Zaya SS:Dhol,baaja,baarat(chap2 pg 9,15/7/14) - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: -harshikazaya-

dori scene is superb 👏 cont soon 😳

Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Aww tee it was awesum very nice starting...aliya dress was so sexy n zaya convo also...wish thy shw sumthing lk ths...as I want zaya to live those moments which thy miss in their own nikaah.
n second SR also.
Waiting for next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Aneesha.

Aww tee it was awesum very nice starting...aliya dress was so sexy n zaya convo also...wish thy shw sumthing lk ths...as I want zaya to live those moments which thy miss in their own nikaah.

n second SR also.
Waiting for next part.

I hope so too yar.
Glad u liked it.
Thank u😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: zaya.fan

Sheer kurma scene daal dun gi

okay 😆...But make it the Tee way 😎
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Short but sweet
I loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Aww such a lovely update, very cute😃
Zain brought ring for aliya😃 u know that was my wish to see it in show,
u fulfilled it🤗
Aliya's saree is very good, ha ha. But there was no dori for blouse in image😛
Do update soon, thank u so much for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
OMG tee..
Finally maine padhliya
That was chooo cute 👏 👏
Kaash humne kuch aisa show mei dikh jaaye 😭
Thanx for the PM
Waiting for d next update 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Awww
So cute
Zaya are so cute
Loved them
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
😆

Originally posted by: ZayaHarshika

OMG tee..
Finally maine padhliya
That was chooo cute 👏 👏
Kaash humne kuch aisa show mei dikh jaaye 😭
Thanx for the PM
Waiting for d next update 😃

Glad u liked it,i also hope k show me kuch esa ho.

😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Chapter 2



Aliya:mr fiancee,ooo mr fiancee.
Aliya was searching for zain,she had to talk to him.
He came from behind and back hugged her.
Zain:jee ms fiancee,kia hua?
Aliya:zain wo ami,ayaat or abu chahte hain k aayat ki saari rasmon ke saath hum bhi apni saari rasmein poori karlein.
Zain held her waist and pulled her closer,he kissed her cheek.
Zain:wow,ye to achi baat hai na,wese bhi me bhi ye hi chahta hoo.
Aliya:magar ek problem hai(with a frown)
Zain:kia?
Aliya:woh...woh...mjhe b aayat k saath bhopal jaana parega or me or tum un dono k nikkah k baad hi mil paege.
Zain:kiaaa?*his eyes popped*
Aliya:han,agar tumhe problem hai to me unhein mana kardeti hu.
She is about to leave but he stops her.
Zain:problem to hai,magar uske baad romance ka maza hi alag hai.
Wese to i will miss u,but its worth it.
Aliya:is ka matlab tum tayar ho?
Zain:han!
Aliya:(excited)thank u thank u soo much
She kisses his cheek and leaves.

Aliya is ready to leave for bhopal when zain pulls her to a corner and leans in to kiss her,but aliya stops him.
Aliya:o mr fiancee,abhi humaari sirf engagement hui hai,shaadi nhi hui,is lie khud pe control kijie.
She pushes him and leaves.
Zain:hayeee zaalim ms fiancee.

Later in night:

Aliya is in her room in bhopal,twisting and turning on the bed,
Missing zain.
Aliya:ya allah,abhi to ek din bhi nhi hua or wo mje itna yaad aa rha hai,10 din kese rahu gi me uske baghair?
She looks at his pic in her phone,her phone starts ringing and its zain calling.
She attends the call.
Zain:hello churail fiancee!
Aliya:hel...kia...me churail?tum bhoot kahi k,ek to tumhari yaad me me so nhi paa rhi or tum mje churail keh rahe ho.
Zain:*starts laughing*tum b nni so paa rhi na,or wese b agar tum abhi mere saath hoti to hum so thori rahe hote ,kuch or hi kar rhe hote hum to.
Aliya blushes
Aliya:chee zain,wese...tumhe neend a gyi?
Zain:jab tak tumhe kiss nhi karta neend aati hi nhi.
Me 10 din kese rahu ga tum se door?hum kuch kar bhi nahi payege 10 din tak!*guttery meaning*
Aliya*kisses the phone*:ye lo tumhara kiss,or so jao,mje prince se shaadi karni hai,dark circles wale zombie se nhi.or wese b tumlog 3 din me to yahan aa hi rahe ho na baaqi rasmon k lie,to milegein na hum,chup k,tab dedun gi tumhe kiss.
Zain:hayeee,aap ki inhi aadaon pe hum fidda hai hotty fiancee,ab kiss milgaya to so hi jaon ga.or haan,jab 3 din baad milu ga to sirf kiss se kaam nhi chlega,so be ready,
Aliya:ufo,acha i love miss and i miss u,good night.
Zain:i love u 2 3 4 5 6,and i miss u alot.
He kisses the phone and ends the call.
Both go to sleep and meet eachother in the dreams.




Abhi to sirf shurwaat hai,abhi to dhol,baaja or baarat baaqi hai.

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Thank u for amazing feedback guys,
Keep showering ur love,
Ill try to make next post even more guttery.
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Love u all
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