pyaar ki nayi roop-FF-updted prt 11 pg 9!

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hi guys hope u like my ff....
vidya is a ordinary girl she lives with her sister shalu and her mom...she lives in delhi and is not tht poor..

sagar is a very stubborn guy and gets watever he wants he is rich and he thinks hes the best...he lives in delhi.

vidya:ma! hum agaye..
v ma:arey vidya itne jaldi agaye rsults kya hei?
vidya: ma hum pass hogaye!!!!
v ma:kya!!!!mubarak ho beta
vidya:shukriya ma mithai lijiye
v ma:shambunath ka lak lak shukar hei k meri beti pass hogayi..ja ye khabar shalu ko sunake aa
vidya:hum abhi jaate hei--------shalu!!!! shalu!!!
shalu:kya hua di results kya hei itne jaldi agaye
vidya:ha shalu wo que zyaada nahi tha lekin achi khabar sun ....hum pass hogaye!!!!
shalu:yay!bingo!!
vidya:ab chal mandir jaana hei shambunath ji k shukar manane
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they go to the temple...and pray
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saagar:hey chinu!!!!!chinu! kaha ho tum
chinu:hum yaha hei dadha plants ko paani de rahe hei
sagar:jaldi aoo tumhe patha heina k aaj hume party mein jaana hei
chinu:kaunsi party dhadha
sagar:lo isse tho yaad hi nahi hei..stupid! hume sahil ki party mein jaana hei ab yaad aya kuch
chinu:o wo sahil aapka dost
sagar:ha wohi ab chalo mom aur dad ko batake chalte hei
chinu:ji chaliye hum tayar hoke aate hei...
sagr:jaldi aana aur dress code black hei
chinu:ok
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vidya:shalu jaldi tayar hojaoo yaad heina aaj meri freind ki party hei
shalu:kya aaj! tikhe lekin aapki kaunsi freind ki party.
vidya:wo jiya heina usski anniverasry wese meine usske pathi ko deka nahi hei aaj tk par aniversay mein dekloongi jiya ne tho bataya ki usska naam kuch..... sahil tha...anyways chao ab
shalu:haan di bas 5 mins.
vidya:ok dress cose black hei yaad rakna
shalu:ok
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sagar:mom,dad hum log ek party mei njarahe hei shaam tak ajayenge
s mom:tikhe beta jaldi aana aur khayal se jaana
sagar,chinu:bye!
s mom,dad:bye bete
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vidya:ma hum log ek party mein jarahe hei shaam tak ajayenge
ma:tikhe jaldi ajana
vidya,shalu:bya ma
ma:bye bete
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sagar:chalo chinu car nikal diya hei
chinu:ok dda
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vidya:chalo shalu gaadi nikal diya hei
shalu:ok di jus cumin
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vidya:arey shalu deko tho zara road pe kitna traffic hei hum late ho rahe hei!!
shalu:didi ap shortcut kyun nahi leleti
vidya:ye acha rahega jus hol on a sec
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sagar: o shit deko tho road pe kitna trafic hei kese jayenge ab hum wese bhi late ho rahge hei
chinu:dada aap shortcut kyun nahi leletey hei
sagar:@haan ye sahi rahega lets go...
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both their cars meet at a spot and crsh!!!!!!!!
vidya:hello xuse me apna gaadi piche lijiye hum yaha pehle ayethe
sagar:xuse me ye aap kya kehrahi hei hum yaha pehle aye tho ab hum hi pehle jayenge
shalu:ei!!!!kya samhajte ho apne aap ko ye khali tum logo ka raasta nahi hei hum bhi istaraf se hi jayenge aur wo bhi ap logo se pehle
chinu:han han! jao dekte hei kaun jeet tha hei aur kaun loser banta hei!
shalu:lets go di!ap hi jeetogey
vidya drives very speedily
so does sagar....
sagar:kya samhajti hei wo apne aapko mujse jeet payegi kya never
vidya:kya samhjta hei wo apne aapko jo humpe hukum chalata hei dejte hei ki hum jeeth the hei ya wo
shalu:aur tez chlao di
chinu:aur tez chalo wo humse aage ja chuki hei dada
sagar:dnt wry chinu!!!!!
vidya:chinta mat karo shalu hum hi jeetenge
crash!!!!!!!!!
sagar:pir!
vidya:shit!!
chinu:arey ye kya hua!
shalu:o no!!!!!!
sagar:shit(he gets outta the car)aap tik hei kya
vidya:(looks at him) ji...im ok thnks
sagar:o sorry! humne tho aapki gaadi kharab kar di
shalu:o no ma bahot chilayegi ab hum kya krey di???
vidya:yahan tho koi mechanic bhi nahi hei..
chinu:o were sorry!!hum mechanic ko lathey hei aap log yaha tehriye
vidya:ji nahi tikhe par aap logog ko dekar chalani chahiye thi
sagar:kaha na were sry!
shalu:haa par!!
vidya: koi baat nahi shalu its gonna b ok wo gaadi k andar meri cell hei cell nikalo
shalu:yes di
vidya:hello reapiring!
