LaakhAm OS: You Make My Heart Smile

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys wrote this a while back.
Hope you all like it
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Why did her heart stop for that split second when he looked at her? Why did her heart feel content when she laid her eyes upon him? Why was her heart beating rapidly when he told her he was happy to hear her voice and to see her? She had never felt these emotions for him, hell she had never felt anything like this before for anyone. She loathed that man after everything he had done, yet why did today she felt a sense of completeness when he looked at her. Did she care about him? No that could not be the case, never. Not after everything he had done to her.

She closed her eyes, and tried to calm her heart. As she closed her eyes she could still see him as clear as day and hear his sharp, yet soft voice saying "ab awaaz bhi sunli". Those words kept ringing in her ears had she kept seeing his deep dark brown eyes staring at her, with a twinkle of mischief, of love, of happiness. How was it that lately his eyes had been saying so much more to her than ever before? She had looked into those eyes before yet she had never seen anything in them except the flare of anger. However lately she had been seeing quite a few emotions expressed in those eyes. Had his eyes always been that expressive and beautiful she wondered?

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Finally he had seen her. Finally he had heard her voice. He had been dying to catch a glimpse of her for the past 2 days, and now finally he had seen her. God knows how hard it had been for those 2 days she had been away. Those 2 days had been the longest days of his life, they seemed to be never ending. Every minute, every second without her had seemed like a lifetime of torture. But now finally his heart was calm again. His eyes were relieved. His mind and soul were content.

She had looked gorgeous in that yellow dress she was wearing, her hair, her eyes, and her innocence. She seemed like a doll fragile yet beautiful. And her voice was melodious and as sweet as honey. Her voice always seemed to calm him, and make him smile. Her voice seemed to bring a sea of calmness over him. He couldn't express his happiness at staring into her eyes, at hearing her melodious voice.

Finally he had seen his love, his life , his Poonam.

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Black.Rose07 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
OK me first again kya baat hai niks aj to to laakham shippers par bahot meherban ho rahi ho tum ek hi din me laakham is ka double it was awesome , mind blowing ,too good etc is se zyada samajh Lena apne os ki tarif hum laakham fans ko to waise bhi is ka hi sahara hai show to day by day junk yard banta ja raha hai no lakham at all
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Niksss... u explained this scene beautifully & ur sigg is beautifull..do post in CG... i enjoyed it completely...rewatched every scene with your line..your OS took me to dreamland...🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was beautiful.
Especially the soft, subtle shades of different emotions in Poonam's and the longing and the quenched thirst in Laakhan's. Lovely!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome os... 👏 👏
at least here we can see LakhAm together 😭
thank you yaar 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sare arma asu banke behegaye. but till hope baki he
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It has to be one of the most simple yet influencing deeply in love one shot I have ever & I meant ever read. This is beautiful & a wonderful piece of writing which defines the longing of his love which once used to belongs to only him & her different opinion & a changing of her expression towards him, no matter what he had done to her & things around her.

Keep writing! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fabulous nikzzz love u babe keep going
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
I'm speechless
this os is sooo beautiful
loved it
keep writing dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
i finally read everyone's comments..
thanks so much guys for the liking the OS and for the positive feedback...love u all<3

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