FF--Circle of Love---Sequel--Upd 2/5--Pg 96 - Page 13

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Posted: 17 years ago
awww thanx hun =)
anyways loved the update soo much
i am hating sharard but loving amar...why does sharad have to be so mean...but then again...i think he's doing good cuz then Amar and Divya can get together!
boo ya lol
omg this part was sooo sweet and i love how amar stands up for what he beleives in...i really feel sooo srry for him
and nishi! u have some teaching to do hun...
1.) how to write so good
2.) how to express the emotions so well
3.) how to properly write an ff =P lol cuz mine is no where near this =P hehe
anyways enough off my ranting...gosh i really gotta stop talking...
ok so im going to stop right after this...
lol continue asap! cuz i cant get enough of this ff =P
ok im stopping....
now. lol
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Posted: 17 years ago

Dearest Ankita,

You are too generous...Thanks soooo much for your warn words..you don't know how much they mean...You are an awesome writer yourself...I wouldn't even dream to giving you pointers..I don't have the audacity...Love you loads for reading my stories...
Ariba Hun,
Give Sharad some more time...I know whats wrong with that girl? Choosing rightly makes a huge diff..right? Thanks so much..love you...
My sweet Mushtari ,
You are too sweet...thanks for reading...
Sonali dear,
Thanks a lot friend...you always encouage me soo much!!
Meera jaan,
Thanks a bunch for all the nice words...love you...
Sravani dearest,
Thanks for taking time from your hideout to read my stories...and I have told you how much your comments mean to me...so be nice always, ok my cosmic buddy....
Henna hun,
Yes it was emotional for me too..I also love Amar a lot...a person who would never be vocal about his feelings...Thanks a million for reading hun...i look forward to your comments...
Dear Ramsha,
Thanks a lot for reading..just updated...
Edited by Isha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

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We are now back to the present.

Meera, I hope serendipity strikes for you and Rahul emerges in Flesh and Blood. Or you want Shuneel? hehehee…This is for you hun…

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Recap from part 3:

When she got out of the Orange Line Metro in Vienna it was pouring cats and dogs. She took out her handkerchief from her bag and wiped her face. A faded voice echoed in her head "…You are so ancient Divya…..Who uses a handkerchief these days?..."

"I do" she murmured absentmindedly. She was startled by a thunder and came back to her senses. "What got into me today!" She ignited her engine and drove off..

Part Six: Serendipity?

Divya started driving towards home. It was raining heavily with sporadic thunder strikes. She saw the traffic light turn orange and hit the breaks hard. Unfortunately the road was slippery and her car skidded and hit the back of the car in front of her. There was a sharp crackling noise of metal touching metal.

Her Audi A4 was perfectly fine, so was she. She shuddered, thinking about the person in the front car. She immediately got out to apologize, to make sure the person in the car in front is unharmed and of course to exchange insurance information. The road was disserted at this hour. It was pouring cats and dogs. She saw the back of the Mercedes in front of her is severely damaged with both back lights hung broken.

She heard the driver, the lone passenger of the other car get out too.

"What the H***!!..oh Shit!!….." he started hurling other abusive expletives that are not recorded in the English dictionary as he examined the damage.

"Hey lady" he faced her with an attacking mood but stopped silent seeing her.

Divya could barely see in the dark and pouring rain, but she stood there stunned. This is a face she could never forget. "Sharad" she murmured under her breath! She was relieved that he was perfectly fine physically.

The sky was pierced with a thunder, lighting the surroundings for a second! Sharad also seemed to recognize her as he didn't finish his sentence and stared at her. The light turned green and red again. Both of them stood in the middle of the traffic-less road in heavy rain.

Sharad took a step towards her. "You--you look like someone I used to know! Did you by any chance go to Garfield High in Seattle?" His voice was softer and missed all the spite it had a moment ago.

She nodded feeling extremely grateful that it would be hard for him to read her facial expression in the rain.

"Divya?"

She nodded again. "I am so sorry Sharad, the car skidded. I am sure the insurance company would cover the cost of repair and all." She finished in a breath trying with all her might not to show any other emotions that have been dormant for ages.

"Hey, no worries, what's a little car accident between old friends." Sharad smiled his gorgeous dimpled smile. "I better call the towing company, the back tires are not spinning properly."

Divya felt really bad. "Why don't you try to move the car out of the way and I will call the police. We would need their report for damage claim from my insurance."

"Sounds good." Sharad went back to his car and managed to park it close to the street curb, turned his hazard lights on and came back." Divya in the meanwhile also moved her car behind Sharad's and dialed 911. The rain stopped. The police came and soon the formality was done.

Sharad was just staring at her without even blinking and was smiling to himself. The flashing of the hazard light made Divya look like a wet fairy and him a lost heavenly angel, more like Cupid with smiles as dangerous and deadly as his arrows. Divya tried hard not to make eye contact with him and not to read his face. Both of them were completely drenched.

She acted on guilt, "My house is on the next block. Why don't you wait at my place till the tow-truck gets here?"

"Only if you have coffee." He smiled back.

She nodded and both got in her car and went towards her house!

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Edited by Isha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i loved it very cute..continue soon nishi dear, i love you ss😃😃
Edited by mushtari - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awww thank God for Sharad...although I was secretly hoping it would be a certain nerd in the Mercedes😳

what a way to finally meet again, huh? It was fantastic, Nishi...I was so disappointed when the part came to an end...hurry up and update soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Dear Mushtari,
Thanks a million. I am glad you liked it...
Sravani, my cosmic twin sister,
The nerd is working in a lab....he will enter the scene soon....I will try to update soon...I have a bunch of stuff to do before the classes start...😕
When are we reading the story you are working on?😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanks for dedicating it to me Nishi!!!🤗
As for the question...hmmm can I have both? 😉
But awesome part! What a way to meet? I liked her reaction, it was nice and calm except for the hitting him part! 😛
Continue soon soon soon! 😃
Luv ya,
Meera😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Isha

Sravani, my cosmic twin sister,
The nerd is working in a lab....he will enter the scene soon....I will try to update soon...I have a bunch of stuff to do before the classes start...😕
When are we reading the story you are working on?😉



Awww the nerd has his goggles on😳😳

The story is currently at a freeze...it will start moving again mid september😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
Meera hun,
Of course you can have both...
Thanks a lot for reading...and for your warm comments...you know they mean a lot...
Thankoooooo
Sravani darling,
Yes he has his glasses on...poor thing working away...
I wish you could work on it more....I am anxious to know what happened next..I dreamed about this story all my life....hehehhee...
Please please?
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome update Nishi! loved the update!

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