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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Lovelypathak

Haa abhi thodi der pehle hi. Was not logged in otherwise I would have scolded you for not informing me about it earlier. 💔😈

I just opened the link casually during my study break. and I was like ye kya likha hai prit ne. 👍🏼Baaki comments mai likhungi.

Bach gayi tum jo abhi bata diya iske baare mai.😆

Ayee sorry 🙈😆❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful prit❤️

Rudhita part padh kar kuch kuch hota hai☺️

Blush karte rehti hu padte padte☺️😆

Too good👍🏼

Waiting for next update😳

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: listmist

Beautiful prit❤️

Rudhita part padh kar kuch kuch hota hai☺️

Blush karte rehti hu padte padte☺️😆

Too good👍🏼

Waiting for next update😳

Thank you Ash 🤗

Haina 😆Mujhe to future imagine karke hi bahut kuch hota hai ☺️🤣

Aaj karungi update sayad ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Ayee sorry 🙈😆❤️

Abhi thik hai.😆 Next time at least title mai OS/Drabble/FF etc. daal dena. I thought it to be some episodic review.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Lovelypathak

Abhi thik hai.😆 Next time at least title mai OS/Drabble/FF etc. daal dena. I thought it to be some episodic review.

I am not that great behen mai review nhi dalti 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Thank you Ash 🤗

Haina 😆Mujhe to future imagine karke hi bahut kuch hota hai ☺️🤣

Aaj karungi update sayad ❤️

Aisa kya hai future mein☺️

Ahem ahem☺️

Kaha hai update❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: listmist

Aisa kya hai future mein☺️

Ahem ahem☺️

Kaha hai update❤️

Jaan samjha karo😉🤣

Aaj likhne ki kosis karti hoon balike 🤣❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Jaan samjha karo😉🤣

Aaj likhne ki kosis karti hoon balike 🤣❤️

Samaj ti hu na😉🤣

Likh likh

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Posted: 4 years ago

Here is chapter fourteen guys. Special to my friend @Himanshi for her idea. Bon's pic in Ani's wallet is Himanshi's idea ❤️

Chapter-14

Saudamini entered in her house and started calling Dida but Bipin came infront of her.

“Are Saudamini acha hua tum aa gyi. Itne dino baad mai tumse mili ho but tumhare paas samay hi nhi apne pati ke liye.” Said Bipin almost complaining innocently.

“Are aise kyu bol rahe aap. Apke liye nhi to kiske liye samay hoga mere paas. Bas aaj Anirudh Bondita ki sadi hai na to kitna kaam hai mujhe aur mujhe rehna v to hoga Bondita ke saath.” Mini explained to her husband.

“Are tumhari kya zarurat abhi. Abhi to Anirudh Babu hai na Bondita ke sath. Tum yahi ruko mere paas.” Bipin blurted out suddenly and after realising what he did bit his tongue.

Saudamini glared him and before she could say anything Dida came and ask why she is here and she replied Dida she is here to help Bipin in selecting his clothes. Dida went from there after nodding and Saudamini got to know Ani and his friends plan to meet Bondita. Bipin seeing her wife anger told everything.

And Saudamini went to Noor and Sampoorna and both were angry and taken classes of their husbands.

They rushed to Bondita’s room to catch Anirudh.

In Rudhita's room:

Bondita was still in Ani's embrace and was enjoying the moment.

“Bonditaa…” Ani whispered.

“Ji…” Bondita replied.

“Jab tumhe sab pata hi hai to ye v pata hoga mai yahan tumse kuch sunne aaya hoon.” Said Ani.

Bondita looked at Ani with confused expression.

“Acha nhi pata? Chalo mai bata deta hoon. Us din jo jaldbazi me kaha aaj wo meri ankhon me ankhein dalke kaho. Bondita I love you kaho mujhse, aur ache se apne pyaar ka izhar karo.” Said Ani looking into her eyes.

Bondita became shy again and said, “Kya Patibabu aap to sab jante hai fir bhi. Mujhse nhi hoga ye.”

“Haan jaanta to hoon par mai tumhare muh se sunna chahta hoon ek baar nhi baar baar.” Said Anirudh teasing her.

“Patibabu I.. I… lo…” Bondita was stuttering.

Suddenly the door opened and they found Mini, Sampoo and Noor was standing with their mouth shaping “o” seeing Rudhita in that position.

Bondita tried to come out of Ani's hold but Ani held her tightly smirking at the trio.

“Ye kya Anirudh sharam nhi ati tumhe ye kya kar rahe ho?!” said Mini.

“Sharam kis baat ki. Bondita meri patni hai aur apni patni ko apni bahon me bharne me kaisi sharam.” Said Ani confindently.

Bondita stood there shocked seeing this desperate and shameless side of his all time shy Patibabu. Her cheeks were red she tried to free herself but Ani didn’t let her do that.

“Ye kya keh rahe ho. Chalo jao abhi yahan se. Aaj sadi ho jane do fir tumhari patni tumhari aaram se romance karna puri raat padi hai.” Said Mini almost scolding but a bit teasingly.

Both Rudhita blushed at this and the trio chuckled and exchanged looks at this but Ani was in a naughty and desperate mood.

