Rudhita FS : jealousy chapter 5B updated on page 27 - Page 10

Originally posted by: nancy56

@bold: I barely speak Hindi in here , guess what dear and didi are not mile apart , are they ?

Alexandria - oh me god- FINE

I JUST WANT SUGGESTIONS FROM ALEXANDRIA JENNIFER WILSON

if that would do ?

You didn’t talk the deal , ( huffs, and goes in a Conner )

Its used for everyone whom we regard as ours😆

Was that Conner a intended pun or a mistake?🤣

I will give you suggestions if you remind me to

Originally posted by: nancy56

OkYa dear !!! Now I shall definitely ask after every update

Originally posted by: nancy56

this was so beautiful !!!
the transition of feelings was so well etched, it was amazing.
You could feel the progression- so gradual, so soothe- and informative. You could live through his feelings and feel wonderful about it!!!

the calmness, and serenity - the slight naughtiness- it was Anirudh Roy Chaudhary in every regard!!

Thank you nancy for your lovely comments🤗glad you liked it😳

Originally posted by: Alexia_Wilson

It depends upon the author itself

She thought, Was I right?

She thought, ' Was I right?'

Both are fine.

Thoughts are those which can either be written like other quotations or like normal sentences

Thank you once again behen for clarifying👍🏼😃

Originally posted by: bhshre95

Thank you once again behen for clarifying👍🏼😃

Ask me whenever you need me to review or give suggestions

Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

Read all parts in one go

First part- So cute and funny

Roshogulla and conversation 😆

sharam nahi aati apko🤣

Second part- Loved the bonding of Batuk, Somnath, Bondita. So cute

puchka😆

Third part- Beautiful! Anirudh's perspective, his thoughts, introspection was written so well👍🏼

his selfless love for Bondita❤️

thanks for writing 👍🏼

Thank you dear🤗 glad you liked it

@ bold - yup!! I hope we get to see good bonding between these three in the show too😆

By the way what can i call you?

Originally posted by: Alexia_Wilson

Happy to help

Ask me whenever you need me to review or give suggestions

Sure😃 Haan thoda dimaag khaungi tera🤣 gussa matt hona😳

Originally posted by: AniRoyChowdhury

very well written👍🏼...less dialogues but on the point..I can imagine Ani's smiling face.....thank you keep writing... waiting for the next chapter😊

Thanks anima🤗 happy that you liked it

Originally posted by: bhshre95

Sure😃 Haan thoda dimaag khaungi tera🤣 gussa matt hona😳

Itna tasty jo hai

Tu bhi aaja🤣

Originally posted by: bhshre95

Thank you dear🤗 glad you liked it

@ bold - yup!! I hope we get to see good bonding between these three in the show too😆

By the way what can i call you?

yes definitely, it will be treat to watch these 3 teaming up

I am catching old episodes (repeat telecast) as I have missed it

got to know about this serial just some days ago

concept is 👍🏼

you can call me Bhagu

Bondita is so cute❤️