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Posted: 17 years ago
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He guys I had writen a few separate FFs earlier and then I got busy but now that I have the time I thought I'll continue. I hope you guys like it!

Episode # 1 ( I posted this before, just a recap)

It's the evening time, the Singh house is empty, except Vidya who has just come out of the shower. Sagar just returned from work is standing in the corner looking through some files, when his eyes fall upon her. He watches her as she dries her hair, with a look that says, oh my god she looks so beautiful. She stands in front of the mirror and is putting on her magalsutra and when it gets tangled in her hair. She is trying to take it out when she feels a hand. She gets scared and turns around turns around, and it's sagar. he says, " chodo mein karta hoon" They are both standing in front of the mirror, she's looking at him, he's looking at her, really cute eye lock session. Mangalsutra finally comes loose and thier eye contact breaks.

Vidya in Vidya style starts to go away, and sagar grabs her hand, she turns around and he pulls her close, and puts his arm around her. He says, "Vidya it's not fair", she looks at him questioningly. Then he says, "ki koyi itna bhi kubsoorat ho sakta hai", she lowers her head all shyly. He lifts her face with his hand, "ji chahta hai, ki raat din tumhare is chehre ko dekhta rahoon, In ankhon mein khoya rahoon. Aur bas…" All of a sudden there is thunder, it looks like it is about to rain, Vidya remembers that the clothes are hanging outside, she says "kapde! hum..hum abhi aate hain" and she runs upstairs to get them. Sagar yells her name and runs up after her, and follows her to the terrace. the wind is blowing hard, and Vidya is pulling all the clothes from the line and sagar goes and he yells "vidya suno to!" She is completely ignoring him, when he screams, "Vidya, I love you.."

She stops, she turns around, he come closer and he says,softly but passionately, "I love you.." she is just staring at him, with a pyaar bhara look, speechless He goes on and says "Vidya, tumne hamesha, mera saath diya hai. Har bala se mujhe bachaya hai. Vidya tumhi woh shaks ho jisne mujhe pyar karna sikhya, pyar ka asli matlab sikhaya, aur agar aaj main yahan hoon toh sirf tumhari vajah se. Aur aaj main tumse ek saval karna chahta hoon. Aisa sawal jo mujhe tumse bohut pehle karna chahiye tha." Vidya says, in a very low void "woh kya?" He bends down on one knee, he says "Vidya kya tum mujse shaadi karogi? Kya tum meri jeevan saathi, meri dulhann banoogi?" Vidya as usual starts bahaoing aanso, and says, "yeh kaisa sawal hai?" he says "Vidya kaho na! kya tum apni zindagi mere saath baatogi" she nods.

Sagar smiles, gets up and holds her in his arms and kisses her cheek (I know I wish it wasn't her cheek but kya kareen india soap hai!) And then they hug, all of a sudden it starts pouring, they continue their hug, then finally they break loose sagar says passionately, "Vidya...", Vidya says "hun?" then his voice changes to playful, "mein tumhare bare mein toh nahi janta, leking mujhe bohut thand lag rahi hai." Vidya laughs and she says,"chaliye andar chalte hain" sagar says, "aur kapre" Vidya smiles and says, "Kapde toh ab bhig gaye!" They both laugh hold hands and and go inside.

Episode 2

Episode begins with Vidya and Sagar in room.

Vidya is wiping herself down with a towel and Sagar as usually staring at her. Just then she looks up and sees that he is just standing there, and says "are aap abhi tak yahin khade hain? Aapko thand lag jayegi! Chaliye apna sar pochiye." With this she grabs a towel and starts to wipe his hair, just the way she used to before. She is smiling thinking about how happy sagar would get everytime she would wipe his head. Then thought turns back to the time, soon after he recovered, how he had yelled at her when she tried to wipe his hair, and her eyes turn moist. Sagar meanwhile is blissfully smiling and completely enjoying the moment.

