FF Ananya and Garv: The Game (full story pg 1, UPDATED PG 7)) - Page 5

Interesting twist, bhavna in big trouble

i like the way Garv says bhabhi ji I could imagine him saying that!

Shitt man ..Bhavna is in deep shitt...the way the have cornered her... n secret r revealing...Adarsh met Bhavna in a brothel n they fell in love...
What's next.. m eagerly waiting for the next one..superb job ria..update soon..

Originally posted by: luvankit

Ok this is really interesting. Bhavna and adarsh met in brothel. And their secret is out to brothers. Waiting for the update.

Thanks shikha! This is the way I had it down when they first announced Adharshs secret wife, I believe that if the show was extended that this might have been a possibility.

Originally posted by: debs4u

Shitt man ..Bhavna is in deep shitt...the way the have cornered her... n secret r revealing...Adarsh met Bhavna in a brothel n they fell in love...
What's next.. m eagerly waiting for the next one..superb job ria..update soon..

Thanks debs so glad u liked it! I was actually getting into Bhavnas character in the show when they showed her 1st and it would've been interesting to see how it would have really gone down in the long run.

I'm going to ask you guys how would you like the story to go down?
I have written something but have yet to tweak bits here and there.

Ria firstly i don't want dis story to end so soon.. but if u already decided than what to say...

But as u have written all d parts n all d characters.. its very good... n now bhavna n adarsh story also revealed.. so wanna see if d brothers gonna accept her in family coz they all knows about adarsh's feelings..n wanna see how they 'll react if they came to know about garv n ananya...n also want some really emotional talk between garv n ananya..as garv also started behaving a little easy n soft.. so as ananya..though she tried to stop him but now she knows dat she can't be away from him... coz somewhere in their heart both have already accepted each other as d way they r...more than lust its on d way to d next step...so maybe another intense n hot part with their confessions would be great...
hahaha feeling a little greedy u know...

ok as I dont want to rush the ending I will be posting it next friday to account for all your suggestions

Scene 12

Bhavna walked in the hall feeling a growing unease in the pit of her stomach. She had hoped one of the brothers would come round and be the bigger man but stubbornness just seemed to run in the whole family. Adharsh and his brothers were at a cold war with each other and she knew it was partly because of her. She came to an abrupt stop as she reached the end of the corridor hearing muffling sounds issuing from next door before she could listen in she was suddenly grabbed around her waist and about to shriek when immediately stifled as a hand closed over her mouth.

Sshhh' a whisper in her ear.

She thrashed in his hold but the arm around her was too strong.

She was starting to feel faint and fell motionless back into her captor. She melted into a pool of blackness...

...Her vision was blurry as she began to adjust to the dim light. She felt a searing pain at her wrists, as someone twisted her arms behind her. The youngest Thakur was tying a rope around her while Amar held her in place.

'Tighten it securely Samar'

'What are you doing?' She stuttered in alarm

'Teaching you a lesson.' Samar said the faintest hint of a sneer curling his mouth. She writhed about as Amar held her.

'Please let me go, is this a way to treat a woman?!' He threw her down onto a chair and rested his hands on either side. She gazed up looking petrified.

'No. But you give us no choice.'

He said and bent low to meet her pale complexion while eyeing her with a desire in his eyes. He brushed his fingers slowly down the side of her face while she shuddered from his touch. Tears were forming in her eyes but it only transfixed him.

'Amar you fool, she's not Ananya that we can share her'. Amar stood up looking resentfully at his brother. Shakti approached the chair and knelt down. She hadn't noticed him lurking in the shadows. He gazed at her pitifully.

'Someone from the brothel wants you dead for running away.' She looked aghast. Shakti examined her keenly.

'So you tell me ladki, how does someone as innocent as you end up in a brothel?

She shook her head in incredulity.

'I don't know what you are talking about. Please let me go.' She said shaking.

'Well aren't you just the player' a new voice spoke jeeringly from the dark. Garv came forward while Shakti stood up.

'Listen 'bhabhi ji' we can do this cat-mouse game all night, as it is, Adharsh is drunk senseless that he won't be coming to your rescue anytime soon.' He spoke with a tenderness that masked the underlying threat of his message. Bhavna tried to restrain the flow of her tears.

'Why...why are you tormenting me? I don't know of any brothel!' She cried with mounting dread. Samar said sarcastically,

'Hush laundiya, why are you looking shocked for? That brothel is a place we frequent, you should have been more careful'.

'I don't have any idea what you are on about' She wept.

Garv looked at her with a foreboding calm. He knelt down and said

'Really? So you really don't remember me?' He said suggestively. She looked at him blank faced, genuinely rattled by his insinuation.

'Wh..what are you implying? You all just want me out of Adharsh's life don't you?' She said dejectedly while Garv regarded her with a deadly look.

He dragged her up and threw her against Samar who held her arms tightly from behind her.

'Adharsh was paying you for your services and like true romantics you both fell in love with each other. You were the damsel in distress and he came to save you from that desolation. And you kept each other's secrets.' He walked up to her and gave her a piercing look.

