A POEM REGARDING MY FEELINGZZZZZ!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I replied using this poem and sum people PMed me and told me to turn this into a topic. I never really knew that i was such a good writer! I guess people are rite, if u rite with true emotion, it will always be beautiful! Pleez do reply so I can write some more...hopefully the attitude and the emotion will be different!

I'm saying goodbye to you with tears in my eyes,
but i really do hope u get a chance to recify.

Vidya will be sitting there with a broken heart,
while u stay there watching and being apart.

Come on give her a chance you've only given her sorrows,
Dimwit, your my target from my bow and arrow.

Ur a heartbreaker and please do come back,
because the only way u can fix this is if u cut us some slack.

We love u and please remember that always,
i think of you all the time, even in the the skewl hallways.

Goodbye, farewell u are making us really sad,
i noe ull cum bak 4 all of us and we will no longer be mad!

DIWIT I โค๏ธ U!!!!!

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nehlove thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice Poem portraying what everyone is feeling about this whole situation.

Good Job!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yeah it's great..... ๐Ÿ˜›
๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ we all can't live without Sagar ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ
hope u write more poems^^
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwwwwww, rlly sweet poem, i especially liked this line:
'i think of you all the time, even in the the skewl hallways.'
very cute and so SO SO true! lol sadly.. well not rlly, loll
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it was funny at some parts ๐Ÿ˜† ..but i seriously think you did a great job in this poem ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ and please post more ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜‰ ..they are just fantasic!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ i love them!! ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

Mrs. Malhotra ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lolo600

awwwwwwwwww, rlly sweet poem, i especially liked this line:
'i think of you all the time, even in the the skewl hallways.'
very cute and so SO SO true! lol sadly.. well not rlly, loll

Awwww... LOL!...Ur soooooo sweet!

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