Pehle kyu na mile hum -lakham ss part 4 updted

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Tera zikr ho raha hai
Ibaadat ki tarah
Tujhe yaad kar liya hai
Aayat ki tarah

Part -1

(location mumbai saraf womens hostel)
Pov poonam
Saying that im feeling nervous would be understatement...guddi was best friend my only close friend and only thing i have as a family after my big brother..he was in airforce so i dnt get to see him lot..my parents died, we have a house here but as my bro is always away i live in college hostel, now that college is over i have to go back to house alone...guddi is getting married in a month shell be gone and ill be back to being alone i shrugged away the thoughts..im going to her wedding in her hometown begusarai district of bihar for a month..i never been outside of mumbai only been to mahabaleshwar on clg trip..but going far wasnt thing i was afriad of but going to strange place and live with stranger people is wat im afriad of i been studying in hostel since im child so i never get to experience the proper family time...we said farewell to all the friends guddi invited our close friends for her wedding..now shes packing in our dorm room..

"mujhe nahi pata tha"
Guddi s word broke me out of my thoughts
"Kya?"
"K tumhare bags k pass per hai aur voh apne aap hi bhar jayege kitana sochogi chalo aab bag bharo train hai hamari aaj.."She gave me angry eye look
"Guddi me kya keh rahi thi k..."
"Nahi "
"Are par..."im trying to convinse her since month that ill come day or two before her wedding but she never listend to
"Nahi hume pata hai tum kya bolne vali ho aur jawab hai nahi! tum mere hi sath aa rahi ho vo bhi aaj bass " hmm now she vll start her emotional speech..
"ek mahine bad humari shadi hai..Uske bad kya pata hum kab mile aur kese srf ek hi to mahine ki bat hai poonam tum hamare liye srf itna nhi kar sakti vese humara ghar hai na vhape humari family hai kha kai aur ja rahe hai...plz yar ."
"packing me help karo to phir"
"i love you poonam"and she came crashingly nd hugged me i hugged her back "i love you too"
<font color="#cc0000">precap- reched patna bhai aya hai guddi ka lene...ate hi chilana uff😉</font>😛

<font color="#6633cc">ok first chapter posted i realy do hope you like it...ok bit boring without lakhan par kya karu had to tell you abt bg of poonam for understanding...short update but vll update soon ..good or bad all feedbacks are welcomed..i would like to say sory for my realy bad english and grammer mistakes..</font> 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow!!totally new sceneario..do update the next part soon 😃
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terrific plz update soon n plzz lakhan ko bailbuddhi n illiterate mat dikhana atleast graduate to dikhana
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Part 2
"Ha ha bhaiya pakka phochte hi phone karugi aapko bye take care"I hanged up the phone..
Guddi stil adjusting her luggage which was 3suitcase and 2 bags and 1 handbag and mine was 1 bag and 1 small purse..we surely had diffrent sense for fashion..
we ve been frends since 5years We were roommates and had same class..she is way diffrent from me bit naughty chirpy and talkative she gets friendly to almost everyone..shes realy protective of me..just like a elder sister...
"God yeh bags bhi na..."
Finaly put the luggage properly...i removed my book from my purse
"Oh godd poonam train me bhi! yaha to diary likhna chodo...kya hmesha shuru ho jati ho tumbhi "
"Aree bass thode tym plz.."
" voh thoda tym kabhi thoda nhi hota.."
She plugged her headset into phone and started listning music
i love writingg i have started writing since i was 10 , wenever in childhood i missed my mom and used to cry bhaiya used to say that kabhi bhi ma ki yad aaye na tab isme likha karo iss diary me..yeh sare pages na asmano k sitare ma ko padhke sunayege ...i grow up and shud know dat it isnt true but loved to belive that maybe it is true and maybe ma sachi roj uper meri diary padhti hogi...i write everything into this book my thoughts my day s schedule everything is in the book..this book was extra special as it was my mums and bhaiya gave me this year only...

