aaliyas confessions * ss * chapter 2 updated

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aaliyas confession ...
Hiee my new ss
part 1
it starts with the night after the cold storage thing Ans usman tells aaliya to confess her love ...
ZAIN AND AALIYA ROOM
(ZAIN was walking and taking round in their room..he was sad that aaliya didn't mean ne words she said in cold storage he heard the footsteps ...coming towards the their room ...he knew it was aaliya ... he wanted to confess his love again ... but his ego didn't permit he went to the bed and acted as he was asleep ) (aaliya entered she had fear on her face she didn't knw how to confess to ZAIN ... she saw ZAIN sleeping she was relived she saw ZAIN sleeping "Acha kitkit so gaya hai warna ..."then she sees the twaeez near the table ... she goes picks it up goes and sit very silently near the table next to the bed ZAIN could feel her presence ...she slowly tied the twaeez on ZAINs hand and rolled his sleeves down she then covered ...ZAIN with the blanket Amd went to change ) (ZAIN got up And thought to himself "yeh mamu ki bhanji Ko samjna difficult hai kabhi kehti hai koi parwah nahi aur kabhi mere dard seh nahi paati Kuch Toh hai Uske mann me mere liye ... par Kya ... aalah uski maddat kar do thodi. he hears the door open and sleeps instantly ... aaliya comes out and see that the blanket was down she goes near him and pulls it up and covers him but this time ZAIN pulls her hand and hugs the hand ... she was the bed this time ZAIN turned towards her lap Amd slept on it ... she thought he is in deep sleep and didn't wanted to disturb him ... so she decided to sit ... ZAIN this time this purposely he also didn't knew y but he wanted aaliya to be there next to him he didn't want her to go away . he knew he jade feelings for aaliya but was not sure of aaliyas feeling ... aaliya on the other side knew how much she loved the person sleeping on her lap ... He was her life but was afraid if ZAIN would not accept her ... She was staring at him with all her love in her eyes ..she slowly caressed his hair and set them right ... ZAIN felt her soft hands running through his hair Nd he had his heart beats started beating faster ... He realised he was very close to her ... He could smell her scent . Aaliya was lost in memories she remembered all those beautiful moment how they first met thiers forced nikah ..ZAIN helping aayat helping her family ... Taking care of them ... SHe remembered the trip moments .. The moments of the date ... The scenes of the waalima party ... The way he helped her through wardrobe malfunction ... The way he stopped her from going to Bhopal his sorry moments nd them the cold storage scene .tears welled up in her eyes she memorized the way ZAIN was helpless the way she felt when she almost thought she lost him the way..she hugged him but his body was cold And a tear fell down her eyes ... Amd fell on ZAIN face ..he feels the tear on his face he knew she was crying and the reason was him he opened his eyes And looked at aaliya crying And holds her hands tightly ... she realizes And say
AALIYA :ZAIN ... sorry tumhe disturb kar diya ..tum so jao..
ZAIN sits up still holding her hand ...
ZAIN :mamu ki bhanji tumhare pass itne aasu Kidhar se aate hai... (with the usual smirk on his face)
Aaliya:ZAain (with tears still in her eyes)
ZAIN :ek baat puchu(she nods)
Tum mere liye ro rahi thee na phir se flashback mein thee na ... (aaliya looks away from him and tries getting up but ZAIN gets angry and pulls her back to bed )
Maine Kuch pucha mamu ki bhanjI kyun karti ho itne fikar merI kyun
Aaliya :ZAIN pls Chodo mujhe sona hai
ZAIN not listening to her keeps on saying
ZAIN : Tum bhaag nahi sakti mamu ki bhanji ... Kyun karti Kya hota zyada se zyada marr jata na mein ... Tumhare liye Toh acha na meri kitkit band ho jaati ...
Aaliya:ZAIN pls ... Kuch Bhi mat bolo ... Kuch Bhi bolte ho (and breaks and hugs him tightly ... Her head hits his chest and he also hugs her and she was sobbing very badly his tshirt got wet he coudnt see her pain he knew she had feelings for him but didnt confess ...
AALIYA :ZAIN dubra kabhi mat bolna Aisa Kuch and tires to break the hug ...(ZAIN had held very tightly she coudnt break the hug)ZAIN ..
ZAIN: umm
Aaliya: ZAIN Tum so jao tumhari tabiyat theek nahi hai (ZAIN leaves her she tries and gets up and places her pillow pn the other side while she was arranging the pillows ZAIN was busy watching her ... He Hoes her hands Amd pulls her aaliya looks at him in confusion ... Aaliya :ZAIN Kya hua ..
