zaya OS very short OS

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zain had met with an accident and aaliya had bought him back home .he was in his room.he had not yet opened his eyes.only aaliya was now with zain .she was getting worried as zain had not yet opened his eyes.she was praying that he would wake up soon and get well soon..zain slowly opened his eyes.his head was hurting .he tried to recall what happened.he remembered that after drinking something he felt dizzy and he had got a call from the office informing something and he had been gone to the office and while he was driving something happened and went all pichblack.suddenly he felt someone hugged had him.he looked who was it and realised it was aaliya
aaaliya;zain are u feeling fine?

Zain was taken aback by this suden hug and also by aaliya's tone.she seemed really worried.he did no know what to do.
zain;hann i am fine
aaliya ;if something had happened to u then
zain;then what maumki bhanji

aaliya suddenly realised that she was hugging zain .she quickly broke the hug and moved her face away from him..she was afraid to meet his gaze fearing that he will realise what is going on through her mind
aaaliya;kuch nehi.i'll be back
she went outside the room as soon as possible

zain(thought to himself);is mauki banji ko kya hogaya?why is she acting so weird .i am the one who got hurt and she is acting as if she got hurt'


aaliya stopped outside the room and thought to herself
'if something had happened to u today i would never be able to live peacefully even one monet of my life .but u won't understand that?i am only maukibhanji for u and nothing else."
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice on dear
i loved it
lovely os
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was very nc... Keep writing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was a nice OS .hope this happens in the show

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