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Sabrina

@SabrinaMalik

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

As soon as I woke up, I opened IF and as soon as I opened IF, I read your Drabble. So mere hisaab se I'm not late, okay? 😛

Haha..I just LOVE these Behind the Scenes.❤️

those irrationally deep eyes. OMG. And Preetika didn't want to look into them?! 😲 Hayee Mujhe chance milta toh I would've got lost into them

Just 3 lines and 20 minutes and this moron! WoW. 20 minutes mein 3 lines! You are totally whipped Preetika 😆

Harshuu staring at her..☺️ She thinks he's doing it just to annoy her?! Arey Ms. Rao he's affected by you as much as you by him. Samajh nahin aati itni si baat? 😛

and he came forward till his nose was almost touching mine and my eyelids suddenly became heavy and my breathing deepened...The next thing I could feel was his stubble rubbing against my cheeks, possibly transferring the pink color on it onto my cheek. It felt a little prickly and I would have laughed because of the sensation if it was anyone else. OMG. I was just holding my breath and reading this part. 😳 Beautifully described 👍🏼

it's that intense look again! Hayyeee...Harshad's intense look. Mein mara jawaaa 😳

And that Ippu Thing was cute. You know Tamil?! Wait! Are you a Tamilian?!

And Bindi? Allah Miyaan..that was so qwwweeettt 😳 Your ideas never cease to amaze me! 👏

Dhamakedaar as alwayss!

Keep writing baby.

You are just SO adorable.

Love You Bahot Saara ^^

Edited by SabrinaMalik - 11 years ago

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Dr.Fear

@Dr.Fear

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Wow its awesome

More than enough to send me to HEAVEN or zaya ka BHAAD

❤️

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vinu

@vinu127

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: ...Renu...
Well beti jaan ...you have done a amazing job jannu...the emotion were portrayed pretty well..and yes you have improved a lot dearu..keep going ..on whole.. i liked it ( mind you liked it ..not loved it ..!!)well i'm half satisfied...and you have to work pretty more harder to make me fully satisfied ..!i will work as hard as possible teacher ji..par directions toh dijiye! tell me what i need to improve in!
Now on a side note:
i just loved the way you expressed aaliya's feeling .. zain staring at her for mins together.. and aaliya getting disturbed..was totally aww😳😳thank u😳
Request :
can i get harshu's POV for this drabble plejjj..!!!!
pechle drabble ka bhi sirf aapne aur dayan ne opposite POV pucha tha and iss keliye maine Zain ka mann ke baare me socha tak nahi! but will try for sure😃
PS: This comment was not done in strict criticism mode..!!!i can see that and love it to the core😃😃

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vinu

@vinu127

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: simran422
It was sooo good!
You wrote it really beautifully Vinu 😊
Loved it and thanks a lot for the PM and it was not torture at all!

thank u so much dear😃

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vinu

@vinu127

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: divikash
oh wow the holi scene😳...omg only seeing pink bindi, i understood it was the holi scene
that was so good, thanks a lot 🤗
waiting for the next update😉

yup..the holi waali.. u did not realise when i said he was possibly transfering the colour onto her cheeks?😲

thank u divi😳😳😳

are like button bhi zara press kardo yaar

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vinu

@vinu127

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: -Have.a.dream-
Wow its awesome

More than enough to send me to HEAVEN or zaya ka BHAAD

❤️

ha..yeh scene toh Bhaad me hi shoot kiya tha!😆😆😆

thank u so much for the lovely comment😳

Edited by vinu127 - 11 years ago

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-Nimmi-

@-Nimmi-

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Loved it vinu.

Wow it was the holi scene!!

Poor pree couldn't resist Harshu's stare..and harshad put the color like a bindi...so cute

Well written vinu!!

And Preetika's thoughts were faster than speed of light🤣

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vinu

@vinu127

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Yeh comment toh meri drabble se lambi hai!😲

Originally posted by: SabrinaMalik
As soon as I woke up, I opened IF and as soon as I opened IF, I read your Drabble. So mere hisaab se I'm not late, okay? 😛no ur not at all late😆
Haha..I just LOVE these Behind the Scenes.❤️thank u so much😃

those irrationally deep eyes. OMG. And Preetika didn't want to look into them?! 😲valid reason tha bechari ki!
Hayee Mujhe chance milta toh I would've got lost into them who would say no? neither u nor I! never!

Just 3 lines and 20 minutes and this moron! WoW. 20 minutes mein 3 lines! You are totally whipped Preetika 😆lolz..yeah! too bad harshu😆😆😆

Harshuu staring at her..☺️ She thinks he's doing it just to annoy her?! Arey Ms. Rao he's affected by you as much as you by him. Samajh nahin aati itni si baat? 😛use khud ki haalat samaj nahi aa rahi hai toh uska kya samjhegi?😆😆

and he came forward till his nose was almost touching mine and my eyelids suddenly became heavy and my breathing deepened...The next thing I could feel was his stubble rubbing against my cheeks, possibly transferring the pink color on it onto my cheek. It felt a little prickly and I would have laughed because of the sensation if it was anyone else. OMG. I was just holding my breath and reading this part. 😳 Beautifully described 👍🏼thank u sooo much! maine ise 3 baar likha! i'm so glad u liked it😃😃

it's that intense look again! Hayyeee...Harshad's intense look. Mein mara jawaaa 😳ha! dewaani hoon main unn ankhon ki.. par aankhonki gustaakhiya maaf ho!

And that Ippu Thing was cute. You know Tamil?! Wait! Are you a Tamilian?! no its telugu🤣 i'm a kannadiga but i know telugu😆

And Bindi? Allah Miyaan..that was so qwwweeettt 😳 Your ideas never cease to amaze me! 👏that was born out of ...god knows where! i did not know how to end this and mom started shouting at me for not keeping my bindi! tab wahi yaha tranfer kar diya!😆😆

Dhamakedaar as alwayss! thank u😳
Keep writing baby.will try my level best
You are just SO adorable.not as much as u😳
Love You Bahot Saara ^^

i love more ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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vinu

@vinu127

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: -Nimmi-
Loved it vinu.
Wow it was the holi scene!!
Poor pree couldn't resist Harshu's stare..and harshad put the color like a bindi...so cute
Well written vinu!!

And Preetika's thoughts were faster than speed of light🤣

yeah! 1 science student here!😆 not faster..as fast as light!😆

yup..bechari pree😭 harshu ka torturing stare seh nahi paayi..

which girl can? i bet no one!

thank u so much nimmi😳

Edited by vinu127 - 11 years ago

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-Nimmi-

@-Nimmi-

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: vinu127
yeah! 1 science student here!😆 not faster..as fast as light!😆
yup..bechari pree😭 harshu ka torturing stare seh nahi paayi..
which girl can? i bet no one!
thank u so much nimmi😳

oh you too science student!! 12th std?

Speed of light is 3x10^8 m/s not km/s😛😆😆

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