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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hello guys..
what's up?
here is the next chapter...
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sunrays came through the windowb falling on the face of the two people sleeping hugging each other...
zain woke up only to find aliya sleeping in his arms..
zain was mesmerised by her beauty...still the same innocense reflecting on her face just like 10 years ago..strains of tears made him sad...
he never wanted to see her cry and wanted to fill her life with each and every happiness that he could get...
but this could never happen...
he saw some strands of hair disturbing her as he was going to put it back aliya woke up..
they both shared an eye lock with their lips few centimeters apart...
breaking the eye lock aliya got up and said:
i am sorry Mr. Abdullah pata nahi neend kab aagayi..
zain was shocked by this behaviour of aliya...
he couldnot say anything but cold only say it's okay...no problem..
aliya left to washroom hurriedly...
zain was spell bound to see this aliya...he wanted the bubli aliya back who used to love him like hell...
the whole day he didnot see aliya
zain:mom apne aliya ko dekha?
suraiya:haan woh subah se apne room mein hai ..khana bhi nahi khaya..
zain:thanks mom..mein dekta hun..
on the other side aliya was crying the whole day because she created a sin..yes a sin of hugging zain...
she yelled yah allah, why all this is happe ing with him...?how i will face my dad...
****flashback****
aliya was in hospital standing beside her parents who were breathing their last breathe..
ghulam:aaaliya muj..mujse vaada karooo u willl never marry zainnn or let him touch u..
hearing this aliya was shocked because this was the only dream she was weaving from past years...
ghulam:vaada karoo
aliya couldnot do anything but promising him
****flashback ends****
zain entered the room...
hearing the creaking sound she quickly wipped her tears...
zain could predict that she was crying..he became sad seeing her condition..
zain:tum rooh rahi thi?
aliya could predict that he was tensed for her but that day when she promised her father was playing like a movie in front of her eyes..
aliya:nahi toh
zain:u r such a liar..
aliya:(shouting)jab mene khaha na nahi toh nahi...
zain was shocked seeing aliya shouting at him for the first time...
aliya:get out of my room
zain:par
aliya:i said just get out
she pointed towards the door..
she was feeling the pain in her heart seeing the little beads of water flowing down his eyes..
zain went out of the room and aliya closed the door with a loud sound...

zain to himself:i promise u aliya that i will make you smile back..i will not let this aliya rule over the lovely aliya hiding deep inside your heart..
tomorrrow morning will be new chapter of your life aliya..a chapter that you wil never want to finish..
saying this he went to his room...

will zain make her smile?and bring back the original aliya?
for more stay tunned..
so guys how was it..
bad na...
i knew it...
pls leave your valuable comments..
-priya


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Posted: 11 years ago
yipee me first
awesome update priya
yeh ghulam saab ne aaliya se aesa vada kyu liya ??? 😲😕
i am shocked
i feel so bad for zain 😭😭
but feeling more bad for aaliya i know she wants to love zain with all her heart but is unable to do so
n she is feeling so guilty cuz of d promise 😭
continue soon pleaseee
Edited by anaghazaya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lil small but Nice chapter..
Feeling sad for zaya.
Edited by Sobtian... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anaghazaya

yipee me first
awesome update priya
yeh ghulam saab ne aaliya se aesa vada kyu liya ??? 😲😕
i am shocked
i feel so bad for zain 😭😭
but feeling more bad for aaliya i know she wants to love zain with all her heart but is unable to do so
n she is feeling so guilty cuz of d promise 😭
continue soon pleaseee


congo for being first
didnot u read previous chapters..
he hates zain that's why..
yes i too was feeling sad while writing..
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Posted: 11 years ago
u r wlcum
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya


congo for being first
didnot u read previous chapters..
he hates zain that's why..
yes i too was feeling sad while writing..

i know he hates zain par akhri saas mai toh aadmi ka dimmag theek ho jate hai na
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsum yaar!!
Loved it
Thnx for pm...
Cant wait frn ext chap
Im sure zainu wil make aliya smile
Yeh gullu kamin- samajhta kya hai apne ap ko
Apni beti ko zindagi uski tareqe se jene hi nhi deta...
Uska hi control hai kya dusro ki zindagi par
Just hate him
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anaghazaya

i know he hates zain par akhri saas mai toh aadmi ka dimmag theek ho jate hai na

yeh toh pada hi ulta hua tha😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Beintehaa_ZaYa

Awsum yaar!!

Loved it
Thnx for pm...
Cant wait frn ext chap
Im sure zainu wil make aliya smile
Yeh gullu kamin- samajhta kya hai apne ap ko
Apni beti ko zindagi uski tareqe se jene hi nhi deta...
Uska hi control hai kya dusro ki zindagi par
Just hate him

thanks alina... i wish too same..
yes we too hate gullu...
he is on my nerves but for the story made him more bewacoof

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