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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 3:

At morning in Zaya room:
Aaliya:arre...Kitkit utho...utho 7 baj gaye hain
Zain:Sone dona...maamu ki bhanji
Aaliya:8 baje flight hai...utho...
Zain slowly got up but dtill wasn't in his senses.
Zain:Kya hai?
Aaliya:7 baj gaye hain!!!!
Zain:Kya???
Main to abhi tayar bhi nahi hua...
He runs to the washroom.
He comes out of the washroom.
Zain:Maamu ki bhanji mera towel rakh diya tumne?
Aaliya:haan...
Zain:Mera toothbrush?
Aaliya:Haan...
Zain:Mere earplugs...
Aaliya:Haan...
Sab rakh liya hai!
Suddenly there is a knock on the door.
Aaliya opens the door and sees Osmaan.
Aaliya:Maamu aap?
Osmaan:Haan main...kyun main nahiaa sakta??
Aaliya:Maamu aaye...
Osmaan:Aaliya dekhna tumhe surraiya begum bula rahi hain...begum ne mujhe bheja hai
Aaliya:Jee mamu...
Aaliya leaves from there.
Zain:Hey Dad! kya baat hai subhe subh mere room mein...
Osmaan:Tumse kuch baat karni hain...
Dekho Zain Aaliya tumhari biwi hain...aur UK mein tumhe pata hain kaisa environment wha ka...
Main tumse ek Maamu ke tor par aya hoon...apni bhanji ki surakha ke liye...plz...uska dhyan rakhna...
Zain:Dad aap kya keh rahe...main uska dhyan rakhlunga...
Main bada hogaya hoon
They both laugh out loud
Osmaan:Waada?
Zain:waada!
Suddenly Aaliya enters the room
Aaliya:Maamu maamine toh nahi bulaya tha...
Ek min aap aur Zain kya kar rahe thein...
Zain:Maamu ki bhanji yeh todi persnol baat hain...
*Winks at Osmaan*
Osmaan:Chlo beta flight ka time ho gaya hain...
They leave the house.
At the airport:
Shabana:Aaliya apna khyal rakhna aur haan Zain ko ang mat karna...
Zain:Mai hoon na...*Makes that srk pose*
Shabana:Chal badmash...
Osmaan:Zain tumhe waada yaad to hain?
Zain:Haan Dad
Surraiya:Aacha time guzarna...allah hafiz...
Zain and aaliya:Allha hafiz
They both sat in the plain..their seats were beside each other.
Zain saw aaliya crying.
Zain:Oye maamu ki bhanji tum ro kyun rahi ho?
Aaliya:Zain...main maamu,maami,abbu aur ammi se teen sal tak nahi mil paungi...
Zain:Toh kya...tum mere saath rahogi akele...sirf main aur tum...hum dono ek kamre mein band hojaye aur chabi ghum hojaye...
Zain slowly comes near aaliya...
Aaliya:yeh kya kar raho...allah tauba allah tauba...
hato hits him lightly with her hand on his hand.
Zain to himself:
Chalo iss bahane cum se cum iska mood to theek ua...
They reached UK
At the airport:
Aaliya sees a young couple:
Girl:Baby I LOVE U!
And crashes her lips on the boy
Boy:Baby I LOVE U TOO!
Now the boy kisses her...
Aaliya looks on the other side where...
The girl is in the hands of his boy.
She sees a boy walking towards her...
Boy:Hey young lady!Shall i help you in taking out your stuff..
Aaliya:Huh...
He comes near her...Shall I?
Zain:No..No need..
Boy:Hey man!Who are u?
Zain:I am her husband...now u can leave!
Boy:Sorry!
He leaves from there...
Zain and aaliya start moving...while still some boys are having an eye on aaliya..
Zain sees that she is worried and remembers his waada.
He slowly puts his arm around aaliya's waist...tightly.
Aaliya:Yeh kya kar raho?
Zain:Chup chap chali raho...aur waise bhi tum meri biwi ho mera hak toh banta hain tumpe...inh ladko ka toh main mud tod du...
Aaliya just kept on listening to him and she aalowed him to keep his hand around her waist.
She was never so close to Zain or either Zain was...
Zain was slowling realizing something...but what it was not even Zain knows...
They reached their house.
Zaya's House:
Aaliya:Wow kitna achaa ghar hain...
Zain:Mera jo hai!
Aaliya looks at him.
Zain:Ok..i mean hamara...
Aaliya:Main dinner bana deti hoon...phir so jaana kal humein college jana hai.
Zain:oks
They both eat the dinner and sleep.
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Precap: Zain and Aaliya in the college fest.
Aaliya gets lost...Zain is worried for her.
#BEINTEHAA
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"Haan Maine Maana Maana Huwa Mujhe Bhi Pyaar Huwa
Tera Hone Laga Hoon, Khone Laga Hoon, Jab Se Mila Hoon "
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Amazing!!
Aww Zain trying to cheer up Aaliya was too gud..
Waiting for d next chapter
Plz update ASAP
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Both parts were amazing...
Please continue soon...
Will be waiting eagerly
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Guys!!!
You all are not commenting...
the update is ready but i will not post it until i get at least 8 more commments!!!!!!111
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
All the parts are SUPERB!!!
Pls pls update soon
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#26
really awesome updates
plz next chapter
plz pretty plZ
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 4:

Zain: Good morning! Aaliya my Darling...Moves near aaliya.

