FF:Three Birds with One Stone- April 19 pg 80 - Page 25

Ariba,

I have been a silent reader for long..too lazy to comment…but the story is taking such interesting turns..its hard to stay quiet!!

Since I didn't comment in any of the parts, here is my overall view thus far, I reread the whole story as I missed some in the middle..sorry for this LLONG comment:

When Sagar was flipping his cell off and on and thinking absentmindedly of Vidya, that signaled to me deep down he liked her, cared for her..but on surface both of them have created this public display of animosity and rivalry, they themselves are caught up in it, even if their hearts say something else…like hatred is a natural response that came because of so much practice!!

The first letter with the perfume was a brilliant idea…I loved when Vidya and Radha were nervous gathering their stuff with apprehension that he wouldn't think it's a prank..neatly written my sis…awesome….

I loved Sagar's POV when he revealed he had a crush on Vidya in middle school and how they helped him transform…that gave us what a sweet nature kid he is!

And their collision in front of MaryAnn's room…out of the world…I was laughing like crazy..Darling you have amazing sense of humor!!

And thank God guys sometimes don't get us girls…hehehhe….the whole plan would have been ruined if he did…Are we weird? We want them to pay attention to little things and at the same time don't want them to understand all our mysteries…hehhehe…awesome awesome way to express what was on Sagar's mind…he is jusr sooo adorable…

I absolutely loved how you built Radha's character, soft, sensitive and caring…she is a sweet heart…

He likes poetry..aww…that's sooooo romantic…hehehe…Vidya is quite the meany..hmmm..I think secretly she seeks his attention…Am I right?

So the undeniable common glue that binds them together is poetry…hehehhe….Soooo sooo romantic…and when they are not conscious about being sworn enemies they are at ease with each other, like the best of friends..and it didn't take more than 10 minutes to reach at that level…so being comfortable with each is natural to them..only if they gave it some chance….hehhe…

Oh my..exactly what I was worried about..radha fell for Sagar..She is so sweet…Would there be a heart break..I am emotional already..cool update that…you are such a talented writer, portraying people's emotions perfectly..every scene is vivid in my imagination…oh..its getting intense…

The dance in the rain was truly poetic, but it had to end in a fight..these two..when would they realize hatred is a very strong emotion you can only feel if you cared enough once…

You are an amazing writer…I am so pround of you my little sister…tastefully written, the story is gripping and there was never a boring second..awesome..spendid…

But you have to write more and update soon…anxiety is one thing I can't take well..so please..no more suspense…update soon..please…

Originally posted by: inavars

Awesome parts Ariba. Sorry I don't comment much but I really enjoy reading your FF. Love Vidya's sense of humor (which is of course, yours!), the bickering between SV, and the whole ambiance of a college setting - makes it a very interesting read!

You should update more often!!!😛

Originally posted by: anki4life

hey ariba =)
dont noe if i commented on this ff before...
but...
i love it...
its sooo different...and the story is awesome...
plez continue soon =)
cant wait till u update =)

Originally posted by: Isha

Ariba,

I have been a silent reader for long..too lazy to comment'but the story is taking such interesting turns..its hard to stay quiet!! chuppi rustam!

Since I didn't comment in any of the parts, here is my overall view thus far, I reread the whole story as I missed some in the middle..sorry for this LLONG comment: oh Lord.... save me Allah 😆

When Sagar was flipping his cell off and on and thinking absentmindedly of Vidya, that signaled to me deep down he liked her, cared for her..but on surface both of them have created this public display of animosity and rivalry, they themselves are caught up in it, even if their hearts say something else...like hatred is a natural response that came because of so much practice!! exxxxactlyyyy!! they are just so used to it.... eleven years is a long time. The dumbos don't understand their own feelings

The first letter with the perfume was a brilliant idea'I loved when Vidya and Radha were nervous gathering their stuff with apprehension that he wouldn't think it's a prank..neatly written my sis..awesome. Hehehe thanks.... nervous wrecks I tell you 😛

I loved Sagar's POV when he revealed he had a crush on Vidya in middle school and how they helped him transform'that gave us what a sweet nature kid he is! My Sagar has to be qweet..... after all, he's Sagar, nah? 😳 thanks!

And their collision in front of MaryAnn's room'out of the world'I was laughing like crazy..Darling you have amazing sense of humor!! really? well I'm very happy I made you laugh.... I don't think I have that good a sense of humor but if you think so then maybe I do 😆

And thank God guys sometimes don't get us girls'hehehhe'.the whole plan would have been ruined if he did'Are we weird? We want them to pay attention to little things and at the same time don't want them to understand all our mysteries'hehhehe'awesome awesome way to express what was on Sagar's mind'he is jusr sooo adorable' it's such fun being a girl.... torturing guys that way 😈 and Sagar bechara.... got lured in like a mouse seeing cheese 😆

I absolutely loved how you built Radha's character, soft, sensitive and caring'she is a sweet heart' yeah... that's how I wanted to create her character.... reminds me of someone

He likes poetry..aww'that's sooooo romantic'hehehe'Vidya is quite the meany..hmmm..I think secretly she seeks his attention'Am I right? romantic is correct 😳 meany... yep yep! does she seek his attention? I don't know 😆

So the undeniable common glue that binds them together is poetry'hehehhe'.Soooo sooo romantic'and when they are not conscious about being sworn enemies they are at ease with each other, like the best of friends..and it didn't take more than 10 minutes to reach at that level'so being comfortable with each is natural to them..only if they gave it some chance'.hehhe'sweet, nah? I know... if only they gave it a chance *shakes her head* but ki korthe pari? their hatred doesn't let them think...

Oh my..exactly what I was worried about..radha fell for Sagar..She is so sweet'Would there be a heart break..I am emotional already..cool update that'you are such a talented writer, portraying people's emotions perfectly..every scene is vivid in my imagination'oh..its getting intense' who wouldn't fall for him? 😳 na na... don't get emotional already.... there is way more to come 💔 aww thanks sooo much.... you're embarrassing me 😳 I do hope it's the same for all my readers

The dance in the rain was truly poetic, but it had to end in a fight..these two..when would they realize hatred is a very strong emotion you can only feel if you cared enough once' aren't you tired of their constant fighting? 😆 i am... j/k... me likes it

You are an amazing writer'I am so proud of you my little sister'tastefully written, the story is gripping and there was never a boring second..awesome..splendid' hayeeeee! thanks so much... you're making me blush.... you're lying about the boring part aren't you because that's not possible... there had to have been at least one part that was dull

But you have to write more and update soon…anxiety is one thing I can't take well..so please..no more suspense…update soon..please… ami jaani... but shomoy nai 😔 I"ll really try my best.... and thanks soooooooooooo much again. You're sweet comments are more than I deserve 🤗 🤗🤗 love you ❤️