FF-Sacha Pyaar Milege pt. 1 -6 upd. on p3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Setting: Holy hill cliff, Divya is sitting down and thinking about Amar. Amar sees her and creeps up to her to surprise her.

Divya: Mera zindagee barbad hogay. Kal meri aur Samrat ke shadi he. Lekin me use pyaar ne karthe. Me Amar ko pyaar karthow. Lekin vo tho kesi aur ke saath shaadi kare. Me jina ney chatha. Me abhi murjana chatow.

Amar: He Ram! Divyaji kya keriheri he!! Vo kuthkoshi karna chathe! Me esa nay hone dungi. Aur ye sale Samrat kon he?

Divya stands up and prepares to jump of the cliff.

Divya: Shambunathji mujhe maff ker dije. Tum please Amar ko kyaal rakho. Amar mujhe nay pyaar karthe. Phir bi me uske saath naraz ne hoo. Amar mujhe nay pyaar karthe.

(Amar slowly comes up behind her)

Amar: Kya bakwaas kehriho.

(Divya turns around to see Amar looking at her)

Amar: Amar Shivdar Upadayya sirf aur sirf Divya ko pyaar karthe. Aur kisi larki ko nay.

(Divya gets tears in her eyes and hugs Amar while crying into his shoulder)

Amar: Me apse bhut bhut pyaar karthow. I-love-you.

Divya: I love you Amar. Mujhe vadha karo ke tume mujhe kabi nay shoruge. Kabhi chorkur chale nay jowgi.

(Amar puts his hand on Divya's head)

Amar: Me Amar Shivdar Upadayya tumse vadha kurtow me kabhi tujko chorkur chale nay jougi. Ya is janam ho ya agle janam ho me tumhare sath hi hunga. Vadha kurtow. Kasamh se.

Sindoora: Wah kya bhaat hain. Bura hain je tumhari dono ki janam is waqt katamh honewale.

Well guys here you go! Please reply back. Oh, and by the way, I'm new here.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#2
wow!
its a good start<33 i loved it<3
plZ continue soon<3
btw i also have a FF which is tera mera pyaar, plZ do read it and enjoy wenever u have the time<33
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg.....that was amazing 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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really good start, wonder what will sindoora do now.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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AWESOOMMEEE ?

- Deena 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aawwweessommee
please continue soonnn

- Deena 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was awesome plz countinue soon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome update! Cont soon! - Charri
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Man: Rook Sindoora!

Man: Rook Sindoora! Ek kadham lehne se pehle socho le. Meri bundook thumhare sur pe he. Me tumshe abi mar sukthow.

Sindoora: Kohn wo tum? Aur tumko kya lagthe tum mujse rook sukthe. Me abhi en dhono ko mar dhungi.

Amar: Nay! Agar tum hum dono ko marna chate. To sabse phele. Hum ko marna hoga. Lekin hum Divyaji kuch nay hone dungi. Mujse marne hoga samje?!!!

Sindoora: Bus buht buht hogay. Me buht thakgay. Me abhi tum dono ko marthungi.

(Sindoora pulled the trigger. Click. She pulled it again. Click.)

Man: Kya hua? Bundhook me ghole nay he! Ha ha ha ha ha ha. Ab kya koroge tum?!!

Sindoora: Is bundhook me ghole nay he. Ye muth soch je me tum dono ko chorne wale. Aur tume be (pointing to man) tumko nay patha me kya kursukthe hoo. Tum be in dono ke sath mosibhath me phasgay. Tum theno shanti se jio.

(Sindoora got in her car and drove away)

Amar: Thanewath. Buht buht thanewath. Mera pas sirf ek sawal he. Aap ko kese malumtha je Sindoora hum dono ko marne ki khosish kia? Aur tumhare nam kya he?

Divya: Ha. Ha please tumhare nam bhataye.

Man: Me ye sab kese janthow tum please muth sochiye. Aur vaise mera nam me ab tume nay bhutasakthe. Ab vo sub choriye. Ab muje bathow. Aap ke paas Sindoora ke koy statement he je sawith kar sakthe je vo tum dono ko marne ki koshish ki?

Amar: Ha. Ha he. Ek tape he je humne record ki Sindoora ka statement. Ise leker hum Sindoora ko girafdhar ker sakthe. Vo tape is jungle me hain Shambunathji ki mandir me.

Divya: Hum vo tape juldi se juld lay athe aur Sindoora ko girafhdar ker lethe.

Man: Teek he. Vo tape le athe.

Amar: (Shanti se jio Sindoora. Sagar and Vidya wapas aya. Tumhara waqt buht kum he.)

Well guys here you. This is part 3. Please read it and give me your feedback in the comments section. Oh, and try and guess who the man is. All comments accepted.



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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice update!
I think that man is Bharat!
Cont soon!

- Charri 😛

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