
Thank u dear
Pm my pleasure, love to read ur comments
Edited by madhufx9... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveBeintehaa

Amazing update dear... Plz cont. Soon
..
And thank u soo much for d PMs

Thank u dear😊
My pleasure😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RUHANIKAA

It was totally Awesome !!!!👏...Amazingly written👍🏼...Loved it a lottt.❤️ ...Thank u so much for d update🤗.. Thanks for pm...😊

Thank u Ruhii.., thank u so much
Thank u so much for comment🤗
My pleasure dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Thank u so much darling... while updating i.thought no one ll be there to read😛
Ha only 2 more days😉, yeah complete package of torture which he have to bear through out his.
life😆
Even I'm very sad dear, but sterday habeeba asked me to write, I was trying to.write from 2 days but unable pen down anything,
Yeah I ll.give another update tomorrow

even I am super upset with d current track madhu 😭
Hopefully my hug will cheer u up a little 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update but it was lil short rather than others but keep writing u r concepts r awesome do update the nxt part of teri meri luv story too

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