College life ❤️ ZaYa & AsYa FF - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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great concept! can wait for ur updates... please make regular updates here... thank you!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Super nice concept
Both shows r my fav
Cont soon
Do pm me for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey!
I am looking forward to read this one. 😊
Just wanted to ask 1 thing- In the character Sketch, you wrote that humeira will fall in love with' Ayaan' but didn't gave the character sketch of Ayaan. So, did you write Ayaan's name mistankenly?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Ohh i didnt notice that ...yes I wrote that mistakenly ..SORRY!!!!
it is supposed to be HAIDER :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Hope you like my update!! Please comment :)
Edited by namirah123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Some Clarifications & Changes : This will be an asya and zaya ff A dual...i hope you like it :) Humera and hayder are going to play a role but i will only focus on ZaYa and AsYa :)

Aaliya's family is not poor and they live in a mansion

The college is in London and zoya ,aaliya and humera go together on the plane...

The college has four dorms...
the girls and boys 1
the girls and boys 2
the teachers
the staff

Aaliya ,zoya & humera though are very kind and nice and respectful ...they are modern to and all three of them wear jeans ...they live in the dorms and visit home only on rare occasions ...


CHAPTER 1

Gulaam mansion


*ring...ring...ring*

Shabana screamed :AALIYA!! Utho!!
Aaliya moaning : ji ...ammi...
Shabana:aaliya ...jaldi utho! Tumhara pehle din hai college ka beta...
Aaliya:ammi bas 3 minute...
Shabana: nahi! Do minute bhi nahi...
Shabana came to aaliya 's room and looked around only to see the room empty and aaliya 's things packed in boxes...tears filled her eyes as she saw her daughter sleeping on the bed in a very uncomfortable position..she went to aaliya and kept her hand on her head : meri beti aaj pehle baar college jaaye gi aur woh bhi mujhse itni door ...itne anjaan log honge wahan par...more tears slipped down her face.
Aaliya opened her eyes to look at her mothers tear stained face and closed eyes...she moved her head on her mother's lap and closed her eyes: meri ammi ke aakhon main aasoon ache nahi lagte...ammi main promise karti hun ke har roz main aap ko call Karun gi aur aap se baat bat karun gi
Shabana:haan meri bachi! Ab jaldi se utho zoya aur humera aa rahe hain...
Aaliya:ji ammi!
Aaliya stood up and went to the washroom and had a shower..

Aaliya's dress:




Farooqi mansion



Zeenat farooqi(zoya's mother) : beta are you ready??
Zoya: ji ammi ...
Zoya came out wearing this:




Zeenat cried: haye! Meri bachi! Aaj pehle baar college jaye gi aur main iss ko 6 mahine se pehle dekhte bhi nahi wali hun :( tu London main jaa kar maze kare gi aur yahan teri ammi tumhe yaad kar rahi ho gi!
Zoya: are meri beautiful ammi aap ne promise kiya tha ke aap apne ankhon se aasoon nahi nikal dengi ...tau phir yeh kya hai? She wiped the endless tears off her mums face and continued ' aur haan London hai tau kya hua! Call tau main aap ko kar hi sakti hun na :)
Zeenat: haan haan theek hai ab jaldi chal humera aa rahi hai aur tune naashta bhi nahi kiya phir aaliya ke ghar bhi jaana hai aur phir airport..
Zoya ran out of the room in full speed..Zeenat looked back into her room and took the suitcases outside and after one last look she closed the door and locked it..

Anwar farooqi (zoya's father) entered the hall to find his daughter stuffing breakfast in her mouth..
Anwar went and kept his hand on his daughters head...'aaj ke din tau aaraam se khaalo!'
Zaara farooqi(zoya's sister) :kese khaye gi abbu ! Bahat excited hai aapi hum sab ko chorne ke liye!
Zoya:chup kar! Abbu woh kya hai na ammi ka nashta itna tasty hai magar mere paas zyada time nahi hai'
Humera standing at the door: bilkul sahi kaha bilkul time nahi hai tumhare paas! Jaldi karo!!!

Humera's dress:




Zoya: haan !! Aa rahi hun..abbu..ammi,zaara!! Chalo...

She dragged her suitcase out of the car while the family sat down and they went to Aaliyah's house...



Gulaam mansion:


Ayat: appi chalo zoya abhi aa hi jaye gi!
Gulaam: haan bilkul sahi kaha ..
Shabana:lo woh log aa bhi gaye!

Zoya and family (including humera)
Entered the house ...humera and zoya and ran and hugged shabana while aaliya hugged Zeenat...

Zoya:hum aap ko bahat miss karain ge khala!
Shabana: Main bhi par tum log 6 mahine baad to aoge na ! Tab hum khub batain Karen ge ab tum logon gi flight miss ho jaaye gi!
Zeenat:bilkul sahi kaha! Chalo...
Everyone got out of the house and drove to the airport...



Other side of Bhopal

Khan mansion:


Dilshaad ahmad khan (asad's mum):
Beta ready ho gaye???
Asad ji ammi! Ho gaya!



Dilshaad: are waah mera beta! Tears made there way down her face... Abhi rone dhone ka time nahi hai!
Jaldi se Khana kha lo..Hayder aata hi hoga!
Asad sat down to have breakfast and his sister made way: good morning bhaijaan!
Asad:good morning tamatar!
(Her name is najma ahmad khan but asad calls tamatar in love)
Ayaan ahmad khan (asad's brother):
Good morning bhai ! Chalain hum? Airport??
Haider: haan ayaan chalo!

Haiders dress:



Asad:Haider! Kitna time lagaya !! Chal!! Zayn ko Lena hai...
The khan family and Haider went and sat in the car and went to abdullah mansion!



Abdullah mansion

Suraiya:is my son ready?
Zain: yes mom! I am ready!

Zain's dress:



Suraiya: Okay!
Usman: breakfast kar lia?
Zain: wahi tau kar raha hun dad!
Suraiya:remember zain call me everyday!
Zain: yes mom!
Suraiya: yeh lo asad aur Hayder bhi aa gaye!
All of them greeted each other and after a lot of talking they finally left abbdullah mansion and went to the airport...



BHOPAL AIRPORT

The girls were here crying and there the boys were looking at their crying family awkwardly...the boys looked in the other direction and saw three girls crying in the arms of who seemed to their mothers...finally after a lot of rules..crying ..hugs & kisses the boys left for the flight and the family waved till they were no more to be seen and they drived back home...



The girls turned around to see three boys getting hugged and kissed by their parents ,they smiled and looked back to their family and then after getting the same treatment from their own parents..they left the family and went to their plane waving goodbye till the family could no more be seen...
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I hope you liked it..i tried hard on writing something nice pls hit the like button and give your feedback :)
Edited by namirah123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Nice update...
Thnx for pm...
Pls continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Its a fresh idea n had me reading...do continue..!
Hw can they share a room though..too bold ?
Edited by AnotherAdmirer - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Amazing update and its very very very interesting
Will love to read more
Plzzz update soon
Thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Wow its really nice...
waiting to read the next part :))))))

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