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katmaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

(zain chala Bhopal)

It begins from the scene when zain entered into aaliyas house ...

Aaliya :kitkit tum yaha. Utar gaya nasha ...

(Zain smiling because he was happy to see his aaliya... And he was happy to see her in old avtar back)

Aaliya :aise kya ghur rage ho kyun aaye hi yaha. I am not gonaa come with u ... Chale jao yaha se plz. ..

(She moves away and tries to leave ... But zain holds her back. .)

Zain :tumko toh mein yaha se leke he jaounga ...

Aaliya : toh Karo jo Karna hai ... Mein kuch nahi sune wali ... Bahut sun liya mein tumhara jab man chaiye kuch bhii bolte ho. ... Is baar nahi zain ...is baar nahi

(She was crying... She ran away. Zain stood there all guilty of what he has done but then then he smirked and said"tumhe toh mein maana lungs mammu ki bhanjj )

Aaliyas room

Aaliya: mein kyun to rahi hu won ullu me liye... (She gets up from...the bed and goes to the mirror . .and starts combing her hair... Zain comes from behind she ignore him.

He holds her duptaa she tries pulling it but he doesn't leave it... So she gets irritated and leaves it behind and says "rakho lo" and throws the dupttta over his face and she moves towards the wardrobe ...zain giving a smirk ...follows her ...he puts the duptaa... On her shoulders and makes it proper. But this time .. He slowly moves his hands on her bare back. He moves ...his hands on her smooth skin ...she gets the trickle on her body. ..and not able to understand what he is upto. ..

Aaliya : zain chodo pagal hogaye ho tum... Yeh kya kar Rahe ho...zain (he was still moving his fingers on her. ...back ...she turns around and pushes him... Back ...)

Aaliya: zain chodo pagal ho Gaye ho kya ...

Zain :mamu ki bhanji shuahar hu tumhara hakkk banta hai mera (and pulls her closer )

Aaliya :tum Pagal ho Gaye ho zain... Pure pagal. ..chodo .. (Pushes him but couldn't get out of his grip )

Zain :Maine yaha chodne me like nahi aaya ...tumhe lene aaya hu.

Aaliya :zain pls.

(Zain slowly places his head on her shoulders and take her into hug )

Aaliya:chodo zain. Ek toh phele kuch bhi bolte kitna dard diya aur aaj yaha zain chodo...Maine tumhari koi ... Tricks mein nahi aane Waali.

Aisha: zain jiju aapi neeche aao ...ohhh sorry sorry woh has neeche bula rahe ...

Zain :are its k but kya din aagaye hai biwi me saath do minute bhi nahi milta. aate hair jao. ..(aaliya starts moving zain pulls her back ...I am sorry. )

Aaliya :aaj nahi tumhe pata bhi hai kya. ... bola that tumne us din kitna hurt kiya aaj nahi zain this I time I won't ...

Zain :mat maano jao neeche ...dekhta hu. Ktine din rehti ho naraz. (And leaves the room )

After 2...3 hours lunch time..

shabana: zain yeh le lo mrichi ka achaar hai ...aaliya ka favorite hai ...bahut lazzez lagta hai praanthe ke saath

Zain :ji do thoda sent hi. (aaliya acha hai kahye pats chale ki iski zubaam kitni tez hai mirchi se tez toh iski zubaan hai )

Shabana after two three minutes :are zain tum toh puri bottle kha Gaye lagta hai pasand aaya air laau.

Aaliya:nahi ammi mat Lao...zain theeka kha he nahi sakta (now she was worried ...she gets up sits next to zain takes the bottle from gives him water)

Zain :uhhh uhhh mujhe khana hai par aaliya

Aaliya :pagal ho kya chodo aur lo yeh paani PEO .

Zain :nahi (tears brimed up boths eyes )

Aaliya :zain pls ...

And pulls the bottle

Aaliya : peo paani... Room mein jao mein Shakar leke aati hu.

In their room

Zain was moving tru and fro

Aaliya :zain yeah lo shakkar ... Jaldi se . bahut husyiari kyun mar rahe the paagal ho halat dekho abhi. .

Zain :into he fikar hai toh meri baat kyun nahi maan leti ... Mumbai chalo

Chapter 2 will zain be able to manofy aaliya

Edited by katmaan - 11 years ago

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mridula

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome start.zaya part was romantic.continue soon.

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katmaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Only two comments. Should I continue or not ...

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zayalove

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Posted: 11 years ago

This is really osem plzzz continue it and update it by tomorrow plzzz eagerly waiting to read wht happens nxt nd by da wY u r n amazing writer nd i mean it from bottom of my heart truly comendable

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Sweta...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hahahaha I loved it :) I loved zains attitude making and irritating her by taking her dupatta and all and Aliyas feelings when he's touching her back were blush blush hahah I loved the laste scene where zain eats the achaar and Aliyas reaction was epic she gets sooo concerned knowing he don't eat spicy stuff and making him drink water and getting sugar I loved it :) thansk for the pm can't wait for the next part :)

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katmaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 2

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Aaliya :zain chip chap yeh kho ...

Zain :nahi phele bolo ki maaf kiya ...

