FF Ananya and Garv: The Game (full story pg 1, UPDATED PG 7))

Riya as I already told you..I love it..I love your writing..you write it so well that I can imagine the whole thing in my mind..with all the expressions..write more..I wanna read you writing..😳

As I have already stated it is amazing. In the first scene really liked the way you have described their proximity and the tension present there. I loved the second part. So now again she is trying to be the ideal bahu and further what she thought about Garv and his contradictory behavior was so apt. It shows the depth upto which he affects her. Last I will mention the same thing.. He noticed her mentioning him only and then smirked. Garv you should not do that after all she is just a need. Fantastic job Ria waiting for more.

Originally posted by: luvankit

As I have already stated it is amazing. In the first scene really liked the way you have described their proximity and the tension present there. I loved the second part. So now again she is trying to be the ideal bahu and further what she thought about Garv and his contradictory behavior was so apt. It shows the depth upto which he affects her. Last I will mention the same thing.. He noticed her mentioning him only and then smirked. Garv you should not do that after all she is just a need. Fantastic job Ria waiting for more.

Thanks very much! The next scene planned will try and show a bit of his POV though not as much as hers, in order to develop the enigma and mystery that surrounds him. I have a rough sketch in mind, so lets see..

Good going riya , continue soon 😊

Wow amazing it is.

Please continue it soon.

That was beautiful! ❤️ Already intrigued by this FF... please continue it and upload the 2nd part soon. Eagerly waiting 😛

This is so good... amazing job

Story update:

Scene 3

CLANG

The hustle and commotion of dumbbells and the deep voices of
the Thakur brothers emanating from downstairs made Ananya jolt up in bed. She
veered her head toward the door. This new adjustment would take time getting
used to ... the sleep she had taken for granted when living alone with her
father had never felt so precious to her; her dear father, how she sorely
missed his gentle reassuring voice that she would listen to just before falling
asleep every night...

CLANG

The clamour that came with living in a house with 5 men each
with their own morning rituals overwhelmed her a bit. They were lost in their
own world when they worked out, throwing taunts at each other, bragging and
spurring each other on, their competitive streak in full swing. She found herself
becoming curious by the uproar of voices that boomed from downstairs and crept
out onto the balcony to watch them below.

The Thakurs brotherliness was never more apparent than in
the early hours of the morning where they would convene together in their daily
rumble disguising their affection for one another through displays of manhandling
and tussling. Shakti and Garv were locked in an intimate wrestle while the
other brothers egged them on. They wore tight vests, their bodies glistening
with the sweat of their hard work out. They came tumbling onto the floor, Garv
taking the hit while grappling with his brother's weight over him.

'Kaa hua beh? Not enough food on your plate already?!' he jibed

'Ehhh! You dare call me fat, you're the one who eats 3 meals
a day and you manage to eat all our leftovers on top of that. Anyway I see what
you're trying to do, you think you're smart don't you Garv babu' he grinned
seeing the effect his words had on his hot-tempered brother who only scowled back.
In a fleeting instant Garv mustered his body strength overturning his brother who
now squirmed beneath him.

'I am, I don't need to think' he grimaced back. The brothers laughter echoed around the hall, Garv grew annoyed and aimed a punch towards Shakti narrowly missing him as he swiftly turned over and lifted himself up. Garv rose and regained his breath, challenging him to another tackle but
Shakti expressed his exhaustion and dropped onto the nearby armchair. The 3 others were
warming down too, they wiped their sweat with the towels before slouching themselves upon
the other chairs. Ananya scanned the scene of the aftermath; they looked oddly
serene as they relaxed on their armchairs. Her eyes fell on Shakti who yelled;
'Don't disturb me Garv, Im taking a nap' before throwing a towel over his face, her face fell blank. She veered watched Garv nearing his brother, a queer look marked his face, Was it envy? She couldn't tell.. Amar and Samar leapt out of their armchairs and were headed upstairs for their shower just when Garv called after them. 'Run my shower after you are done'. They looked at each other and Amar replied 'as you wish bade bhai', they jolted up the stairs in the opposite direction to where Ananya stood.
Garv drifted over to the weights, returning to his former activity. She watched with wonder the slick movements of his arm muscles as he slowly lifted the weight in his left hand, then switching to his left and alternating every few minutes. He persisted for a while and then came to a stop. He pulled his vest off revealing his well-toned, muscular chest and moved onto the next equipment. She beheld with interest the flexing of his muscular movements as he heaved himself up holding onto a metal bar and moved down steadily. His eyes were etched in concentration and he fixated on a point straight ahead of him, she caught a glint of madness from the sunlight that came streaming in..Ananya shuddered as a hand tapped her from behind. She turned to meet Soni's warm countenance.

'Ananya, theres breakfast downstairs, Ive just prepared it,

will you be joining us?'

'Of course, just let me get ready first' Soni nodded, smiled and left to busy herself with laying out the table. She was just about to leave herself when she spotted Amar and Samar walking on the terrace opposite, they were holding two buckets full of water and positioned themselves in line with Garv. They nodded to one another, mischief glowing in their eyes, Samar shouted ' you wanted your shower' followed by Amar 'heres your shower' Ananya gasped as she watched them drop the buckets of water till their brother was completely doused.

He looked in their direction and sprinted up the stairs but slipped half way. Ananya burst out with laughter as she watched Garv who was desperately trying to find his footing. He swerved around and met her eyes, fuming. She looked away trying to compose herself and realised with dread that he was making his way to her as he came from the stairs onto the balcony. Before she could
make an escape like the twins had, Garv had her cornered. Her heart pounded as he closed in on her, she clung onto the handrails behind her to steady herself as he drew nearer and nearer, he gripped the rails beside her. She squinted to meet his keen eyes that was taking her in, and quickly turned her face away as he closed the gap between them.

'I'm sorry, I didn't mean to offend you' she spluttered out

He smirked and said to her gently 'When you make an apology you should look me in the eyes, then I will know you are telling the truth'. She did as he bid and apologised once more. He said nothing, only gazed at her, his eyes burning into hers as if seeking her out. She could feel his body heat consuming her, he never looked more intimidating especially in bare flesh. She felt unsettled by how too close they were, felt his crushing weight as he pressed closer. Just as he was about to slide his hands over hers she managed to draw her arms up in front of him and pushed him away before he could do anything further. He obliged her and watched her turn into her room, drawing the doors in, a flicker of guilt passed over her face before the door closed on him.

Amazing loved it plz continue