FF--Circle of Love---Sequel--Upd 2/5--Pg 96 - Page 43

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Posted: 17 years ago

Omg Nishi!!

That was AMAZING! I don't have words to describe how much I loved it.They're so funny. Dropping out of school and working at McDonald's and raising 3 kids😆 And Amar teasing Divya was funny. Especially the 10 feet distance thing and neuro-pyschotic disorder. 😆
Omg the vows! They were amazing! I had tears coming out. It was beautifully written. Can't wait to read the next update😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awww Ravjot..i am super glad you liked it...I was wondering where you went!
I am stuck about the next part..will try to update soon...
Thanks a million for reading and these wonderful warm words!
They mean a lot and encourage me immensely!
Its almost weekend...I am so happy...had such a bad week!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

I actually read it yesterday but my internet was having issues. It still is kinda but itz getting better😊

Itz ok take your time. And yes the weekend is here!! (almost) I know what you mean. Had a very tiring week myself. Almost made me depressed but then your FF made me happy😊 Anyway...theres still a day left before the weekend. Maybe something will happen and it will make up for it. If not then I'll give you a big fat chocolate bar. I'm a bit tired so I dont really know what I'm saying at the moment but hopefully you get what I mean😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
HI! I just finished reading your fanfic! It is truly amazing and one of a kind! I am so happy that I found this fanfic! I am so happy! Sharad is so nice! I hope he finds his love soon! Please continue soon! Bye! :)
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: SVlover

My Eid was okay. I didn't go to school heehee. I went to some breakfast party and then some weird party for kids. 😕 😆 It was freaking hot! I was just standing outside and I started sweating. Blagh.

My dad sent me outside on Tuesday night to go look for the moon and as I was doing so, some dude in a white car cruises along behind me. And then as I was staring at the sky he just speeds up and whizzes past me with his speakers blaring. What an a**. Sorry for my language, but I hate guys like that.

Why was your Eid boring?

That is soooooooooo messed up!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ravjot,
Can I have my candy now?
Radika,
Thanks! I am glad you liked it! Keep reading and let me know if things are not good!
Radhika,
It is unfortunate! The world is not a perfect place!
Edited by Isha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hello darlings! This part is a little cheesy and boring...I had these little ideas and didn't want to throw them away..sorry if I bored you...
Part Twenty Six: Thank God Minutes are Free at Night
It was almost 2. They were sitting snuggling together in a loveseat.
"Ok, wifeee, time's up. Let's go." Amar got up and pulled Divya up holding both her hands. "You can't even imagine how difficult it is to stay away from you, especially now. But starting our journey in life with a lie would not make us happy."
Divya pressed her lips together. She didn't feel like going at all but she realized the truth in his words. "Ok." She assented in a low voice. "That's the responsible thing to do I guess."
"That's my girl!"
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He stopped in front of her house. Leaned over and kissed her cheek and whispered, "Goodbye." moved a strand of wayward hair behind her ear.
A dejected Divya looked at her house and looked back at him and in a disappointed tone asked, "Do I have to go?" Seeing his crooked smile, she leaned forward kissed his cheek and said "ok. Goodbye" haplessly and opened the door to get out.
He got hold of her hand and brushed his lips over the top of her palm and said, "I will be with you always. I promise!"
She nodded and got out.
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She changed into her night Cami and Pant and crawled into her bed, fluffed her pillow and hugged her Teddy bear and started recounting all the events that took place during the day. She never had such an eventful day in her entire life!
Her cell vibrated at that moment. A little startled she picked it up. When she saw 'Amar calling' her heart burst into a colorful rainbow after a brief drizzle of sorrow from separation!
"How is my wife doing?"
"Not good. I miss you." She whined, "When will you come tomorrow?"
"As soon as you wake up. And now we will talk all night till you fall asleep. How about that?" he smiled as if he is consoling a sad little girl.
"It would have been much better if you had let me stay! Now I have to hug my teddy in place of my husband."
"WOW! I am impressed! Girls these days are so forward!" He chuckled. "Listen, I have important news. I called my parents and they are flying in from Seattle tomorrow. They are simply ecstatic."
"Amar--OMG" she sounded nervous and shaky, "What if your parents don't like me?"
Amar laughed out loud. "Fishing for compliments hun? How can anyone not like you?"
"No seriously! You are so accomplished; they might think you deserve someone equally smart and good looking. I am so plain!"
"No. You. Are. Not! You are one of the smartest persons I know. Trust me I know quite a few of them! Have you ever seen yourself in the mirror? Your beauty is intensified a thousand times because you are completely unaware of it. You are grace and simplicity personified. Everything about you is natural, nothing is contrived. Do you know how rare that is? You are elegant, brilliant and dignified! I AM no match for you in any way. Everybody would burn in envy—would be so jealous of me! When we would walk together, people would whisper, what did she see in him? As my grandma would say, how did the monkey get a pearl necklace!!"
"Ok. Enough! I know you are being a nice husband but don't over do it dear! Don't let you imagination run that wild!" she tried to reason but she blushed and bit her lower lips! She was all mushy and mellow inside. She never heard Amar praise her before. But she knew he loved her so much, he would never notice how simple and boring she was!
"Hey I am just being truthful!" Amar declared.
"Right! I am all that! And you are virtually nothing! That's settled then. No arguments in future on this!"
"Absolutely! No fighting on that!"
"Good." She smiled and added, "When do you think we should tell my parents everything?"
"As soon as possible. You are leaving for your mission next Monday. So we need to be done with the formal wedding before that. Or we can have the ceremony after you get back but I don't want to wait. I hope its okay with you."
"Oh! I totally forgot about work! Hmmmm." She paused for a while, then continued, "Amar, I have decided. I don't want to go to my mission in India anymore. I will quit my job tomorrow. I can't be away from you even for a day. So the mission is not a constraint anymore but we should be done with it so that you can never throw me out of your place anymore." She laughed at her sweet revenge!
"Did I ever tell you that you are adorable? How long is the mission?"
"No to the first question. Two weeks. I am serious about quitting, I am not letting you out of my sight."
"What if I tag along with you? Classes don't start till mid of August, so we have the entire summer together."
"What do you mean? What will happen after Summer? You don't mean I will continue my job here in DC and you will stay in Boston? How can you even say that?"
"Divya, be reasonable. I don't want you to quit your job for me. As long as I don't find something here or you don't find something there, we will have a long distance relationship."
"No. You can't quit your job at Harvard. That would be crazy. I will quit and try to find something there. If I find something fine, if not, you will support me! There is no way we are staying apart."
"You love me that much, huh?"
"No. I love myself a lot. Can't let myself be in pain anymore. Eight years were enough."
He laughed again. "I was joking about the long distance thing, I can't stay a second away from you. I feel like eating you alive."
Divya was sleepy, it was almost morning, but she couldn't help saying, "We will see, who eats up whom."
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Posted: 17 years ago
FIRST

OMG that was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute..wow, you reallly know how to present your words nishi, im impressed..this story gets better by each upd😳
Edited by mushtari - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
EEe you updated!!! 😃😃
I loved loved LOVED it! (Constructive criticism isnt one of my good skills)
They are both the cutest ppl alive! She wants to quit her job...aww...and all the wifey and husband talk is too cute!!
Continue soon Nishi!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh haaaa haaaa!
Nishi!
Me soooooo looooooooooved it!
*cuteeee*
I loved the whole praising-part! Hihi. Amar is adorable.
Hope you continue soon!😃

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