...
"tumhara stn kab tak ayega guddi?"
"4 bje tak patna aa jayega"
"Par tum to begusarai me rehti ho na?"
"Ha par mumbai se koi direct train nhi hai begusarai tak to hum patna pohchege fir vaha se bhaiya lene ayege hume"
"Ohh"
...
Train arrived patna at 4pm ..we wer waiting in the waiting room
Guddi was talking to someone on the phone must be his brother i think...after sme time i didn see her anywhere
"yeh guddi kha chali gayi abhi toh yahi thi?"
I was bit scared there was soo much crowd here guddi was nower to be seen if not this bags here i would hav gone for finding her i checkd my phone but due to battery low my phone was off..
"Yeh guddi bhi na pata nhi kha chali gayi hume yaha akela chodke"
two men came and started to pick up the bags i yelled
"Are yeh hamare bags hai kha le ja rahe ho?"
"Are humko thakur sab ne bola hai"one of the men said
"Are par yeh hamari dost ke hai chodo inhe " wer was this guddy anyway i was trying to take the bags away from them
I heard someone yelling
"bhutnike itna tym lagata hai kya koi bag lane me,bag toh uthaya nhi jata faltu k itne badi badi guns kandhe par leke ghumtee rehto ho salo uthao aur fatafat rakho jeep me"
those two men got scared and started to pick up the bags huurriedly ..i was too scared to say anything..he looked realy angry if not
Guddi was standing on his side i might hav run away from there
"Kya bhaiya aap bhi na hamesha chilate hi rehte hai "
she walk towards me i was whispred to her "kha chali gayi thi?"
"Are yahi thi ,bhaiya ko dhund rahi thi, poonam inse milo yeh hamare bade bhaiya hai mithilesh bhaiya aur bhaiya yeh hai poonam"
"welcome poonam "
I realy didnt know wat to say i m realy shy wen it comes to boys guddi is the one who always do the talking for me so i just joined my hand and did namste without saying anything...i tried to say but no words came outa my mouth
"Chalo guddi aab nikte hai ghar phochte pohchte der ho jayegi.."
"thik hai chaliye,chalo punmi.."
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We wer sitting in jeep guddi k bhai driving and we both sat on back in 2nd jeep ther was only those two men and guddis luggage were kept
"Gudddi ,padhne jati ho to itne bags sathme hai sasural me to adhi begusarai ko tumhare sath vida karna padega.."
Guddi and mithilesh started laughing..
I loved it , i loved that family feeling and felt sad too...
We reached guddi s home around 9 or something..it was a big haveli just like in movies and serials they have..it was truly beautifull
She introduced me to her family her mom(rekha) who was quite enthusiastic sering guddi ,her dad who was realy calm and warm,i touched boths feet then her dadi whom she called badi amma she was realy nice she didnt let me touchd her feet but hug me insteadd ..i realy loved her...i was truly happy that ivll get to live with them for a month..
"Maa lakhan bhaiya kaha hai ?kahi dikhai nhi de rahe unko pata tha na me aa rhi hu?" guddi asked her mom
"Are tumhara bhai ,engineer saab ko kaam se fursat mile to hi ayege na gharpe, bole the hum aaj guddi ghar aa rhi hai par uuh to nikal pade apne kampe.ayega raat tak...chlo tum jao upar jao muh hath dholo fir khana lagate hai tumhara pasandida dishhes banaye hai aaj"
"Chalo poonam mera kamra dikhati hu"

*****



ok part 2 updated stil not lakhan...so rekha bhushan guddi mithu lakhan nd badi amma hi hai srf iss family me...thode raaz hai jo waqt ane par khulege...

precap-finaly lakham met for first time..how they gona meet u have to wait but surely thers going to be sparkkk...
Edited by bhavi.k - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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yipeee I m d first one to comment...ok I really loved ur ss thnk god no priyom thnks a ton for tht n lakhu is well educated engineer just d way i wanted... jaldi mulaqat karao inki cnt wait to read more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Baah, loved it,though guddi always in my hitlist, this one seems cute 😳
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Awesome Bhavi... 👏

Liked it completely... MT Ki entry mast thi...hope Laakhan Ki dhamakedaar ho aur engineer babu kya baat hai...upar se Rekha ko in sab Ki Amma bana liya..I am enjoying ...
Likhti raho humein yeh love story bahot interesting lag rahi hai.

🤗
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awesome ss dear...i always read all the posts but never comment first time i unable to stop myself to comment...this is different story nd i would like to read other parts of this ss so plzzz update soon...nd u all members are very gud its look like a family...m also the biggest fan of laakham 👏
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Thankss all of youu...realy it feels good to have a good feedback...vll post 3rd chap till nite...
3rd chap me milege lakham even im so excited to write...
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Originally posted by: ritukumari

awesome ss dear...i always read all the posts but never comment first time i unable to stop myself to comment...this is different story nd i would like to read other parts of this ss so plzzz update soon...nd u all members are very gud its look like a family...m also the biggest fan of laakham 👏



Welcome sweety...welcome to the lakham diwane family...
Vll post soon.. 😃

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