Pyaar Ka Izhar: A Rudhita SS (chap-17 updated on page 48) - Page 3

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumsukor

sooo cute!!!!


loving it!!!


update soon!!


so bliss

Thank you dear. Glad you liked it. Will try to update it asap.❤️

Btw how should I address you?

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Home786

Nice one... Prit you're really a good writer. Loving your works. Update next part soon. ❤️

Shaheen.🤗. Thank you very much for your lovely comments. Glad you liked it. Unfortunately I'm not any writer yaar only trying to be the same. You know this is the first time I am trying my writing skills.😆. Aaja piya .... was my first ever fiction story.

I'll update it asap.❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iamth

Thank you dear. Glad you liked it. Will try to update it asap.❤️

Btw how should I address you?


you can call me Sumi.


Thanks

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This was so cute

Lioness turning to innocent doe

I really liked mini in positive character here

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: dershika

This was so cute

Lioness turning to innocent doe

I really liked mini in positive character here

Thank you Dershika. Everywhere Mini is negative so I tried to make her positive in my imagination..Glad you liked it.❤️

Edited by Iamth - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hello everyone. Here is chapter four.

Chapter-4

Sampoo-Mini ran from there. Bondita was about to run behind them but was stopped by Ani. Aniruddh held her wrist and pulled her towards himself. Bondita's breath stopped. She was numb due to her husband's proximity. She was blushing. Anirudh understood his state.

Ani(teasingly): Ha to Bondita kya kah rahi thi tum. Mai sayad thik se sun nahi paya. Fir se kahogi?

Bondita blushed and was unable to say anything but somehow she started.

Boni: Patibabu. Jane dijiye na mujhe please.

Aniruddh smirked and held Bondita by her waist and said “Janna nhi chahogi mai naaraz hua ya nahi. Bina jane chali jaogi.”

Bondita did not answer. Anirudh continued “Bondita mai bahut naaraz hoo tumse. Ye koi tarika hai. Iss waqt study me wo v iss tarah se tumne aisi bat keh di.”

Bondita was shocked she thought she angered her patibabu and said “ Maaf kar dijiye Patibabu. Mai nahi kehna chahti thi. Par meri behene mere dil ki har baat janti hai. Isliye wo chahti thi ki jb mai apse itna pyar krti hoo to apko bata dena chahiye. Isliye mai…..Maaf kar dijiye.” Saying this much tears started rolling down her cheeks.

Aniruddh was surprised at her innocence. He said “ Maafi kaise maaf kar doo tumhe Bondita. Thik hai ek shart par tumhe maaf kar skta hoo.”

“Mai apki har shart manne ke liye tayyar hoo bas ap mujhe maaf kar do.”replied Boni.

“Soch lo. Bad me mukar mat jana.” Said Ani.

“Soch liya. Jaise ap kahenge waisa hi hoga.”said Bondita.

“Thik hai fir tumhe mujhe ek kiss dena hoga.” Said Ani.

“Kya” Bondita was shocked. She could not believe her ears and looking at Anirudh.

“Aise kya dekh rahi ho Misti. Pati hoo mai tumhara. Itni badi glti ke liye mafi chahiye to ye chhota sa kam to karna hi hoga. Bhala pyaar ka izhar v aisi jgh pe hota hai study me wo v aise. Pyaar ka izhar to khule asman ke niche chand taro ke bich hota hai. Wo v ek ek shabd pyaar ki chaashni me duboye huye motiyo ki tarah pyar ke dhage me piroye huye hone chahiye. Khair tumne to apne pyar ka Izhar aise kar diya ab dekho mai kaise apne pyar ka izhar karta hoo.” Said Anirudh.

“Khair jo kaha hai wo pehle karo. Apnj saza puri karo. Ab tum mukar v nhi sakti Misti.” Said Ani teasingly.

Bondita blushed and hugged Ani tightly and Ani reciprocated grinning.

It is now Ani's turn for Pyaar Ka Izhar.

...To be continued


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Posted: 5 years ago
#27

My god!!!! I am blushing 😳


Koi itney cute kaise ho sakte hai.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

My god!!!! I am blushing 😳


Koi itney cute kaise ho sakte hai.

Thank you Srishti.

They are damn cute.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This is sooo beautiful and lovely 😍


Dil maangey for a long update

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumsukor

This is sooo beautiful and lovely 😍


Dil maangey for a long update

Thank you Sumi. I'll try for a long update next time.

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