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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hello to all... I was looking back at some things that i wrote and i found this: It is when sumone sed that Sharad is leaving the show,

I replied using this poem and sum people PMed me and told me to turn this into a topic. I never really knew that i was such a good writer! I guess people are rite, if u rite with true emotion, it will always be beautiful! Pleez do reply so I can write some more...hopefully the attitude and the emotion will be different!

I'm saying goodbye to you with tears in my eyes,
but i really do hope u get a chance to recify.

Vidya will be sitting there with a broken heart,
while u stay there watching and being apart.

Come on give her a chance you've only given her sorrows,
Dimwit, your my target from my bow and arrow.

Ur a heartbreaker and please do come back,
because the only way u can fix this is if u cut us some slack.

We love u and please remember that always,
i think of you all the time, even in the the skewl hallways.

Goodbye, farewell u are making us really sad,
i noe ull cum bak 4 all of us and we will no longer be mad!

DIWIT I ❤️ U!!!!!

The link:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/banoo-main-teri-dulhann/761446/a-poem-regarding-my-feelingzzzzz

Now i decided to make another poem...on how they'll meet!

I wonder how they'll meet,
and if we'll be there to greet.

Will one of them be mad,
and Samraat will be sad?

Your jodi is a treasure,
with that we share a pleasure.

Amar ur gonna be a tapori,
With Divya u make a great jodi!

Divya ur rich and bubbly,
between u & Amar things netta no get ugly!

Now we'll see what happens,
let's see who makes the first attraction!

Hope y'all liked it!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 😊 👏 Great job Dimple..so sweeet..dint knew tht ur a poetess... 😊 God Bless You.. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: set_raj

👏 😊 👏 Great job Dimple..so sweeet..dint knew tht ur a poetess... 😊 God Bless You.. 👏

i didn't noe i was a poetess either!😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: adventure780

awesome job! 😃 keep it coming!

thnk u!

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