Aaliya :khana hey toh khao warna

(Zain pulls aaliya closer... And slowly bends towards her)

Aaliya :zain

(He slowly bends near her shoulder pushes her hair back and kisses her shoulder...aalliya was shocked by his behaviour and coundt bare his closeness and bit her lip)

Zain :ab shakar ke zarurat nahi hai (gave his usual smirk )

Aaaliya :pagal ho tum kuch bhi uthpatanga karte ho (and stuffs a spoonful of sugar in his mouth and leaves)

At Dinner

Zain and aaliya were sitting next to each other... Shabana was serving food

Shabana: zain barabar khana khana ...

Zain :hmmm.(zain looks at aaliya who was still angry on her ...he slowly puts his hands on her hands aaliya pulls it back to then zain pulls her hands and below the table holds her hands and didnt plan... To leave. It aalia tried all possible means but didn't leave her hands

Shabana :are aaliya tum dusre haath se kyun nahi kha rahi ...

Aaliya: ammi woh actually

Zain :ha bolo na kyun nahi kha rahi (smiling at her )

Aaliya :who Maine nail paint abhi lagayi na toh gili hai bigad jayengi isliye

Zain :ohh mein khila du.

Aaliya:je nahi ...mein theek hu(gulam and shabana left the table ...and zain and aaliya were still having dinner actuall y aaliya could hardly eat nething wid other hand. ..

Zain :hahaha nail paint...(aaliya pulled her hands back )

Aaliya:zaaain tum samjthe kya ho ..bahut bade hero... Kabhi bhi datd de do air kabhi bhi maanane chale aao ...kaan pakdo. ..sorry likho par is baar nahi zain abdullah tumhe pats hai USS din mujhe kitn I chit lagi tumne mujhe hurt kiya sabse zyada mere dil KO hurt hua. Woh shaam Jo humari zindagi ki sabse achi shaam ho sakti thee won tumhari jealsouly ki wajah se barbaad ho gayi won damce jo tum itnee ghusse mein kar rage thee shayad him bahut pyaar we karte . u are wrong zain abdullah u wrong . .(she leaves the room )

Zain was angry on himself for doubting her ...for being so rude he was so angry he had a glass of water in his hands he pressed... And that broke ... Aaliya was in the room she heard voices "zain tum theek ho ...zain jiju aapko toh bahut laga " she ran down to see zains hand bleeding... Gulam trying to remove pieces of glass from his hands ...

Aaliya :abbu zain KO bahut card yoga mein nikaalu ...

Gulam :ha beta ...lo

She sits next to him and ...ask Aisha to bring first aid ...

Aaliya slowly pulled ...the big piece of glass stuck in his hand he moaned in pain ...tears welled up her eyes...

Aaliya :pagal ho ...tum aise kaise lag gaya ...(while tiring the bandage )

Zain:tumhe itna hurt kiya hai so ... Uska phal mil raha hai .

(Zain was really sorry for what he had done ..he felt guilty aaliya had realized and probably may have forgiven him has didn't wanted to accept)

Zain :chodo I am fine ...its my duty to bare this pain leave me (he got up and went to the room )

Zain remembered how aaliya was crying for him ...he knew her heart was melting just some more buttering she would forgive him ...

Aaliya came in the room ...was arranging the clothes in the wardrobe ...he came from behind ...and hugged her from back.

Zain:mamu ki bhanji kitni baar sorry bolu abhi ...maaf bhi kardo ...

Aaliya:zain yeh kya kar rahe ho ...chodo

Zain: nahi chodunga...(and slowly...pulled the duptaa off her body ..she still facing the cupboard. ...she was still and couldn't react to zains .sudden closeness...he slowly placed a kiss on her back ...making her whole body shiver. She turned around and pushed zain and said pagal ho Gaye ho ..pure pagal. Kuch bhi karte hi so jao ...

She arranges the bed. ..the pillows partition and sleeps zain comes and sleeps on his side then after few minutes turning and fidgeeitng with blankets he took the pillows of the partition and throws it down...aaliya wasn't sure what zain was doing. Zain sat up and started tickling aaliyas leg ...aaliya got up

Aaliya:yeh kya kar rahe ho zain. Sone do mujhe. Pls bahut than gayi hu

Zain :toh mere side sir rakhke me so jao ...warns aise he tickle karta rahunga. ..

Aaliya :Jo Karna hai woh Karo ...gn and sleeps back ...

Zain:theek hai toh Karo majee

(He kept on tickling her legs ..she was loving it. But had to ..show her anger. . )

Aaliya getting up angrily :kya hai zain so jao na ...

Zain: phele sir yeh side rakh ke sona padega (she angrily got up arranged the pillow and slept angrily covering herself with blanket ...

Zain:good night Mrs zain abdullah

Aaliya:hmmm(angrily)

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katmaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 3 bathroom scene coming up ... Do comment and like it motivates Me more

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Humairaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow awsm update

loved it

u portrayed the emotions and feelings so beautifully

it was so sweet and cute

continue soon

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zayalove

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Posted: 11 years ago

Very nice zain was totally in his besharam mode but the guilt is described very well cant wait for part 3 plzzz update it by tomorrow me waiting

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Sweta...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Omg what an update when you think it can't get any better you prove me wrong I loved the little zaya scenes first the shoulder kiss and then zain breaking the glass and then getting aliya to sleep face to face with him I loved every bit of it :) thanks for the pm can't wait for the next part :)

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