re:hello car repair service
vidya:um hi actually our car has broken down and we need some help
re:yes ma'am sure can you give us the address of the road your car has broken down in..
vidya:yes, 55....
re:thnks ma'amm we will be reaching immeaditly
vidya:thnks 4 ur help bye!
re:bye
vidya:(dials another no.on her cell) hello, jiya hum aaj nahi ah payenge
jiya:lekin kyun vidya kya hua
vidya wo humari gaadi rate mein broken wn hogaya hei aur abh imechanics arahe hei tik karne tho happy anniversary and sorry i wont b ther
jiya:but vidya tum meri best freind ho tho kesa lagega agar tum nahi aye thi mein sahil ko bechdoo kya?
vidya was talking on loud speaker and sagr heard it then bfpre she cud say anything he strate dto talk
sagr:sahil! kya aap kisi wedding anniversary men jarahe the
vidya:hum kahi bh i jaye isse aap ko koi taqleef?
sagar:nahi mein isliye puch raha tha kyunki hum bhi ek anniversary mein jarahe the tho if were goin g to the same place then i can drop you
vidya:no its fine thnks mein apni dost jiya ki anniversary mein jarahi thi
sagar:yes yes sahil aur jiya ki recently shaadi hui hei
vidya:maybe were going to the same place but i dont need your help thnks
sagar:ok its upto you...
chinu:dada hume inki madat karni chahiye..
sagar:par ye log manenge nahi na
shalu:no its ok we dont need any help humari gaadi jab tik hojayegi tho hum party mein khud chalehjayenge
vidya:arey jiya is on hold, o sorry jiya
jiya:its ok vidya badi afsos ho rahi hei ki tum nahi arahi ho pls ajao warna tum jaha ho mujse kaho mein gaadi lekar abhi arahi hoon
vidya:nahi its ok jiya
jiya:cmon yaar jus tell me were you are
vidya:55........(she tells address)
jiya:ok ill b there chiil vidya
vidya:thnks par mechanic abhi ajayega tho we have to say here
jiya:ok then vidya baad mein ajana aur muje khabar krte rehna ki gaadi ka hua kya hei aur badme ajana ok rakti hoon
vidya ok bye
jiya:bye
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sagar:im very sorry but i ud like you to cum wid us plz
vidya:humne kaha na we dont want to
sagar:plz ajaye
vidya:nahi
sagar:plz
shalu:didi itna kehraha hei tho mana mat karo wese bhi hum jayenge kese bahot door hei
chinu:pls manjaye
vidya:aap itna kehrahe he tho tikhe par hume mechanic ka intezar karna hoga
re calls!ring ring
vidya:hello,
re:yes maam we have called to let you know tht we cannot provide a service today bcuz there it is INSET but we wikll arrange sumthing tommorw till then can u pls lock your car and leave it there..
vidya:wat r saying u just said tht u will come and fix it i cant jus leave it lying there
shalu:didi chill hum public garage mein chod dete hei
vidya:hello, sorry yes..
re:you can leave it in a public garage if thts no problem but plz make sure to tell us the address of the place where you r leaving it
vidya:yes sure bye
re:bye maam
sagar:o no bahot taqleef hogi aapko m sorry wo paas mein ek garage hei waha choddijiye gaadi
vidya:ok par brakes tho gaye ab dheere s chalana hoge hume chalo shalu
sagar:r u sure to r=take the risk?
vidya:dnt wry we will leave it in a p garage
sagr:we'll wait for you right here
shalu:ok chalo di
vidya drops the car and cumz bk on foot
sagar:chaliye gaadi mein baithiye
vidya:yes chaliye
sagar:chinu tum piche k seat mein jaoo
vidya:nahi hum piche baithenge
sagar:as you wish,chalo chalte hei
sagar drivez and the he keeps getting attracted to vidya and cant stop himself from looking at her and vidya while seewing all this tells shalu
shalu:didi aaj aap bahot achi lagrahi hei na isliye
vidya:shalu tum bhi na ye koi strangr ki gaadi mein hum istarha tik nahi lagraha hei
shalu:dnt wry di jus chill
chinu:dada!!gaadi!!
sagar:o no!
chinu:kya hogaya aapko dada wo gaadi humse crash karne wala tha aapka dhyan kaha hei
vidya:OMG hes so dangerous(she thinks to hereslf)
vidya:wo agar aap ijazat de tho hum chala sakte hei kya
sagar:r u sure
vidya:yes am sure
sagar:ok
she swaps wid sagr and chinu goes near shalu then sagar sits in front wid vidya he tares at he through the whole journey and vidya suddenly gets a call(her ringtone is same as sagars so he thought its his and viya_sagar together put their hand on the phone)
vidya,saagar:sorry!
vidya:its ok actually meri phone thi
sagr:o mera ringtone bhi yehi hei isliye(then he removes his hand fom hers)
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they reach the party...plz leave comments guys

