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Posted: 11 years ago

Kyu yaar y thank u?, did u read it?
Anyways, my pleasure😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
its so so amazing
love their kitkit
cont ASAP
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Posted: 11 years ago
Madhu Can you put up an Index in the first post? I seem lost 😳 I read only two chapters!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat

Madhu Can you put up an Index in the first post? I seem lost 😳 I read only two chapters!

Wait dear, see I added it in 4th comment, just check once dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepika_Zaya

its so so amazing
love their kitkit
cont ASAP

Thank u deepika😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Madhu🤗
Amazing update😃
I really enjoyed it❤️
poor Zain akele hi photograps lera tha😆
N Aaliya found a new friend hmm...
Madhu mujhe lagta hai ki the boy which gulam selected 4 Aaliya is Zain😆
Can't wait 4 the next part
Tnx 4 pm😃
Love Aman❤️

P.S.Extremely sorry 4 the late reply😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Madhu can you just pat yourself how wonderful you have written 👏
continue soon. lots of love ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: saranvir

Madhu can you just pat yourself how wonderful you have written 👏

continue soon. lots of love ❤️

Oh, I'm embarassed😳😆, anyways thank u so much dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aman1605

Hey Madhu🤗

Amazing update😃
I really enjoyed it❤️
poor Zain akele hi photograps lera tha😆
N Aaliya found a new friend hmm...
Madhu mujhe lagta hai ki the boy which gulam selected 4 Aaliya is Zain😆
Can't wait 4 the next part
Tnx 4 pm😃
Love Aman❤️

P.S.Extremely sorry 4 the late reply😳😳

Thank u so much aman, I'm very glad u enjoyed it,
Photographs yeah poor.zainu
The boy gulaam selected... zainu..., oh then it's their destiny😉, but donno whether they ll confront their love and stand for it or not😳
U r welcome aman🤗, late reply not a problem dear, I'm happy u read it and enjoyed it😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Soulmates
Chapter 5

Hello.all, here I'm back with today's dose.of torture, I thought of updating smo other work of mine, but so much negativity in forum, people are sad so I thought i shud update our pagal ss Soulmates. So that atleast this ss followers ll smile for sometime.


"Answer me if u want to talk with me" said Aliya enjoying her cup of coffee. "Leave this Aliya... you are being so childish... is this any Quiz" asked zain teasing her. "You didn't ask whether it's a quiz or something when u answered my first question" " y are u being so serious abt this, it doesn't make sense" " I know but u have to answer me" said aliya curtly. " but atleast try to listen what I want to say aliya..." NO" ,
" you HEAD STRONG ELEPHANT, okay I need time...". okay tomorrow u answer me said Aliya walking away.

Ayat asked Aliya to come with her to have dinner with Rizwaan. Aliya agrees to her. Zain and rizwaan were waiting for Ayat and aliya. Zain saw Aliya coming with Ayat. " GOD this girl, look.at her CRAZY DEVIL, she doesn't have problem with anyone, except me, she is laughing like MANIAC". Aliya and Ayat joined them. Aliya said hi to Rizwan, he too greeted her back. Zain greeted both Aliya and Ayat. Aliya didn't respond. " So did u get Answer" asked Aliya smirking at him. Zain just nodded No. Zain fumed with anger. " she greeted Rizwan like a WARM PUPPY and look at her now she is Smirking at me like a Like WILD DRAKULA". Dinner went well. All of them had a nice talk, except Aliya and Zain.

