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Posted: 10 years ago
That was so good
Amazing
I'm getting micpxed emotions lol
First I was scared..then flashback made me go awww..then I was scared again..and then said and then happy and then sad at the end cuz of Zains state
Bless him
This chapter was really good
Continue soon
Will be waitmg
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update dude
I had so many emotions in this one chapter
The flashback was really cute
I am happy Aaliya and her baby is safe
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow superb I loved it darling update more soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome yaar...
Finally u saved them...
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pn
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing chapter
I was scared initially that what will happen but thank god it ended on a good note
please continue soon n
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww it was so emotional...i am crying not only because your chapter but also because beintehaa is ending...and i am not joking...i am LITERALLY CRYING!!! 😭
Edited by -Mera-Hi-Jalwa- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was really a beautiful chapter 👏
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry guyzz for being late but as everybody i was very depressed abt beintehaa ending but than decided that i will never let beintehaa and zaya lst in some corner of my heart but will relish it with u all lovelies out there ... so now enuf of my backwass and here goes the chapter ...
Chapter 17 ...
Aliya signalled zain to sleep beside her on the hospital bed ...
Zain : nahi aliya yeh jagah bohat choti hai .. tumhara abhi abhi operation hua hai .. tumh lag jaye gi ...
Aliya in a very weak tone : plzz zain mere paas so jao .. mujhe acha lage ga or junior ki bhi yahi demand hai ... aliya pulled out her hands motioning him to hg her he ran towards her and hugged her ... and kissed her hair ...
Aliya : zain plzzz so jao mere paas ..
Zain immediately took off his shoes and slipped into covers beside aliya ... aliya kept her head on his racing heart and kept his hands on her protuding stomach ... she heard his sobs ..
Aliya motions upwards bring her face near his wipped his tears ... and kissed his eyes .. lie back on his chest ...
Aliya : zain hum dono bilkul theek hai ... or ab rona band karo humein neend arahi hai ...
Aliya felt his heart beat becoming normal ... and soon zain slept peacefully with his jaan by his side ...
Morning 7:00
Aliya was the first one to wake she rose her head and saw zain sleeping peacefully she kissed him already the sunlight was disturbing his sleep but her kiss woke him up ... he slowly opened his eyes and saw her .. she was looking pale and tired ...
He slowly got up carefully so that he might not end up hurting aliya ... he kissed her .and wished her good morning ...
Zain : good morning
.. he bends down and lightly pecked aliya on her lips then bend down a little more and kissed her stomach wishing his baby a good morning ..aliya smiled and wished him back ...
Zain :tum yahi ruko mein doctor ko bula kar lata hai ...
Zain went out to call the doctor .. aliya wanted to go and fresh ... so she started getting up from the bed ... but as soon as she moved to other side she screamed in pain ..
Aliya : ya Allah itna dard ho raha hai ..
tears pooling up in her eyes ... she again tried and somehow painfully managed to keep her foot on the floor ... as soon as she tried to walk she almost slipped and closed her eyes but to her surprise a strong pair of arms held her ... she winced in pain as he balanaced her ..
Zain pulled her in hug carefully ... he kissed her and wipped her tears ...
Zain : kiya hua aliya tum bed se neeche q utri ...
Aliya : zain mujhe woh washroom jana tha ...
Zain :bas itni si baat ..
He picked her up carefully and took her to the washroom and made her sit on the washroom stool ...
Zain : main bahar wait kar raha hoon tum mujhe awaaz de dena ...
Soon zain brought her out of the washroom and made her lie on the bed .. soon the doctor came and examined aliya ... and told that she is alright ... and zain can take her home ... zain informed all the family members abt it ... and started packing aliya's stuff .. aliya was all the while observing him .. she chuckled seeing him doing this much work ...
Zain carried her carefully to the car and placed her in passengers seat carefully .. he came on driver seat and started driving ... due to medicines effect aliya slept .. on their way to home zain saw her sleeping peacefully but he was not happy seeing her in this condition she looked so pale dark circles... soon they reached barkat villa ... aliya was still sleeping .. he carefully picked her up in his arms and carried her inside she was sleeping peacefully hugging his shoulder ... he brought her inside every body saw them coming and zain signalled every ony no to utter a word as it would disturb aliya they all followed zain to his bedroom he laid aliya on the bed ...and shabana came with some things to prevent aliya baby and zain from evil eyes ... soon every body left ... and zain was alone in his room he remembered all the moments and broke into silent sobs aliya woke up hearing his sobs ...
Aliya : zain kiya hua tum ro q rahe ho sab theek hai na
Aliya started panicking ...
Zain : han aliya mein theek hoon and hugged her...she hugged him back and zain again broke into sobs this tym a bit loud ...
Zain: aliya mujhe laga main tumhe hamesha k liye kho doon ga hamarey baby ko kho doon ga ... mein mar jata aliya agar tum dono ko kuch ho jata ... i m really guilty tum iss halat mein sirf meri wajah se ho ..i m very bad .
Aliya : zain plzz chup ho jao .. plzz zain
But no response from zain ... aliya broke the hug ...
Aliya : chup ek dum chup ... she almost screamed ...
Zain was taken aback by her sudden mood swings ...
Aliya : kab se bol rahi hoon k tum ne kuch nahi kiya ... phir bhi ek hi baat bol rahe ho kab se ...
Zain : sorry ..
Aliya: u better b mr abdullah ...
Suddenly aliya screamed .
Aliya : ahh ...
Zain : kya hua ...
Aaliya : zain it kicked for the first tym .. it kicked ..
Soon everybody gathered the room hearing aliya shouting at zain and they got to see a total different scene reaching there zain head and hands on aliya 's stomach ... he was trying to feel the baby kicks ...
Zain : kiya aliya tumhe feel bhi ho raha hai ya nahi ...
Aliya: zain wo mere andar hai how will i not feel it ...
Zain : i m very sorry aliya for wht ever happened ...
Aliya : its ok zain ...
And the baby kicked again and aliya again screamed ..
Aliya : did u feel it it kicked again... now even the baby is saying stop apologizing zain ..
Zain : yes aliya i feeled it its so awsome it kicked u aliya ...
Soon ayat came in and sat beside aliya and every one also came inside ...
Everyone : humey bhi feel karna hai ...
Every one kept their heads one by one on aliya stomach to feel the kicks and everybody having tears of happiness in their eyes after feeling the baby for the first tym ... ..
Zain : aliya i wish i could feel all the things u r feeling right now ..
Aliya : dont worry ... i ll make u feel every thing ... smirking ...
...
Will continue next part soon .until than plzz bear this torture of mine
A bit busy with studies ...
Plzz ignore typos
Love Alina
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update
Last part was superb😆
Loved it
Continue soon!
Edited by zaya.harshika - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing part !!
Zain is sooo caring ...
Very nyc :)
Continue next part fast ...!

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