Vidya & her honeymoon FF (8th upda pg 9

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HEY GUYS SCROLL DOWN PAGE 9AND YOU WILL FIND EIGHTH PART OF THIS FF .....Thanks guys for responding.....

Sindoora in her room

Hello thume pata hai ki thume kya karna hai.......Sagar ko phone karna aur khana ke factoy me kutch ho gaya hai......

Gunda:- ji sindoora ji aap jaisa chati hai vaisa he hoga.

..Sindoora:- Theek hai me phone rakhti hu, lagta hai Sagar aa gaya/

Sagar and Vidya both come home from the hospital.

Sindoora:- Kya baat hai bahut time laga diya?

Sagar:- ha bas trafic bahut tha

Sindoora:- To doc ne kya kha?

Sagar:- Kutch nai bas vidya ko bola hai ki aaram kara kare

Sindoora:- ha vo to hum be isey khate hai( Sagar vo to tume aab pata chale ga)

Sindoora:- chalo tum vidya ko apne kamere me le jayoo

Sagar:- ji di

Vidya:- bye di

Sindoora:- bye ( in her mind she says... aab to thume bye apne life se karne hogi)

As he was taking her to his room he gets a phone call..... its that same gunda hired by sindoora

Gunda:- sir me aap ke kaam se bol raha hu, yaha koi panga ho gaya hai aap please jaldi aa jayee

Sagar:- theek hai me abhi ata hu...

Sagar tells vidya that something happened at work and he has to go..

Vidya looks so tensed and says:- apna khayal rahna aur phone karna

Sagar:- di kya aap vidya ka khayal rakh sakte ho kutch deer ke liyea

Sindoora:- Ofcource sagar

Sindoora then takes vidya to her room. Sindoora has already made a plan to send everyone somewhere....She has sent shalu and chinu for a movie, sagar's mom and bua to jagaran and chandra and mauha and harsh for some stupid concert.....lol

As Sagar was driving he gets a call from his private dectetive and he says

Mr X:- Mr Sagar, I have a good news for you, I have found out who the actual culprit is and you have to come near bla bla place and i will tell you everything

Sagar:- Buh there is a emergency in my office and i have to go there first

MrX:- well, that is what i have to say.... it was all lie move you from your house

Sagar:- what

MrX:- ya

Sagar:- I am on my way

sagar finally reaches that place where his dect is and they both started talking

MrX:- Sagar with full proof , I came to this conclusion that Your di. Mrs Sindoora pratap singh is behind all this

Sagar:- looks devestated

On other hand

Sindoora closes the light and makes a noise

ah ah ah.......vidya

Vidya:- di light nai hai aap kha hai

Sindoora:- vidya mere par ko na jane kya ho gaya hai bahut dard kar reha hai

Sindoora:- lagta hai moch aa gayee hai

Vidya di aap kha ho

Sindoora:- me yaha par

Vidya goes near the stairecase where sindoora has already pore oil

Vidya:- ek min di hum abhi mombati lek kar aate hai

Sindoora:- ah ah vidya

Vidya withouthing thinking twice she goes down aur us ka paar fisal jata hai she falls down from 3 staires to all the way down aur bahoish ho jati hai.

Sindoora:- ha kya baat hai, aur vaisay be sagar ko lage ga ke vidya ne jaan ke aisa kiya hai. Sagar ne vidya ko kaam se mana kiya that aur pir be vidya ne kaam kiya

Sindoora:- now before anyone else comes in let me wipe out all the oil....

Sindoora cleans oil and she leaves towards her room leaving vidya in the most painful way.

to be cont in next ff

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Ayushi

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loverocks! thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it was wondeful ! WOW ! vidya falls down ! what about the baby ? please continue , can't wait for the other oen ! you made two in day . 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ continue!!! plz plz!!! its sooo good!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg ur good plzzz update soon 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks guys,
Now let me write another FF. Actually, i have 10 pages essay due on monday and i couldnt concentrate......so thought to write this.....