ZAIN :aaliya Aaj Tum sir iss side rakh ke so mere pass (aaliya opened her eyes wide... She did wanted to sleep but the shyness in her didn't permit)
Aaliya :nahi nahi mein aise theek hu And mein iss side kyun rakhu mera sir
(ZAIN knew she wudnt listen so she tricked her my making her emotional)
ZAIN :Actually Aaj Woh cold storage wale incident ki baat mujhe aankh Bhi band karne Ko darr raktha maut ke itne karib jaane ke baat lagta hai ki aankhe band karu aur zindangi tham gayi Toh (aaliya puts her hands in his mouth) aaliya:pls ZAIN ... Theek hai mein idhar so jaati hu ...but pls wapis aisa kuch mat bolna(tears flowing from her eyes ZAIN wipes them on And inside he os very happy finally he succeeded in making her sleep next to him ... ZAIN catches her hands and she looks at him he Gives an innocent looks and she closes her eyes she was also happy inside but also tOo scared And didn't wanted to looss ZAIN ... They fall off to sleep... thinking about each other
Next morning ..ZAIN wakes up Amd sees aaliya holding his hands tightly he sits up and pushes all the hair behind which where falling on her face ... and says "pyaar Toh Tum Bhi karti hi bas khene se darti ho ... but mkb mera bhi naam ZAIN usman abdullaha nahi agar tumhe do dino mein nahi bulvaya ki Tum mujhse beinthaa mohabbat hai ...
chapter 2 how will ZAIN make aaliya confess



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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update.zaya moment was really cute and romantic.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing
Very well showed their emotions
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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mindblowing plz continue waiting 4 the nxt part update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love how you've started this os. first zains confession and now Aliyas hahahah hope you Uodate both very soon :) please do pm me when you've Uodated :) I loved how she was so caring of him and when zain slept in her lap and was crying and he realised and woke up! Great Uodate :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😃 their love is so surreal...nice start...do pm me whenyou uupdate. .looking forward to it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start. Please give me Pm when you update. waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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chapter 2
zain was staring at aaliya ..aaliya opens her eyes to find zain staring at her later she sees that she is holding his hands ...she leaves it and gets up ... zain I am sorry and she sees his hands he had got hurt because. of her nails ... she felt guilty
Zain:its k mkb (and gets up and goes away and now near the pool area he is thinking how he will force aaliya to tell her feelings...
he decides to plan ... a party and invites all his friends ...
THEIR BEDROOM
zain:mkb Aaj mere Kuch friends aarahe hai ache se tyaar hona..
aaliya: par zain tumharI tabiyat theek nahi hai...(zain smiRks and is happy to see ...aaliya worry for him )
zain:ha par Sab ne kaha ki milna Toh Maine socha idhar bula lu ...
aaliya :theek hai (and goes to have bath )
zain:mkb dektha hu ... ajj tum kaise ... apni dill ki baat nahi bolti...
Evening around 6 ...
aaliya was walking very fast near the entrance of the house ...zain enters ...as zain come she stops him ...
aaliya :zain yeh Kya hai ...
zain :Kya hai Kya ??
aaliya points towards the living room the room was filled with many guest especially girls wearing beautiful dress ...
zain :guest hai aur Kya ...
aaliya :Woh mujhe Bhi Pata hai par ...tune kaha tha tumhare Kuch dost aanewaale haI aur I haven't cooked so much food and mami Bhi nahi hai Maine Kya karu
zain :chill mkb I will manage bus tum change karke aao ...
(aaliya makes a face looks at the dress she is wearing its a beautiful pink and green dress ...and gets angry asks zain "kyun Kya problem yeh dress mein"
(zain looks at aaliya and then at his guest mainly girls wearing shory dress )
zain :problem Kuch nahi hai bus thode alag hai sabse ...
(a girl comes from behind calls out "zain"
and hugs him zain to hugs her and then gives a sarcastic looks to aaliya and compliments that girl "u look gorgeous"
aaliya :I don't care and leaves(looking angry Amd disappointed as zain didn't like her dress. aaliya is in the room and walking angrily then looks in the mirror and then says "actually I will change " put her nails in the mouth thinking What to wear ...
