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Posted: 17 years ago
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This is basically my take on how Divya is feeling after Amar locks himself in his room and after her conversation with Sindoora.

She usually had complete faith in ny task she had ever partaken in. However when her own life partner simply believed someone he barely knew, it broke her heart. She was trying to show him the truth, but at every turn he ignored the memories itching to reveal themselves into his consciousness.


Why was Amar denying everything and why did he have to believe Badi Mom?

Divya wanted her love to win,but Amar just refused to see the truth. What could she do but ask Shivji to guide Amar in believing in their love.

Samarat realized that Divya was probably alone. Amar had locked himself alone in the other room. He knocked on Divya's door. Receiving no response, he opened the door to see Divya sittting and starring at the wall. he went over and put a hand on her shoulder.

She snapped out of her trance. She wiped her tears and said Amar as she turned around.

She jumped when she saw it was Samrat.

" Tum yahaan is waqt?," she inquired.

"Haan meri jaan!," he declared.

She looked at him digusted.

" Just leave Samrat! You shouldn't be here!," she stated.

" Why not? Your husband obivously doesn't love you, he can't even take your word over anyone else's!,," he hissed back.

He grabbed her arm roughly.

Meanwhile, Chintu wanted to make Amar and Divya make up.

He came over to Divya's room.

He stopped short seeing Samrat hurting Divya. He realized his Dadda hadn't been nice to Divya lately. Besides Divya was his wife, and as her husband, Amar should protect her. However seeing Divya's discomfort Chintu thought he should try to intervene. He looked around in the hallway. Amar was nowhere to be seen.

" Yeh Dadda bhi na! I should help Bhabi," Chintu muttered.

Chintu came in and tried to pry Samrat's hands from Divya's arm. Instead he ended up being knocked back..

Divya tried to go to him but Samrat grabbed her again.

" He's your brother, how could you? He is still recovering from treatment!," Divya exclaimed.

" He's only Amar's , not mine," Samrat stated.

Divya started to insult him telling him how he was a cruel senseless human being.

Samrat slapped her and pushed her down.

Chintu caught his breath and went to get Amar.

" Dadda open the door! Samrat is hurting Bhabhi!," he yelled as he knocked on the door.

Amar sat up alert and went to open the door.

He was stunned to see Chintu out of breath.

" Kya hua?," he inquired.

" Jaldi chalo Dadda," Chintu said tugging his sleeve.

Amar and Chintu enter the room as Samrat is about to wipe the sindoor from Divya's maang.

Amar grabbed Samrat and started to bash him.

" How dare you touch her!," Amar yelled.

After a few minutes, he went over to Divya who lay on the floor horrified.

" I am so sorry Divya, I'll never leav e you alone again," he promised.

It would take time for Divya to get over this and Amar needed to prove his love to her. he picked her up and placed her on the bed in his room. Then he made sure Chintu went to bed and took his medications.

Amar grabbed ice and some pain killers and brought them back to room. he sat down besides Divya and kissed her forehead.

She opened her eyes and just glanced at him. He caressed her face and promised her silently that things would be different from now on. He would take care of her.





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Katishna thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I sorta agree with what you are saying.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Good positve prediction.Lekin creatives itna acha nahi karsakta itna jaldi.Hame bahut frastate karne ke bad kuch din ko baad shyaad ye Hoga.Tab tak rona dona.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Aww that was really cute and touching....i wish it would happen as you said!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh my god i have been thinking this for such a long time! amazing!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was so good hey can you write some more?

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I'll see what comes to mind. Maybe I'll do another one-shot, let's see how Monday's episode goes.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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This was amazing.....would love it if it turned out this way.....keep it up.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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dearest.....i just read now......its amazing!!! HATS OFF!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that ws soooo cute, i loved it, i wish that happened...just i hope he doesnt put her to sleep, want to write more?? that was GREAT😊

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