I am glad that you guys liked second ff


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Posted: 17 years ago
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SECOND PART

Actually, I am also as interested as you guys are in my own FF. 😆 well here we go for another

Precap:- sagar and detective are talking and vidya falls from the stairs

Mr.X:- Sagar ji, i have proof of that

Sagar:- I trust my di

and focus now shift from sagar's side to Sagar's house.....

in Sagar's house.....................

Sindoora goes to back of her house and turn the switch on. Then she goes to her room and calls sagar.

Sindoora:- Sagar.........Sagar....vo.....vo.....Vidyaaaaaaa

Sagar:- kya hua di sab theek to hai

Sindoora:- vo ....vidyaaaaaa

Sagar:- di kya hua vidya ko

Sindoora:- vidya seedi se fisal gayee hai

Sagar's expression like he is about to get a heatattack..........

Sagar:- di aap wahi ruhke me abhi ata hu

Mr X:- kya hua Sagar ji

Sagar:- Vidya fall from staires and.......

Mr.X.:- here are the proofs

Sagar:- ingnores the detective and sits in his car......he is driving way to fast. it seems like he is gonna get into accident. buh he manages and goes to his house as soon as possible.

sagar finally reaches home

Sagar:- di vidya......oh my god vidya

Sindoora:- sagar i told her not to do work buh she wouldnt listen to me

Sagar:- di jaldi se ambulance ko bula do

Sindoora:- of course sagar

Sagar and Sindoora takes vidya to the hospital......as they move in doctors tell them to wait outside the ICU and the red light is on

tic tick tic tick.......clock's minutes are passing by

Soon everyone from the house come in and join Sagar ........

Sagar sitting and crying and bua ji concoles him saying that nothing will happen to vidya

Bua ji:- kyu sindoora vidya ko kya hua?????

Sindoora:- Bua ji vidya to vo bas fisal gayee........

Buaji:- her eyebrows in very wierd way😡

Soon doc comes out.........

Sagar:- doc sahab vo vidya.........

Doc:- pauses for a min

Doc:- ummm......I am sorry...........

Sagar:- kya matlab and he is about to fall but bua ji holds him

Doc:- I am sorry but you have to choose between youf baby and vidya

Sagar:- nai i want both of them

DOc:- dekhyea me aap ke jasbad ko smajta hu par hamare pas waqt bahut kam hai

Doc:- agar aap faisala koi jaldi kar le to hum koishish kar sakte hai

Sagar:- doc me aap ke pawoo pardta hu ki app mere hone wale bache ko aur mere patni ko bacha lo

Doc:- theek hai Mr Sagar aap in papers par sign kar do

Sagar:- with lots of courage signs these papers

Doc:- aap 13 lakh reception par jama kar va de to hum operation suru kar de.

Sagar:- Doc u just do your work and dont think about money...

Now everyone sits outside the operation theater.

Lights on

Sagar crying😭 and crying and on the other hand sindoora is happy. just then nurse comes in and says that they would have to go and pay the fees now

Sindoora:- in her mind( if i tell them that i will get their money from house, and dont come for a while......aur vaisey be doc ne kha hai ki he can only perform the operation when we pays his fees to bas) aur is tara se mere raste ka kanta ha ha ha..........

Sindoora:- sagar tum chinta kyu karte ho me abhi jaati hu aur money lati hu....tum vidya ke paar rehaoo

Sagar:- hugs his di and then says di kya vidya to achi ho jayge

well then sindoora leaves .........

SOrry guys I am sleepy now will continue soon

Leave your comments as they make me going and also SORRY FOR ANY MISTAKES.

Ayushi

Edited by Ayushi_01 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow yaar plz continue i was having fun yaar
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plz continue and Post a new topic each time when you right a ff , because then some members don't know you started a fanfic and they just wait and wait . Thankx , Sindoora is really evil !!!! So who does Sagar pick ? Thankx Ayushi 😊

Sahar
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Posted: 17 years ago
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please continue!! you re good!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Here we go again for another FF. SOrry guys i had 10 pages essay due so couldnt do the the update......

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