Aaliya:Zain...mujhe lag raha hai kit um pagal ho gaye ho.

Hato yahan se...

Zain:Oh maamu ki bhanji...main tumhe yaad dila doon ki main khud bola tha main tumse kabhi bhi pyaar nahi karunga...yaad aaya...to yeh sab jo main kar raha tha woh bas tumhara mood light karne ke liye tha...kya hai na mujhe boring type people aacha nahi lagte..

Aaliya:Very funny!Ja ke fresh ho kar aao...aur nashta karlo.

Zain comes out and sees aaliya in western outfit


(apne aap chun lena)

Zain to himself:

Woaah man!! Yeh kabse itni hot lagne lagi?

Mahshallah!

Aaliya:Kya ghoor ke dekh rahe ho?

Kabhi kisi ladki ko nahi dekha?

Chalo breakfast nahi karna kya?

At the breakfast table:

Zain:waisa ek baat to kehni padegi...khana achaa bana leti ho.

Aaliya:Thank u very much...ab chup chap khana khao...late ho rahe hain.

Zain:Yaar tum itni rude si kyun ho...pyaar ka alg hi maza hota hai...main tumhe biwi nahi manta kamse kam dost toh man hi sakta hoon.

Aaliya:chalo mere dost...hum late ho rahe hain.

Drags him out.

At the college:

Zain:Main toh chala...itni saari hot ladkiyan.

Aaliya stops him by holding his hand and makes him see his surrounding where all boys are staring at her.

Zain realizes that and stays with her.

Zain:Chalo maamu ki bhanji...class ka waqt ho chukka hai.

Aaliya:Hmmm...

Aaliya is moving and seeing boys and girls kissing each other passionately.

Zain hugs her tightly.

Zain: Aaliya main jaanta hoon tumhe yeh sab ajeeb lagta hain par yeh abroad hai aur yahan yeh sab normal hai...tum chinta mat karo main hoon tumhare saath...hamesha

Aaliya:Thank u Zain.

She breaks the hug.

Aaliya:Mere BF chale?

Zain:BF?

(Woah Zain teri tareeki ho rahi hain...boyfriend)

Aaliya:Haan BF...Bestfriend...kyunk yaahan pe sift um hi ho...jo mujhe samajh sakta hai.

(Zain:Kya yaar...pehle BF kehti hai phir paani pher deti hai)

(Zain:Wait...tujhe kya karna...tu uska boyfriend kyun bana

Chahta hai? Kahi...tujhe use pya...pagal hai!! Main aur use kabhi nahi!)

(Zain:Par yaar...dekh to who kitni hot hai...woh meri biwi hai...aur maine dad se waada bhi toh kiya hai ki main uska dhyan rakhoonga)

Aaliya:Oh mr. Kahan ghum hogaye?

Zain:tumme...I am mean main??

Suddenly professor enters

Professar:You both don't wanna come in?

Zain and aaliya:Yes sir...we wanna come.

Zain was only staring at aaliya in the classes.

Why was he feeling for aaliya?Was there something b/w them?

What's brewing up?

Continue reading...

Bruno:Hey Zain!Wanna come in tonight's college fest?

Zain:College fest?

Sally:Yeah it's all about fun, food, dance, entertainment!

Zain:Sounds interesting... i will definitely come

Sally:hey aaliya!You too join us

Aaliya:why not? I will also come.

Zain and aaliya are back in their house

Aaliya is changing in the bathroom.

While here Zain comes face to face with Besharam Zain.

BZ:Hey!

Zain:tu kaun hai?

BZ:Teri dil ki awaaz.

Z:Hein?

BZ:Haan main tujhe ehsas karwane aaya hoon.

Z:Kya ehsas karna hai?

BZ:Yahi ki tu aliya se pyaar karta hai!

Z: Abe kya keh raha hai...main nahi manta...

BZ: mat man...par tu pyaar to karta hai...

Bas tu hain phatoo tabi tu use confess nahi kar raha.

Z:Main phatooo...chal hat...

BZ:haan tu toh hai...agar main tere jagah hota aur aaliya jaisi HOT aur SEXY biwi meri hoti toh main toh...

Z:Chup Chup...

Suddenly the door clinches and aaliya comes out of the bathroom .

Aaliya:Zain...

Zain:haan...

Aaliya:Tum theek to ho na...Touches his forehead.

Zain:main ek dum theek hoon.

BZ:HOT!!!!SEXY!!!

Zain:Chup!! EK dum Chup!!

Aaliya gets scared.