Index: page:

Part 1 1

part 2+3 2

part 4 3

part 5 4

part 6+7 5

part 8 6

part 9   ; 7

part 10 &nbs p; 8

part 11 &nbs p; 9

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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice start... 😃
plz cont soon !

...Narmeen...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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^thnks ill b continuing sumtym 2day lols...
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i Love it plZ continue Sooon<333
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Lovely start! 😳 PlZ continue soon 😳 😊
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thnks!😆i will continue soon

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thnks for all the comments heres part 2…

part 2
everyone gets outta the car then vidya goes looking for sahil and jiya

vidya: shalu chalo
shalu:yes di
sagar:chinu chalo hum sahil ko dunde kar aate hei
chinu:ji dada chaliye
jiya:arey vidya tum agaye
vidya:yes jiya kesi ho
jiya:jus fine thnks tum
vidya:aur kese hona hei tik hi hoon, wese sahil nazar mein nahi arahe
jiya:wo actually usske paas gaye hei (she points to sagr)
vidya:wo, o
jiya:ayo milo sahil se
vidya does not want to go near sagar but bcuz jiya says she still goes to meet sahil
sahil:jiya ye kaun hei
jiya:sahil ye meri dost hei vidya
sahil:o hi viya(they shake hamds)
vidya:hi
sahil:wese jiya tum isse milo ye mera dost hei sagar!
jiya:o hi sagar
sagar:hi jiya(he looks at vidya)
vidya:jiya hum waha chale(as she says this there cumz an announcement)
announcement:'I wud like to call the special couple on stage for a dance …sahil and jiya!!'
jiya:o vidya mein abhi aati hoonwo dance keliye bhulaya hei na
sahil:chalo jiya lets go dance
jiya:yes sahil
only the 4 are there and vidya receives phone call from her mom
v ma:vidya beta kesi ho tum aur shalu tik tho hona
vidya:ji ma hum tik hei aur thodi der mein ghar ajayenge
v ma:ok beta zara shlu ko phone dena usse muje kuch zaroori baat karna hei
vidya:ji ma ye ljiye, shalu tere liye, ma ka phone
shalu:ok(as she talks to her mom she moves away from there and continues talking)
all the girls tell chinu to dance so he too goes from the scene

