FF: Fire and Ice Ch14 pg 27 (14/01) - Page 9

Great job yaar! I just skimmed through in a hurry at first and thought something really happened. 😆

You're good are writing! 😳

Originally posted by: jaanamjaan

Chevi..Awesome update! 😊 Thanx!

I loved it...loved it that they went to see Om Shanti Om 😉...how cute that their drinks got swapped...you're doing a great job 👏 ...keep it up...and plz cont soon! And give us more cute SV scenes 😊

Ya I just cos that movie as I really like it n its 1 of my fav movies. Ya had 2 make a cute SV scene so I just thought I shud swap the drinks.

Thanx, I'll cont. asap!

And yes more SV cute scenes r cumin. I can guarantee u dat!

Thanx 4 da comment,

Chevarra

Originally posted by: pinkpinkers

Thnx 4 d update....SINDURA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😡

No problem-o! Ya Sindura!!!!!!!!!!!!!! She has 2 cum kyon ki apun ke shere mein yeh sab se baara villain hein! ... lol😆

Thanx 4 da comment,

Chevarra

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

great update! Sindoora will create trouble I am sure! 😃

Thanx. Well u'll just have 2 read on 2 find out.

Thanx 4 da comment,

Chevarra

Originally posted by: armulover

tht was really good....yahan pe bhi sindoora? pls pls keep her away from their love life ok...pweezzzzzz... 😛 😳

Thanx. Hanh, yahaan pe bhi Sindura! I'll try but she is the villain😉

Thanx 4 da comment,

Chevarra

tht was really good. plz plz plz cont soon

Originally posted by: Nancy_89

It was too good to be true, why has Sin to come? This is going great with her...
How did they notice they had swapped the drinks? I don't think there's difference between coke and pepsi. 😕 😆
Excellent part 👏 👏

Well in evry story there has 2 be a villain. Ya its gr8! Well I know the difference, its Pepsi which is sweeter than coke. Thanx 4 da compliment!

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Chevarra

Originally posted by: ramsha1990

awesome plz continue

Thanx n I will cont. soon!

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Chevarra

Originally posted by: noodles

Aww that was cute! 😳 Great job! 👏

Haha yea Nancy, I was also wondering how they noticed that the drinks were swapped. 😆 Hehe

Cant wait to see which other SV scene you have! 😃

Thanx so much! You know it makes me so happy to read all da comments on my work! As I sed I feel Pepsi is sweeter than Coke so I can tell the diff. Oh ya SV cute scenes are going to cum!

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Chevarra

Originally posted by: afzeel

awwww chevi that was so cute today plz write more romantice stories

Thanx n ya I'm planning to start another FF soon!

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Chevarra