AFTER 20 MINUTES
(aaliya was getting down the stairs everyone looks at her )
zain looks at kataar staring at something ...
zain : Kya dekh raha tu
(and turns arounds and is dumbstruck seeing aaliya in a beautiful orange and pink saree she looked like a fairy on earth)
kataar: zain Kya dekh raha teri biwi he hai Woh
zain : umm
zain clears his throat goes to aaliya
zain :yeh pehene ke aayi
aaliya ignores hIm starts moving towards the guest kataar and rizwan come and compliment her ... zain is jealous he his angry but then is happy because she is his wife ...
later aaliya was talking to all the guest and the music starts playing "solo si sholo sI " aaliya hears zain asking
zain : shall u dance with me.(she blushes Amd turns around to look at zain but to her disgust zain had ask some other girl .. her blush changed into anger. the girl gave her hands his hands Amd zain gave a smirk looking at aaliya and he was happy because his plan was working she was getting insecure about him...they started dancing zain Amd that girl were very close zain picked her up one or two times on other side aaliya was Burning with jealousy she..she looked like a fierce lioness ready to kill neoene ... the song got over everyone clapped their hands for zain and That girl ..then other songs were played zain was still dancing with that girl ... and they were very close. aaliya felt like goin and slapping that girl and rizwan emerged from the side told )
rizwan:bhabhi will u dance with me
aaliya gave smile and thought its the best Way to take revenge with zain and said 'yes' and they started dancing ... this time the song being played was "ek din teri bahon mein"
zain saw aaliya dancing with rizwan he was jealous this time aaliyas hands in rizwans shoulder and rizwan hands on her waist ... he was angry ... he was not so patient to bear Thiz and left the girl and went to aaliya pulled her into his arms and then started dancing Amd slowly he pulled her and took her to the room ... aaliya could see anger in his eyes ... but she was also angry ... with him ... zain pushed aaliya and pinned her onto the wall ...
zain : aaliya yeh Kya tumhe sharam nahi aati Woh rizwan ke saath dance kar rahI thee ...
aaliyas had tears in her eyes
aaliya :main kyun sharam karu aur Tum tum Kya kar rahe the neeche Woh ladki ke saath dance uski bahaon mein the tum puri shaam
(tears still flowing
from her eyes ...zain realizes that he got carried away with emotions and forgot about his plans ... and got a smirk on his face...)
zain :kyun jalan ho rahi hai tumhe
(aaliya looks Amd realized that she shouldn't have showed her emotions..)
aaliya :zain Chodo mujhe jana hai neeche Sab wait kar rahe hoge (and tries to push zain and get out of his grip... zain pulls her back Amd Holds her more tightly ...)
zain : mamu ki bhanjI Aaj nahi Aaj nahi Aaj har swaal ka jawab chahe mujhe
aaliya:zain Chodo (tries to get out of his grip but is all vain)
zain :Bolo mamu ki bhanji jalan ho rahi thee na... Aaj Bhi us din Bhi jab aaliya bhaTt ane wali thee kyun ... kyun karti ho itni fikar har baar mujhe baachati ho haar baar roti ho hard bar flashback kyun mamu ki bhanji kyun .. kyun chot mujhe lagati hai hai dard tumhe hota hai kyun kyun baatoa kyun jab mein so Ta hu tab tum roti ho mere liye kyun.. mamu ki bhanji ...
(tears welling up aaliyas eyes zain also had tears in his eyes)
aaliya :ha ha hoti hu me jealous ...hota hai mujhe dard ... aata hai mujhe rona ...tumhare liye ... bas sun liya hogaye Kush aaliya Ko hoti hai jalan ban gaye mahaan Chodo ab mujhe
(tries to move but zain gets closer ... to her almost his body were pressing hers and their face were too close )
zain :Aaj nahi chodunga maine mamu ki bhanji .. he whispers in hwr ears ...yeh jalan kyun ..yeh dard kyun .. Yeh aasu kyun.. aaliya Kya hai Jo chupa rahi ho mujhse kyun meri maut ke darr se itna darr jaati ho kyun ... (he gets more closer .. nd repeats)
zain:kyun aaliya kyun
aaliya:zain Woh ... (and stops aaliya thinks I camt ..him I can't )
zain with fierce looks : nahi bolongi mat Bolo ... isse Pata chalta hai ki tum kitni phattu ho aur Kuch nahi aur mujhe Toh lagTA hai yeh sab dikhawa hai yeh fikar aur Sab .. Chodo mamu ki bhanji tum Kuch nahi Bol pao gI ..(And leaves her and turns around . But this time aaliya pulls him and says
Aaliya :zain mein tumse beintehaa Mohabbat kartI hu ( And hugs him) ...par darti thee ki tum mujhe nahi apnaoge ... aur humhari dosti bhi bigad jaati mein tumhe kohana nahi chahti zain
(zain hugs her tightly)
zain :mamu ki bhanji mein Bhi tumse pyaar karTa hu ...(makes her look up Amd places kiss on her forehead Amd then on her lips they both were lost on each others kissing each others passionately and finally the consummated their marraige)
soory too long ... but do comment ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow really cute update loved the last scene! !
😃 😳 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mindblowing am in a dreamland want this to happen in the serial fab:D

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