LaakhAm Drabble Series: || Deadly Devotion || Update on pg1 16/8/15

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Hello people! Wrote this almost one month ago but forgot to post it 😆 Its an drabble on most dazzlingly intense couple - our LaakhAm 😳 Hope u all will enjoy reading it as I loved penning it down 😊 Do tell me please should I continue with this or not 😆












''Prove your devotion to me. Prove that You.Are.Only.Mine.'' This words echoed in her hear mind, time & again. She can't fall for him. He is such a beast. Her heart raced rapidly beneath her skin as his face come across her mind. What he gonna ask from her ? But she has nothing to give. What he will make her do ? He can't be predicted, ever.


Laakhan Thakur is just too unpredictable for Poonam kumari, no she is now Poonam Laakhan Thakur, she is his wife now, to understand. His actions speak more than words. His eyes speak commands. His stare can shook her to the core & glare can turned her into ashes. She gasped suddenly.


He is just asking her devotion to him. That's it. What more can he ask from her or what more she would be able to do for him ?


Throughout the day, she kept thinking about him. He didn't even had his lunch, the lunch box returned just like she had packed.



Tensed, she kept doing her other household chores.


Later, as the clock was ready to strike 11 pm, Maya bhabhi arrived in the kitchen where she had been cleaning the stove. '' Laakhan is waiting for you, upstairs.''


And finally the darkness took over the full moon.







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So how was it? I will try my best though I am too sceptical about this as I never wrote something like this 😆 Do 'LIKE' & 'COMMENT' & Leave your response!



Next update on Tuesday



----$hreya---




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Posted: 9 years ago
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damn shreya we hv to wait till tuesday!!!!!cant wait to read the next part he is waiting for her-whoaa n shreya banner is just excellent.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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love it . waiting for next part dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shreya darling its beautiful 😳 marked..will remind you to update it fast..😆

And i m gonna save this edit ..i love it..😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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itni choti si update...plz update ASAP and make it big...cause i love reading about laakham
so excited to know what will happen in the next update

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Posted: 9 years ago
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😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shreya..
superb statrt re...
eagerly waiting for the next part...

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