ZaYa Drabbles| The A-Z series|F For..Page 27. 24/3/15 - Page 7

its totally amazing keep writing more u r superb kudos to ur writing skills

ohh amazing

I want Brownie now! Hehe hmmm their first kiss was hawwt! Kiss hi sujhti pehle toh is gutter bhare dimag ko LOL family reaction was hilarious haha very well written loved it

I was thinking how hard it must have been for Zain to watch Aaliya sensually lick off the chocolate..poor Zain! And the last part...was AWESOME...I was totally hooked to the chapter.Update soon,Sanika!

brilliant brilliant
loved it
it's awesome
superb

When you were describing that how Aliya was eating brownie my mouth was also watering I was missing my aunts special brownies which she makes for me I love brownie even more than aliya loves brownie

omgg!!!That was amazzingg👏👏👏...awesome work dear..you r tooo goood.👍🏼...totally in love with this series❤️...Thanks u so much for d pm..

Ooosh very sexy update
Loved it
Thanks for the pm
Update soon

o god..this made me hungry for brownies! :D
haha but it was awesome...the families reaction was hilarious!

Hello! 😛
Pehli baat ke har update pe essay nhi milein ge 😆 Mai koi farigh nahi hun 😛 Parhayi karni hoti hai 😭

Achaa.. you know what! I'm such a big dunce at descriptive essays and stories 😛 Descriptions pe tou i keep struggling for hours and hours! and you're sooo brilliant at it! The way you described the feeling while one eats brownie... AMAZZING! Why don't you give my english essay exam? 😆 Please dedou.. I will get the highest score 😉 Pleasee 😛

Hhahah, family's reaction LOL! Bechara Zain!! you write soo well.. I'm churaofying some lines. Kaam aeinge ye lines in writing descriptive essays at school 😆

Wonderfull! 👏