Zaya ff Forever Yours... chap 12: pg 40 - Page 12

awesome update
loved it
zain gave another chance for that man
felt bad for him
zain watching aaliya is nice
continue soon
thanks for the pm

Nice one Lara

waiting for next

Originally posted by: preity_d

beautifulll, this chappy was the best, we got to know how souls gets detached from their body, we got to know about a humanly kindness of The non human Zain... He gave him one more life in one life

this was what was seemed to happen... people should be at his mercy. Zain would grant death to sidestep from one out of kindness, but this girl.. aaliya.. she was alive and shockingly she wasn't at his mercy too. She somehow was immune to him... somehow could deflect his aura and power. Rideculous !!!!

so, this is the thinking of Zain, the non defeat able Aaliya hurt his ego ... Loved just loved how he adjusted himself beside Aaliya, so looking forward for the next...

Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

awesome update.zain gave a chance to the main that good.i feel bad for the man family.love the last part.waiting to see how zain will be take her soul.

Originally posted by: divikash

woaw loved it, it showed the depth of zain's character

and him staring at sleeping aaliya, im grinning like an idiot rite nw thinking of the scene

thnks yaar for such a pretty update

update sooon

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Amazing update!! Liked the way you have explained how Aaliya was able to see Zain when he had come to take away her soul.. Zain is neither that cruel nor immune to human emotions.. He shows mercy to those he wants to.. But Aaliya is a different case.. Though he is there to finish pending work yet he can't stop admiring her ;).. Lovely!! Will be waiting for the next.. Thanks for the pm.. Take care :)

Originally posted by: shaalivirman

wowowoow!!! awesome re :D

kind side f him awww i love it...

this is too damn different

anther addicted story of clara ji :p

thnx fr the pm update soonnn :D

Originally posted by: kokubaba

superbb😊

Originally posted by: .LiveLaughLove.

Amazing chapter. Loved it 😊