Pyaar Ka Izhar: A Rudhita SS (chap-17 updated on page 48) - Page 18

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: --Lalz--

@bold Nahi toh 😉 you used to Update soon rite 😳

Why do you even asking ? Post it 😆

Yep I use to update soon but kal hi to post kiya update aur aj hi dusra kar doon 😈🤣

I'll try by this weekend. Ab khush? 😊

Post kar diya behena tell me should I continue or not.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Yep I use to update soon but kal hi to post kiya update aur aj hi dusra kar doon 😈🤣

I'll try by this weekend. Ab khush? 😊

Post kar diya behena tell me should I continue or not.

Yaayy ab toh bohoti kush 😳

Yeah behen..just got through it..❤️

You know what I love to read all your work 💕 and the new ss looks so promising so please do continue it ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: --Lalz--

Yaayy ab toh bohoti kush 😳

Yeah behen..just got through it..❤️

You know what I love to read all your work 💕 and the new ss looks so promising so please do continue it ❤️

To yaha kyu bol behen waha bolna tha and seriously did you like it?😲 Waisi feeling nhi aa rahi.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

To yaha kyu bol behen waha bolna tha and seriously did you like it?😲 Waisi feeling nhi aa rahi.

Maine abhi tak puri nahi padi...will reply there once I read it fully😳

Shut up...aur ghussa mat dila mujhe 😈 it was good ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hey guys 🤗Here I am back with chapter ten.


Chapter-10

Next morning the preparation of haldi ceremony started by all. Bondita was ready in her yellow saree and looking at the mirror and a shy smile was there on her face.

Sampoorna entered in the room and found Bondita shyly smiling while looking at the mirror and smiled.

"Ahem ahem. Kya hua Bondita kin khyalo me khoyi hai. Are mai v kya pooch rahi tu to sirf apne patibabu ke khyalo me hi khoyi hogi." said Sampoorna and giggled.

Bondita heard her voice and came out of her thoughts and blushed. Meanwhile Mini entered.

"Are Bondita abhi hamare samne itna Sharma rahi ho to Anirudh ke samne kitna sharmaogi." said Mini and laughed.

"Ab bas v kijiye aaplog." said Bondita and shyly smiled.

Mini asked Bon to go with Sampoo and she went to bring the bowl of haldi. Mini was going to Bon with bowl of haldi when Anirudh asked her to stop.

"Are Anirudh tum ab tak tyar nhi huye. Haldi ki sari tyariya ho gayi hai. Aur kya abhi tak night gown pehen ke ghum rahe ho. Jao jake tyar ho jao dhoti kurte me." said Mini.

"Are Mini mujhe kuch bolne ka mauka dogi ya tum hi bolti rahogi. Ye galat hai tumlogo ne abhi tak ekbar v meri biwi se milne nahi diya. Kal raat se subah ho gayi mujhe ek jhalak v nahi mili meri Bondita ki. Aur haldi ki rasham v parde me hogi.

Itna zulm kyu kar rahe ho tumlog mujh par. Mai pehle se sadisuda hoo fir v tumlog mujhe apni patni ko dekhne v nhi de rahe. Ye sahi hai kya!

Please Mini tum meri sabse achi dost ho meri baat samjho. Please ekbaar milne do na mujhe Bondita se. Please Mini." said Anirudh.

"Waise baat to tumhari sahi hai Anirudh. Hmmmm kuch sochna hoga. Ruko tumne jo kuch kaha mai Kaka se keh deti hoon." said Mini and chuckled.

"Kaka....Kaka se kyu Mini. Dimaag kharaab ho gaya hai kya tumhara?" said Ani irritatingly.

Mini laughed loud as she was successful in teasing and said, "Sabra ka phal meetha hota hai na Anirudh. To intezaar karo phal zaroor mitha milega. Chalo ab jao nahane aur tyar hoke jaldi niche aao."

Anirudh with a cute angry pout went for shower. Mini smiled at Ani's antics.

"Ye lo Saudamini Didi v aa gayi. Are aap haldi lane gayi thi nah. Haldi kaha hai?" asked Sampoo to Mini.

"Wo Sampoorna mai haldi hi lane gayi thi. Wo Bondita ka haar lane gayi nah to wahi uske kamre me bhul gayi sayad." said Mini.

"Koi baat nahi mai leke ati hoo." said Sampoorna and was about to go but Saudamini pulled her hand and winked at her.

Sampoorna understood and said, "Are yaha v to dekhna hai na sabkuch. Bondita ham dono dekhte hai yaha tu ja jaldi se haldi lekar aaja."

Kaka and Sumati was watching intently at the trio and Bondita was nervous.

"Kya main? Mai kaise jaun didi?" said Bondita with hesitation.

"Are Bondita isme kya hai jakar le aao." said Mini.

"Par Didi...." Bondita trailed off.

"Are Anirudh kamre me nahi hai sayad. Tum jao jaldi se haldi leke aa jao. Aur wo wale kangan v mujhe nhi mile. Tum dhundh ke lete aao." said Mini and looked at Kaka.

"Thik hai jaldi jao Bahu, muhurta ka samay nikla ka raha. Aur tum dono jaldi jaldi tyariya karo. Bihaaarrii...." saying this Kaka went from there.

Sampoo and Mini pushed Bon to go and Bon nervously walked towards her room. Sampoo and Mini shared a hi 5 with both hands and laughed and suddenly become silent seeing Sumati's gaze. Sumati nodded her head and went from there with smile.


No eggs and no tomatoes please 😆

Edited by Prit_007 - 4 years ago


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Posted: 5 years ago

Kyaa khoob likha hai , hands off to u 👌👌👌👌👌❤❤❤ keep writing and update soon , abb yeh story toh aur bhi interesting ho gya hai❤❤💋

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Posted: 5 years ago

Kya yaar prit😭.....why you stopped at this point🥺....main katti hun tumse😔


The story was going so brilliantly and you halted abruptly 😒

Please upload soon😆...I'm waiting😳.....

And I repeat never ever do this again😆

And I forgot 2 eggs for stopping at this point🤣🤣

Edited by Rudhitafan - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

You are really awesome in writing and this one was full of awesomeness ❤️you have been my role model since I joined this forum😃

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Saniya141

Kyaa khoob likha hai , hands off to u 👌👌👌👌👌❤❤❤ keep writing and update soon , abb yeh story toh aur bhi interesting ho gya hai❤❤💋

Thank you Saniya ❤️

Next part is already half written, I'll update soon 😊

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

Kya yaar prit😭.....why you stopped at this point🥺....main katti hun tumse😔


The story was going so brilliantly and you halted abruptly 😒

Please upload soon😆...I'm waiting😳.....

And I repeat never ever do this again😆

And I forgot 2 eggs for stopping at this point🤣🤣

Olleeeee nahi katti mat ho Krish. Thoda sa intezaar karo next part me flirty Ani babu milenge 😉

I'll update soon thoda aur likhna hai😳

@bold: Aiiiiee🙈🤣🤣

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