A ZaYa TS||Consequences and Revelations (Final Part on Page 12!) - Page 9

Sruthi Gawddd this was superb, amazing, awesome, mind blowing and fantabulous👏👏👏 I guess I haven't left any adjective 😆 Dude you are a genius. U just showed Zain a dream that made him realize Aliya's worth !!! U ma nigga 🤣 My favourite lines were these"Sometimes, a break from reality was what a person needed. Sadly, that break couldn't last for too long otherwise I'd be tempted to stay oblivious forever." I just loved it. It is actually so true. When you are in Aliya's condition I think staying oblivious is the best option to remain sane. Don't u want sth same to happen 😆 like Zain hearing Nafeeza confessing about her deeds 😉 I want the same to happen. I actually want everything in this update to actually happen in the show. Aliya took a right decision by leaving Beintehaa. I can't wait for Zain to ask for forgiveness from her. I am so happy that this update got long 😆 I got to read something amazing. Waiting for the next update now😊

Originally posted by: craziness05

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Sabse pehle sorry for such a late unres but I was a bit busy isliye abhi padha😛

U r an awesome writer shruti👏👏👏 You expressed their feelings very beautifully I was able to feel the pain...I feel so bad for aliya😭 Zain still cares for aliya but he does not wants to admit it😳 I am eagerly waiting for the second chapter jaldi update karna mujhe zyada wait nhi ho raha hai😆and is baar pm nhi kiya then also maine tujhe maaf kiya par agli baar mat bhoolna...!!😉

Originally posted by: _Littles12_

LMFAO ill be nice to you KK!

Sruthi your one hell of a good writer woman. LOL you sure you wrote this or yo sister?😆

I loved how you angled and brought out the story, very well done. I loved Zains pain and the way they were putting a fake show up in front of each other. I really wanna see this is the show as a matter of fact. YO CVSS come get yo ass here man!

UPDATE NOW

Originally posted by: arshipotterfan

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ahan, i am first [:D/] [:D/]
Res karke jab page refresh kia toh mere comment k upar ek aur comment 😡
baad mein dekh toh u had ressrd 😆 LOL!!
I'll brb
Ok,i admit.. my brb was not so ryt back 😛
amyways, at tge start i went all no, no,no,no you cant kill Aliya! Kyun?
and then i sighed a breath of relief when i realised it was a dream! Haha, I'm not that evil :P
the flashbacks were harsh Which one? The photo frame one?
Nd Zain's repentance sweet. And I am glad that here atleast, he is ready to call truce even without knowing her innocence.hope it hapoens in the show 😊i was frustrated throughout Aliya's pov.. what decision? I really wish it does too, but let's see what the CV's have in store...
Nd then she walked out of BV Needless to say, you'll get your answers soon 😆
nd the way you wrote Zain coming at par with the truth..outstanding 👏
Do write more. You dnt need me to tell you that u r a really really good writer.
and frustration again.. whose chair is she sitting on? Although i have a strong hunch.
Keep up the good work sruthi.
Tak your time but give aise hi mindblowing updates. Aww thank you 😃 😳
-love, sanika :)

Originally posted by: princess5253

Tht was incredible!

Originally posted by: Mentalmaths

Wowww!!It was just awsm...pls continue

Originally posted by: Nitya_Suresh

This is do beautifully written. You are truly gifted!! Love the story!! Finally both Nafeesa and Suraiya's truth is out in the open. Looking forward to what he does next!!

Update soon!😊