“Are patni hai meri jab chahe jahan chahe romance kar sakta hoon. Waise aaplog hame is waqt disturb kyu kar rahe. Acha apko rukna hai to rukiye mai to romance karunga apni patni se.” saying this he smirked naughtily and leaned towards Bondita.

Mini, Noor and Sampoo was totally shocked. They didn’t expected this behaviour of Anirudh. Bondita has turned red like tomato. The trio put their hands on eyes and turned back saying chi chi chi.

Ani chuckled and looked at Bondita who was blushing hard. He pecked on her cheek, whispered something in her ear and left her and after hearing what Ani said she was blushing more and looking down.

“Acha thik hai mai jaata hoon.” Saying this Ani went from there.

All the ladies came to Bondita and laughed loudly.

“Ye jamaibabu ka ye roop to hamne kabhi nhi dekha tha Bondita. Tune to unpar jadoo hi kar diya hai Bondita.” Said Sampoorna teasing Bondita.

“Ha Bondita ye roop Anirudh ka mere liye v naya hi hai. Apni khoobsurat si biwi ka deewana ho gya hai Anirudh.” Said Mini.

“Are ab mujhe pata chala bhaijaan aur Salim Sahab itne achhe dost kaise hai. Dono bilkul ek se hi hai. Aur balki bhaijaan to unse v aage hai aashiqana mizaz me.” Said Noor and all laughed out loud and Bondita blushed again.

“Chalo Bondita bas kuch pal aur tum dono wapas us pavitra agni ke fere leke ek dusre ko fir se saare vachan doge aur fir se tum Ani ki patni banogi har aur is baar wo khushi khushi patni ke sare adikhaar dega.” Mini said with a sweet smile cupping Bondita's cheek and all were smiling.

After sometime all went for lunch leaving Bondita alone in her room. Bondita was lost in her thoughts dreaming about their marriage and was remembering Mini's words that her husband would accept her wholeheartedly this time.

Meanwhile Ani came again searching for something and found her beautiful wife lost in thoughts and a content smile on her face. He smiled seeing her smiling like this and called her. His voice brought her to reality.

“Kaha khoyi ho Bondita?” he asked her with a smile.

“Kuch nhi Patibabu samajh nhi aa raha ye sapna hai ya sach. Itni khushiyan ek sath mili hai mujhe.” Replied Bondita with a smile.

Ani touched her cheek with his one hand and said, “Sab sach hai Bondita aur abhi khushiyan suru huyi hai. Abhi tumhe aur v khushiyan milengi. Khair mera wallet yaha gira hai kya? Kabse dhoond raha hoon pata nhi kahan gira?”

Bondita looked for and found his wallet on the floor she picked it up and found her childhood pic in his purse.

“Ye apne meri bachpan ki tasveer rakhi hai apke wallet me?” asked Bondita.

“Ha kyuki ye Bondita mere dil ke jyada kareeb hai. Yehi Bondita hai jisne Anirudh Roy Chaudhary ko wo banaya jo wo banna chahta tha. Yehi wo Bondita hai jo andhero me raah dikhanewali jugnoo bani mere liye. Yehi wo Bondita hai jo meri Kranti ki Mashaal bani. Yahi wo Bondita hai jo mere har dard har zakhm ka marham bani. Ye wohi Bondita hai jisne mujhe pehli baar apne aap se milwaya.” Said Anirudh with pride and smile on his face.

Bondita was overwhelmed with his words. She had tears in her eyes and smile on her face. Ani kissed her forehead and said Jaldi tyar hona apne pati ko jyada intezaar mat karwana Bondita. Mai apni dulhan ka besabri se intezaar karunga. Jaldi aana.”


Edited by Prit_007 - 4 years ago


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Posted: 4 years ago

Prituuuuzzz🤗❤️

First of all I'm all ready for your chappals and tomatoes for late reply🙈🙈🙈🙈🤣

Sorry yaar😒....I'm too lazy nowadays and today only I remembered about this


This update has really made me feel so happy especially after my busy day🤗❤️...

Your mini is so amazing prit😆...but I'm sad we won't get this mini ever in our show now😒...

ARC khatarnak nautanki infront of the three ladies not only shocked bon but me too😲🤣🤣...tbh I thought the ladies will run away🤣but yeh log bhi kuch ka m nahi hai....bus wah khadi rahi and just uttered chi chi chi🤣🤣...it was epic🤣..got reminded of kaka's chi chi 😆


My most favourite is bon seeing her childhood pic in his wallet...can't agree more with ani yaar because even if bon grows up, this little bon will always remain close to our heart😭❤️...

Yehi Bondita hai jisne Anirudh Roy Chaudhary ko wo banaya jo wo banna chahta tha. Yehi wo Bondita hai jo andhero me raah dikhanewali jugnoo bani mere liye. Yehi wo Bondita hai jo meri Kranti ki Mashaal bani. Yahi wo Bondita hai jo mere har dard har zakhm ka marham bani. Ye wohi Bondita hai jisne mujhe pehli baar apne aap se milwaya.” .....this part though🥺😭...why are you making me so emotional with such lines yaar😭...

I don't want bon to grow up after reading these😭....

My most favourite and touching line is the last line"ye wohi bondita hai jisne mujhe pehli baar apne aap se milwaya"❤️


All I have to tell you is please don't stop writing even if you are busy😳

Edited by Rudhitafan - 4 years ago

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