vidya:hum dekar aate hei ki shalu kya kar rahi hei
sagar:ok
but as she moves her duppata gets stuck to sumthing
vidya:o!
sagar:wo….. aa……..pka duppata……… mere…wo mere…. shirt mein lag gaya
vidya gets tooooooo shoked when she hears this and she dosent know wat to do
vidya:o im reely very sorry(she trys taking it off)ye tho nikal hi nahi raha…..!!!
sagar:mein kashish karta hoon…..(he tries taking it off then it still doesn't wrk)
then jiya cumz bk after dancing..
jiya:sorry vidya wo mein chaligayi tumhe chodkar anywayz ab agayo hoon ab chalo udhar..
vidya:wo…jiya…mein arahi hoon tum chalo
jiya:ok par ajana
vidya:sure
sagar:ab kya kare ye tho nikal ne ka naam hi nahi le raha
vidya:hum pir kashish karte hei..(then she pulls it off and it wrks), whew!! it wrked
sagar:issi baat ka tho afsos hei
vidya:aapne kkuch kaha kya
sagar:nahi tho kyun
vidya:ah no nothing..i thought I herd you..but its ok ill jus go..#
sagar:ok…
chinu and shalu….
chinu:arey kya aapne dada ko kahi dekha
shalu:nahi tho sorry, kya aapne meri sis ko deki
chinu:no I haven't seen her
shalu:hum log ek kaam karte hei aap uss taraf jaakey dundiye unhe aur mein uss taraf dundti hoon
chinu:ye acha rahega par agar aapne unhe deka tho hume patha kese chalega
shalu:ek idea hei aap meri phone no. raklijiye agar wo miljaye tho mein aapko phone karke batati hoon
chinu:ok dijiye…
shalu:haan ye rahi 098687675…
chnu:thnks hum jaatey hei
and he goes so does shalu
ring ring, ring ring!
shalu:arey di ka phone leki nmein unhe dundoo kaha…wo rahi!di vidya di!!!
vidya:kya hua shalu tu kaha gayi thi
shalu:baad mein batai hoon par aapka phone
vidya:o haan, hello
v ma:hello vidya
vidya:ma haan hum hei
v ma:tum log kab arahe ho paach ghante hogaye hei ayr raat bhi ho chuki hei tum log tho shaam ko wapas aane wale the na
vidya:sorry ma hum log abhi arahe hei were redy to cum bk
shalu:we r but… we jus reached here 3 hrs ago..anyways
vidya:shalu chup kar. (she whispers to shalu)…ma ko nahi bataya meine ghari ali baat
shalu:o di sorry
vidya:its ok nw b queit, ji ma
v ma:tikhe ajana bye beta
vidya:bye ma
she hangs up and goes outside-------
vidya:hume chalna chaiye
sagar:par abhi aap log aye hei aur itne jaldi jarahe hei
vidya:wo humari ma ghar mein aklei hei aur hum log jarahe hei thnks for ypur help today and bye
sagar gets a call
s ma:sagar! tum jaldi aao beta
sagar:kyun ma kya hua!
s ma:wo tumhari buaji aye hei 2 ghante pehle tumhe khij rahe hei
sagr:o reely thts great hum log abhi aate hei
sagar is hppy inside bcuz he thinks he can concince vidya to cum wid him
vidya:ok then humari gaari agayi hum chalte hei its been repaired…
sagar:o but its recently been repaired and I think you shudnt tke a risk humare saath chaliye na
vidya:ok par shalu ko humari gadi mein jaana padega….bcus we need to tk the car home
sagar:yes yes chinu ko bechdijiye shalu k saath
vidya:ok …, jao shalu
shalu:ok di aap unke gadi mein ajaye…
vidya:go shlu bye and chinu will b there also so dnt b afraid
shalu:no worries
chinu and shlu get into vidyas car and v and s get into sgars car-----

sgar:which way?
vidya:if you tke the first left and the second right
sagar:ok anyways you sound very sleepy
vidya:haan actually bahot neend arahi hei isliye
sagar:o..
they turn into a silent road and sagar drivz straight as vidya told him..
vidya feels sleepy an she falls asleep on his shoulder as idya head touches him sgar feels his heart beats going xrta extra fast!!

he plays a romantic song

'har taraf rawaaaaa, aap ka hi nasha chug ayi dil ko aapki har ada….'

sagar:wo xuse me vidya..
vidya:ha…haan!!!!!! sorry!
sagar:its ok ab kis taraf
vidya:jus go straight ahead pls
sagar:sure
then thye rwch vidyas home both th cars incluign shalu and chinu then vidya thnks sagar for his help
sagar:its ok ill see ya bye
vidya: bye
v and shalu go into their house and sgar and chini go bk to their house and on the way agar sees vidyas cell (she forgot her cell in his car)
sagar:arey ye tho vidya ki cell hei anyways kya karey ab kal lauta doonga as I now know the way to her house
man hi man mein sagar feels very exited to meet vidya again wid the cell phone xcuse
nxt day……. plz leave comments
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^definetly ill b continuing 2morrow...glad u like it
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hi and thnks 4 all the comments and heres part 3...its not as romantic par in the nxt ff its gonna b filled wid romance os heres part 3 guys

sagar:driver! driver! gadi nikalo muje bahar jaana hei

driver:ji sahb

chin:dada kaha jarahe hei aap itne subhe subhe?