Zain:main tumhe nahi keh raha tha...woh to main gala saaf kar raha tha...

BZ:hahhahahhahaha

Z:Marwaega kya?

Zain:waise tum bahut achi lag rahi ho


(Choose the outfit for aaliya and Zain youself

...ab chale...

Aaliya:chalo holds his hand.

At the fest:

Bruna:Hey Zain and Aaliya...u both are looking awesome!

Aaliya:Thanks...

Sally:Come...let's go in...sally takes aaliya with her.

Zain:Ummm he was too late

Bruno:Let them enjoy...come we can hangout there.

Bruno takes zain at a place where them usic is loud and they can party hard.

Leaving Bruno Zain again comes face to face with Besharam Zain.

Z:Yaar...mujhe na use pyaar ho gaya hai

BZ:Mujhe pata tha...

Z:Par ab kya??

BZ:Kya ab kya?? Jaake confess kar.

Z:Aur agar usne mana kar diya to?

BZ:toh kya...tabhi toh who teri biwi hi hogi...

Tu darr mat mere sher jaake bol de..

Zain slowly goes towards aaliya.

While aaliya gets a push and the glass from her hands drops and her hands gets hurt.

Aaliya:aah...

Zain:Aaliya dhikao...takes her hand in his.

Aaliya:zain dekho bahut dard ho raha hai...ahhh

Zain:ruko ek minute...

Aaliya:Ahhh

Zain takes out his handkerchief and slowly ties it on her hand.

While aaliya is feeling something...no it is not pain...it is love...

(mere dil mein kuch hota hai jabhi main tumhare pas hoti hoon...patani kyun mujhe aisa lagta hai ki agar tum nahi hote mere saath to mehfooz nahi hoti...main kuch keh nahi paati par...main tumse pyaar karti hoon...tabhi karti thi jab tumne mujhe talaaq dene ki baat kit hi...par mere pyaar se kuch nahi hota kyunki...tum to mujhse pyaar hi nahi karte...main sirf tumhe apna maan sakti hoon...bana nahi sakti...)

She is crying not because of this pain,

She is crying because of Zain thinking that he'll never love her

Zain is also crying because he can't see aaliya in pain.

Aaliya:Bas Zain...hogaya mujhe zyaada chot nahi aayi hai...bas thodi si hain.

Zain:thodi si hain...itna saara khun nikal raha ha

Bruno:Hey aaliya r u alright?

Aaliya:Yup I am...can u just take Zain away...if he stays he will definitely become more worried for me...

Bruno:yeah sure..come

Zain:But...ok

Sally: See I am kinda best friend of yours...so can I please talk to you

Aaliya:Yeah...

Sally:See aaliya its wrong to interfere in anyone's persnol life but...still...i wanna ask do you love zain?

Aaliya:Yes...but...

Sally:But u can't confess, right?

You don't worry he loves you too...I can see it in his eyes.

Just go ahead and confess.

Aaliya:thanks Sally for your support...i will confess

Sally:Cheers...

Aaliya:cheers

Aaliya drinks the beverage unknown of the fact that it has alchohol in it,

She is feeling dizzy and Sally is busy with her other friends

While here Bruno with Zain:

Bruno:Man do you love aaliya?

Zain:Yes...but

Bruno: But u can't confess, right?

You don't worry she loves you too...I can see it in her eyes.

Just go ahead and confess.

Zains: thanks Bruno for your support...i will confess.

Bruno:Seems like we are late...come we have to go back to pick them...

Zain:yeah...

Zain reaches the venue, he can't find aaliya,

He asks sally but she doesn't has any clue where aaliya is.

Zain tries to call but aaliya is not picking up the phone.

Zain is now realizing that she is in a problem.

He quickly switches on the GPS and tries to track her phone.

While here a grup of boys are behaving very badly with aaliya.

Boy:You're so good...baby come with me...in my room

Boy:Noo...you come with me...you're too hot.

Aaliya:Leave me...she tries very hard but is unable to escape.

Suddenly a boy tears her dress a lil...

Aaliya gets scared she is running...and the boys are following.

She clashes with Zain and falls in his arm.

Aaliya points towards the boys and Zain starts beating them.

When he has finished beating he again goes back to aaliya.

Zain:aaliya...aaliya...

He checks he pulses,he finds that she has fainted.

He lifts her up and takes her home...

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(I AM ANGRY AT U ALL AS U ALL ARE NOT COMMENTING AND LEMME TELL U THAT THIS WILL BE MY LST UPDATE!

IF U WANT ME TO CONTINUE THEN GIVE ME

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Edited by -Mera-Hi-Jalwa- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
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It was awesome...
Really loved it...
Continue soon..
Edited by iluvuzaya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
awesome update
really damn good
superb
amazing
plz plz continue asap
if u pm
then it will be easy
pm to every one
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Awesome update
I loved the besharam Zain part
Guess they will confess in next part????
Pls continue
Plz plz plz plz ASAP

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