'Am I right?' Tears streamed down her face and she looked at him in disbelief.

'Not so bholi after all, are you dear bhabhi' he leered twisting the words into her and watching carefully for her reaction.

At that he commanded Samar to take her away to be locked up. She writhed about hopelessly as he slapped his hand over her to quell her screams and pulled her away. He opened the door finding Ananya standing on the threshold...

She stared at them in pure shock. Everything happened in a flicker of seconds. Shakti pulled Ananya in and pushed her against a wall closing his hand over her mouth while Samar took Bhavna with him into a side room. Ananyas eyes were wide with fear. With no time to lose she pushed him away and fled the room, while the brothers rapidly followed her out. She tried to run as fast as she could but they were gaining in on her. She turned sharply round a corner and clashed into Samar who shook his head rather insinuatingly and regarded her with a dark look.

She felt them hem her in and tried to dart away but was pulled roughly by Garv who encircled his arms tightly from behind her. The familiarity of his body heat got to her while he brushed his face against her neck, trying to resist the urge to tear her apart with his teeth.

'Hi again' he whispered, she felt his hot breath against her skin while his lips brushed lightly up her neck.

Shakti frowned as he caught Ananyas expression which had softened at the sound of Garvs voice. Shakti moved forward and wrenched her away while Garv threw him a vile look. He threw her into a room, and the others followed them in. Amar drew the lock on the door.

Garv walked up to her and pulled his gun out pointing it to her forehead. He then trailed it slowly down her body following the movement with his eyes while keeping the hilt of the gun pressed firmly against her navel. He drew right up to her then and she squirmed against him as he brushed his lips across her cheek and to her ear, he whispered suggestively,

'You had better behave tonight Ananya'. He kissed her softly on cheek. She scratched at his face as he did but her defiance only aroused him and he shoved her hard to a door pinning her arms against it till she gasped.

'Why do you continue to disobey me, sweet patniji?' he grimaced seeking her out as she twisted and turned her face away from his close proximity. She felt his breath warm against her skin and he brushed his mouth teasingly against hers almost rekindling the intense moments they had shared not too long before.

'You're pathetic' she said spitefully while meeting his tempting gaze. Her resistance both enraged and intrigued at once. His eyes glinted with a sliver of malice as he tackled her to the floor pinning her arms down and she felt his crushing weight above her. They gazed at each other for an interval of a few seconds. She failed to understand how this was the same man who had shown a more tender albeit passionate side to him when they had been together. He had behaved quite differently when they had been alone and yet now there was definite malice in his intentions. She wondered if she could ever keep up with his temperament. Garv finally let her go and swung her up with mighty force and throwing her till she landed onto a sofa. Shakti pounced on her and pinned her down onto the sofa. She tried to propel herself up but he pushed her back.

'You won't be leaving this room alive unless you co-operate.'

'I don't have to listen to you. You are all pathetic, locking up a helpless girl all because she refuses to buy into your lies' she scoffed. Shakti scowled and released her and went in search of a piece of cloth to use as a bandage. Something to shut her preachy mouth up. Garv's temper was inflamed as he had watched them within inches of each other but he kept himself under control while eyeing them with plain disgust.. Amar gripped Ananya by the nape of her neck and pulled her up.

'Lovely wife you always make this harder than it should be' he grimaced.

Ananya had a thought, deciding she wasn't going to let them gain the advantage again.

'Ouch, ouch, ouch!' She yelled. She flopped down on the sofa as Amar released her surprised by her sudden change in reaction. What are you moaning about? He said impatiently

'When Garv threw me on the sofa, my ankle twisted. I can't stand.' She exclaimed rubbing at her ankle, it wasn't a complete lie.

'Ouch, it really pains!' She cried squinting her eyes. Garv eyed her suspiciously before kneeling down before her.

'Let me take a look' he said, he shifted his eyes wickedly in Shakti's direction before taking her shoe off. He slipped his hand around her ankle and massaged it gently, she tried not to wince and grew very conscious of his hand seeking her skin just beyond her ankle, moving up her leg. His face was a dark shadow as he bored his eyes into hers surveying her intensely. She withdrew her leg slightly but he didn't let go. Shakti looked at Garv repulsively and intervened. He dragged Ananya up and tossed her to Samar. The action only fed Garv's pride as smirked upon Shakti's reaction. Ananya faltered in her step as she was flung harshly against Samar who spun her round to face Shakti while holding her in place.

Shakti walked menacingly to her swinging the bandage around his wrist before starting to tie it around her mouth. She gazed imploringly at Garv who simply looked at her mysteriously. Samar held her arms behind her as Shakti knotted a rope around her wrists. He then threw her against the floor and they all stood over her intimidatingly.

Garv knelt down to meet her weary expression. He stroked the side of her face gently and she responded to his touch by swiftly turning her head away.

'The more you resist us the more we chase you down.' He said softly into her ear before standing up again.

'Don't mess with us Ananya, we know your tricks only too well' Shakti said darkly.

'And stop interfering in our business laundiya, or you will come to regret it' Amar remarked rather flippantly. At that they walked away leaving her in the dark.