Manmohini ( Rudhita OS )

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( it's my first attempt so maafi for errors )

( Grown up Bondita and Aniruddh love story and their first meeting )

Aadhiraat ko koi apne sasural jaata hai kya ? Itne saalo baad aa rahi hoon kam se kam gaadi hi bijwa dete . Arey yeh kya hua , bhaiyaa aap rokiye , dugga dugga koun hai waha .

Suniye mamsaahab mujhe lagta hai ab mai yaha se aapko aage ni le paaunga . Aap ko yaha se khud se jaana hoga .- Driver ne kaha .

Kyu? arey pehle baata dete toh khud tange chalake aa jati . Thik hai aap samman utarwa dijiye .

After the driver left she was standing alone in the lonely road. Suddenly she stopped and took lal mirch from her bag .

Shaitan kahi ke , mujhe pata hai tum ko laga hoga ladki akeli hai toh uska advantage utha loon . I knew it !

Aniruddh can't believe what happened because she actually throw the whole chilli powder in his eyes as she thought he is a molester !

When he got senses , he saw a girl like a angel , from top to bottom she was hell beautiful . And also surprised from her boldness. As he take a brief scan of her , her hair were longer and waivy and dont know but he found her familiar.

Before she put another handful of lal mirch he stopped her : ye tum kya kar rahi hoo ? Tumhe pata hai mai koun hoo ?

Bondita : haa pata hai mujhe sanki aadmi , tumhe kya lagta hai mai tum se dar jaungi . Tumhe ni pata mei koun ho. Zyada bola na toh mai pedh se band dungi .

Aniruddh :. Acha , waise tum itni raaat gaye yaha kya kar rahi ho ? Kahi tum apne ghar se bhag toh ni gayi

Bondita : shut up ! Aapko mai batana ni samajhti . are tange wale bhaiya rukiye .

Within few seconds she left the place leaving aniruddh surprised .

Aniruddh : pagal ladki . Kher mujhe kya karna ! Mai ghar ke liye nikalta hoon , aur meri yeh ankh ka ilaaz karwana padega . Khud shaitaan ki nani hai aur mujhe shaitaan bol rahi thi . Arey yrr meri aankh ..

Aniruddh reached the Choudhary mansion .

Trilochan is shocked to see ani state .

Tri kaka : kya hai yeh ? Ye mirchi ka powder yeh kapde kaha se pitt ke aaye ho

Ani : kaka kuch ni ek ladki ne daal diya tha .

Kaka : kounsi ladki , kaisi ladki aaj kal ki ladkiya bhi apne sanskaar bhul rahi hai . Beta tum jao aur aaram karo .


To be continued.

Part 2 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153463386

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wow. It's interesting. But why ittu sa part?

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Originally posted by: Iamth

Wow. It's interesting. But why ittu sa part?

Because I wanted members response achha hoga toh next part jaldi likhungi .

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Originally posted by: Padosan12

Because I wanted members response achha hoga toh next part jaldi likhungi .

Ok, I am waiting for next part. How should I call you?

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Originally posted by: Iamth

Ok, I am waiting for next part. How should I call you?

Call you in the sense ? Name ?

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Originally posted by: Padosan12

Call you in the sense ? Name ?

Yes.😊

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Call me Ayushi . Or Ayuu

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I have updated the next part . Do enjoy

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Interesting start😃 liked ani bondu meetingšŸ˜† bondu calling him shaitan was cute🤣bondu ready with my mirchi powderšŸ˜†

But one doubt are they already married and meeting after many years or meeting for the first time?

But this was too short, please post a longer chapter😳 just a request

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Originally posted by: bhshre95

Interesting start😃 liked ani bondu meetingšŸ˜† bondu calling him shaitan was cute🤣bondu ready with my mirchi powderšŸ˜†

But one doubt are they already married and meeting after many years or meeting for the first time?

But this was too short, please post a longer chapter😳 just a request

Already done . I have already uploaded the part 2 in separate post .

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