Zaya Os - For You My Love - last part up (page 3) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifulll <3
i could feel Zains shoch and pain.. barkats disbelief n gulit.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome waiting for other part do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg so beautiful.. update soon and please pm me as I don't want to miss the next part... I hope they use this kind of story in the show
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg, this is beautiful and very sad too, nearly had tears in my eyes. Well written! 👏
Please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully expressed feeling in letter and bro-sis
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ok guys,
here's the last part!!
i am not very happy with it but it is something...
thanks everyone for your lovely responces
am seriously overwelmed!!!!


LAST PART

Surraiya, when Aalia had told her about everything thought that maybe she must not be happy here and was having difficuly in adjusting, so like a true mother she had listened to her and then let her leave thinking maybe everything would be well. She truthfully had never thought that she would see this horrifying scene when Surraiya had let Aalia leave from Barkat in the dead of the night. She had listened to Aalia talk and had come to the conclusion that she was leaving to give peace to Zain who at this moment was crying his eyes out for that person leaving whom she thought would be the reason for his happiness. She was sure she had never been so wrong in analyzing anyone or any relationship.

Surrraiya slowly walked up to the duo and handing over the address of their farmhouse in shillong, said"Aalia yahan gayi hai." Both Zain and Barkat looked at their mother in surprise and then at the paper. Looking at their confused faces, Surraiya spoke," usne kaha ki who abb yahan nahi rehta chahti, ki who khush nai hai, ki woh tumhe aage badhne dena chahti hai, tumhe azzadi dena chahti hai. Uss samy mai uski baat samajh nai paayi ya yeh kaho ki uska dil jo keh raha tha woh samajh nai payi. Usne mujhse 6 mahine rehne ke liye ek jagah maangi aur maine usse shillong wale farmhouse ki chabhi de di. Mujhe.. mujhe lagta hai woh beemar hai... bahut beemar... shayad... usse dhund lo Zain, isse pehle ki bahut late ho jaye."

Zain looked at his mom in shock, what was she talking, his kitkit ill, impossible, never. Just then he heard Fahad bhai enter with something in his hand and tears running down his eyes. Zain ran to him and snatched the paper, only to find his heart breaking at the reports...

BRAIN TUMOR 3rd Stage


Zain snached the car keys held in Fahad's hand and ran towards the airport.

Aalia was feeling restless. She had gone to the doctor and she had come to know that she had only 6 months to live. She could not see tears in everyone's eyes & she had left with help of her Mami this time so that the Kitkit couldn't find her. He had such an antenna for her, he would always know whether she was near him or not, or if she was in danger or not. She knew she had lied in that letter as well as to her mami but she had no choice. She couldn't let them know. It was true she felt guilty for what her chacha had done but she would have never left Zain for that. She was strong like that but not in this situation. Not here.

Aalia had just come from taking a stroll outside when she heard the door open, thinking that it must be the aunty next door, coming to ask about her health she went to greet her. Aalia felt the breath stuck in her throat as she saw him looking at her with rage as well as grief in his eyes. Aalia felt her eyes weel up.

Zain : Tum ek number ki phatto ho, janti ho na MKB. Bhagna that oh who bhi mom ki madad leke. Khud nai bhag sakti thi, taaki mujhe kuch toh challenge mile tumhe dhundne ke liye.

Aalia : Zain Abdullah, tum mera peecha chod nahi sakte kya, jao kisi aur ko jaake pareshan karo. Abb mai tumhari musibat nahi.

Zain : MKB, tum toh meri hi musibat ho aur main tumhara shauhar hu kissi aur ko pareshan kyu karu jab tum mere pass ho. Wadda yad hai, jo maine kiya tha akhri baar - chahe tum kahi bhi chali jao, mai tumhe kahin se bhi dhund kar lee aunga. Miss. Kasme wade. Yaad hai na.

Aalia : Zain, please. Chale jao, main yeh nahi kar paungi. Main tumhare saamne nahi toot sakti. Please Zain.

Zain : MKB, tumhara saath toh mai chodne se raha. Toh ya toh mere mann aur dil se apni yaadein mita do ya phir mujhe mitta do. Aur Barkat toh tumhari khabar lenne wali hai. Bahot gussa thi who. Tumse bahut naraz. Keh rahi thi kit um agar wapas nai aayi toh tumse kabhi baat nahi karegi, yehi tumhari sazza hai.

Aalia : ZAIN... pagal ho, aise baatein karte hai kya. Allah kare tumhe meri umar lag jaaye. Allah tauba meri bacchi, thik toh hai na who. Allah reham kare meri bacchi par. Par mai kya karti, apne aap ko usse iss halat mei nai dikha sakti thi na. main hu na, usse mana lungi aur phir kabhi apne se door nai jaane dungi usse.

Zain : toh phir chale tumhari Barkat ke paas. Uske liye hi sahi. Main aur meri Barkat bahut selfish hai Aalia, hame jo chahia uske liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai, kisi bhi had tak jaa sakta hai.

Said Zain nuzzling her cheeks while both of them hugged each other tightly with tears in their eyes.





love you guys...

VISHRUTA😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh my gosh i never thought that aliya got an tumour
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was some twist! I thought she had legitimately left because she had the tumour! Very well written :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG! I LIVED IT
SHOULD WRITE MORE
I THOUGHT THAT ALIYA HAD TUMOUR
BUT NO, WOW
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
OMG thats so sad...
very well written

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