sagar:wo chinu mein vidya ka cell lautane usske ghar jaraha hoon

chinu:o mein chaloo kya(bcuz he wnts to meet shalu)

sagar:tikhe chalo---------

vidya wakes up and remember sher cell thing then shalu tells her tht she got chinus no and hw she got his no. and she informs him

shalu:hello chinuji

chinu:hello shalu

shalu:ji wo meri di ki cell kal aapke dada k gadi mein rehgaya tha..

chinu:o yes hum raaste mein hi hei cell launtane arahe he(sagar interrupts him)

sagar:chinu pooch k vidya kaha hei

shalu hears this and smiles

chinu:ok, shlu vidyaji kaha hei

shalu:kyun(still smiling)

chinu:nahi wo eise hi dada puchrahe the

shalu:DADA puch rehe the oo ok

chinu also smiles and vidya hears their conversation on the phone and blushes…

vidya:shalu tum bhi na has kyun rahe ho

shalu:kuych nahi di wo sagar I aapkeliye puch rahe the

vidya:kya dheere bolo itne or ke kyun bolrahe ho

shalu:anyways thnks chinuji bye

chinu:ok then bye well b there..

v ma:vidya, shalu nashta tayar hogaya hei jaldi niche aoo

vidya, shalu:haan ma hum aate hei thodi der mein

v ma:ye ladkiyan bhi na humesha der karte hei sab kaamo mein uffff!

sgar:chal chinu agaye hum unke ghar

chinu:haan chalo

'ding dong'

v ma:arey kaun aya hei dekti hoon, ji aap kaun

sagar:wo..vidya keliye usska cell

v ma:acha tho aap sagar hei kya

sagar:ji

v ma:arey aye na kal vidya ne hume sab bataya wo gadi wala accident k baare mein , ache time par aye hei aap nashta kar lijiye na humare saath mein vidya aur shalu ko bulati hoon

sagar is sooo exited to meet vidya and chinu is waiting for shalu bcuz hes xited too but to meet shalu…

sagr:ji nahi auntyiji hum nashta karke aye hei bas ye lautane aye the

v ma:arey nahi nahi aapne meri beti ki itni madat ki hei kuch tho lijiye na

sagar:ji nahi tikhe

v ma:acha beta jo apki marzi baithiye mein vidya ko bulati hoon

sagar:ji thnks aunty

v ma:vidya!shalu! jaldi aoo

vidya is wering beautiful skinny jeans and a modern top with a beaded long black necklace ….(shes getting ready to go out so shes all dressed up so is shlu in the same clothes and theyre going college)……to her surprise there stands sagar

v ma goes to the dining room…..

sagar stares at vidya head to toe he thinks she looks soooo gorgous

sagar opens his mouth and stares at her making big eyes..

vidya:hello!hello sagar

sagar:huh..huh huh!!! sorry

vidya:kaha khogaye aap

sagar:o im sorry …aj na…..aap….ap….aaap bahot ache lagrahe hei

vidya:(she blushes) thnk you..(as she sais thnks she moves her hair outta the way into the side of her ears)

chinu:wo shalu ji kaha hei

vidya:wo upar hei wo hum log college ja rahe hei isliye tayar ho rahi hei..

sagar:o lekin aaj tho INSET day hei tho aap logo ka college band nahi hei kya

vidya:actually hum kuch papers chodne jarahe hei

sagar:o kaunse college jaate hein aap

vidya:hum, wo…mukta sahas college

sagar:sach waha tho mein bhi jaata hoon aapko tho nahi deka waha kabhi

vidya:reely! o acha itne saare log hei collge mein tho shayd aapne hume deka nahi

sagar:(he is soo happy to hear this so he can nw meet her everday)o kaunse class mein padte hei aap

vidya:12, aap,

sagar:13

chinu:dada ab hume chalna chahye

sagat:yes ur right

vidya:ok tho aap log humare saath nikal sakte hei we jus getting out, shalu! kaha ho tum deri ho rahi hei jaldi chalo

shalu cumz down and chinu stares at her..

shalu:hi everyone

sagar, chinu:hi shalu!

vidya:tho ab hum logo k mulaqat hogayi hei so r we friends (she put her hand out)

sagar:friends!

will this friendship turn out into luv to see tune into this series and leave cmments

I know this part was boring and not romantic but the nxt parts will b…very romantic including more of SV….

hope u likd it plz leave comments...

Edited by sweet_dreams22 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great work... 👏 👏
Please continue soon..

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