Next morning Aliya came out early just like yesterday for a small morning walk. She saw zain Already waiting for her outside she just casually walked to him " So do u have answer you CRAZY FROG" asked aliya. "FROG"... " u mean me.. FROG..." "yes Frogs wait for rain eagerly and here u are waiting for me eagerly like a Frog" said aliya teasing him. " u SILLY MOUSE hold ur SHARP tongue" "U BLUNT HEAD don't u dare.." " ok.. Ok.. leave it now tell me do u have answer" asked Aliya Trying her best to catch.a butterfly again.
Aliya not paying attention to his talk made him fume.with anger.. "this girl is getting on my nerves." " Yes I have" said zain, " what's that". " It's again an ANT Aliya..."
Aliya turned to him holding a yellow butterfly and looked at him in confusion".
"Yes DONALD DUCk" "wait a minute ,Who is DONALD DUCK ?" "ha ha obviously you, when u try to catch that poor butterfly u walk like DONALD DUCK, lol very funny u walk u know". Aliya imagined herself like a donald duck, she got annoyed. " Very funny tell me answer" said aliya cursing him. " Yesterday's my answer was RED ANT and today's my answer is BLACK ANT" said zain winking at her. Aliya laughed out little crazily leaving
poor butterfly between she asked him for second answer. Zain plucked one bunch of flowers a d gave it to Aliya, Aliya looked.at him with questioning eyes. "Yesterday u were having breakfast, I mean sucking nectar like a BEE... after ur BUTTERFLY HUNTING , u BUTTERFLY HUNTER "said zain teasing her. To zains surprise she didn't get angry and she smiled to him tapping his back slowly. Zain felt relaxed and tried to answer her second question trying to collect courage...bcz he knows answer might make her WILD. " and second answer is "ALIYA", it's you, I think it can be only you, no other creature can make sounds for most of time other than u" said zain running away from her. "You DIRTY DONKEY" Aliya started chasing him and she was throwing small stones on him, zain was trying his best to escape. After few min of chase, aliya sat down being tired zain too seated beside her.
"So do u listen to me" asked zain.. Aliya looked.at him, she gave him a small smile "actually good start of a day, not bad u tried to make me laugh, ok I'm impressed, I'm excusing u"
"So do u listen to me now atleast" asked zain making a puppy face. " No yaar, I cannot listen to u right now., Come let's go and have breakfast I'm damm hungry " said aliya and started walking dragging zain too along with her.

"So u r a South Indian?", " yes, but how do.u know". " u ordered idly as ur breakfast" said zain. " Now I can understand y u r this NUTS". " zain shut ur mouth, if not u know very well, what can I do..." " ok.. Ok.. I'm sorry, now can I speak?". " Aliya I think u shud not fight with me anymore, u know right, now Rizwan and Ayat. will sit together, will Roam together and we are left alone so it's better u stop fighting with me " said zain.
"Excuse me?" " it's u who fights with me.. "Said aliya furiously... "It's u u who irritates me me more.." said zain more furiously... " if im so irritating then y do u want to talk to me HEAD CASE, remember I have found a friend". "HEAD CASE" ..me, u
THIRSTY VAMPIRE u r sucking me." being impulsive Aliya couldn't take it anymore. She took a glass of water which was infront of her and threw it on him. Next moment zain too took glass full of water placed infront him and threw it on Aliya, but Aliya bent down so only her hair and half face became wet. Zain tried to take another glass but aliya stopped him " enough zain we are done with this game"." GAME It's game for u SILLY FOOL, u made my dress wet and it's game for u." " chill zain leave it, let's not fight, here after, I'm tired". "That's better, let's not become enemies" said zain.

"U know what zain,", zain looked at her, " u r not good at outdoor games too, I mean u lost In our water game too" teased aliya. Zain clinched his fist, trying to control his anger. At that moment he just want to hit that MAD BITCH standing infront of him, but he kept quite.

"Okay let's move, we are getting late" said aliya. " let's not be enemies " said zain again reminding her. Aliya said bye and started walking, suddenly she turned back and said
" Hey WET PANTS go,.change ur dress, if not people ll laugh at u" zain walked to her furiously. " hey u WET HAIR hold ur tongue." "lol WET HAIR, that's not a problem, people compliment me that I look Hot in wet hair " said aliya walking out. Aliya shouted "forget this, Let's not be enemies, Remember I have a friend". Zain stamped his foot to ground in frustration. " Awww this HARD NUT...". "Hot and this bitch... God.. hmm she is a
HOT BITCH".

That's all guys, okay today's update I thought something and I ended up with some thing
After today's update I'm scared, I mean, can I end story? I'm adding more kit kit, and I don't know whether it's entertaining or irritating. Pls let me know, pls do comment and hit like button. Today I'm really scared all tomatoes are welcome😛
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