Just then he looks at her and sees her lost in thought, so he smiles naughtily and takes his hand and lightly tickles her waist, she jumps, and looks up at him. He says softly, "Vidya kahan kho gayi thi?" She turns her head slightly to the right, and says, "woh kuch nahin…" she then looks at him again and says slightly authoritatively, "aap andar jake apne kapde badal li jiye. Chaliye!" with this she hands him the towel and some clothes, and gives him a slight nudge, just then he holds her arm and looks into her eyes, our hero is feeling super romantic, and he naughtily tells her "Vidya..." then he looks down with a slightly shy slightly naughty smile, Vidya seeing this, asks him sweetly, "ab kya hua?", he looks up then continues, "jaane se pehle, mujhe ek kiss dedo na", Vidya starts to blush and tries to run away, "aap humein chodiye, dekhiye hum keh rahe hain aap bimar pad jayenge". Sagar is adamant though and holds her even more tightly, "Nahin! pehle ek kiss!" He closes his eyes and pouts his lips, she gives him a quick peck on his cheek and runs away. Sagar opens his eyes, and shakes his head smiles, and goes into the bathroom.

Vidya all dried up and changed, comes back into the room, and sees sagar sitting by the window in his white kurta pajama, strumming his guitar, with that killer smile on his face. His face is illuminated with the soft moonlight, and a mild wind si blowing hsi hair. She looks at him with eyes that are oozing with love, and happiness. She keeps hearing him say "I love you." All of a sudden she hears a loud "achoo!" She runs toward Sagar concerned, "aap… apko lagta hai sardi ho gayi hai, hum aapko bol rahe the na ki...aab woh" She is mumbling, and looks like an adorable helpless little puppy. Sagar is just smiling with amusement, and she gets a little agitated, "aap has rahe hain! chaliye, hum aapke liye dawa le kar aate hai."

Sagar has put down his guitar at this point and as she is about to leave, he pulls her down and she lands in his lap. He holds her tightly, and says softly, "Vidya tum bohut hi cute ho!"She further gets annoyed, "yeh aap kya kar rahe hain, dekhiye aap bimar ho jayenge" Sagar says "shhhhh" Vidya stops mid sentence, and looks into his eyes, they are looking intensely into each other's eyes, completely oblivious to the rest of the world. Sagar put one hand on her face and pulls it close, they lean in toward each other still looking deep into each other's eyes. Their lips are on the verge of touching... , all of a sudden we hear sindoora's manhoos voice call out saagar's name. Both of them get startled and Sagar whispers, "Di" Vidya quickly tries to get up when her kangan gets stuck on his shirt, and they are furiously trying to get it loose when in walks Sin, Immediately she sees them and says "oh sorry!" The kangan comes loose and both SV jump up, and are blushing like crazy, Sindoora looks annoyed, and her fake annoying voice says, "Mein ..mein baad mein aati hoon"

Sagar much to Vidya's disappointment yells, "Nahin di, hum toh aise hi…aap ko kuch kehna tha?" Sindoora most shamelessly says, "who mujhe kuch papers sign karvane the, lekin tum tooh pehle se hi buzy ho." SV are completely crimson at this point, Sagar then says firmly, "Nahi di chaliye." Leaving Vidya standing by the window.

It's not spectacular but I tried! Hope you guys like it!

Megha

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Posted: 17 years ago
#2
I like the kangaan part..very cute...Sindura probably is jealous!! 😆 😆
Good job yaar...really cute and romantic....specially with the mood in BMTD right now...perfect synergy..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That Sindura besharam, kabhie nahi bdle gi 😆
She cannot leave Sagar & Vidya alone for like 2 secounds can she?????
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Posted: 17 years ago
#4
thank you guys, I appreciate the comments!
I know the second part is a little boring I'll try to make next epi better!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thats really gd wen update soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwww plz continue 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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errrrrrrrr sindoora 😡 she cant let them have some time ALONE.... the scence was so intense n sweet 😳 😳
i just loved it
i love ur style of writing
thnaks
n plz plz plz plz
write espi..3 soon

rabiah
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank you sooo much guys! I will definitely try my best to come up with a new epi!!

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